Battle Through the Heavens: I Received My Own Suicide Note from the Start

I feel that the writing of this book is okay, at least there are no poisonous points in logic, it has its own framework, and it does not lick Xiaoyan nor deliberately target it (the protagonist I saw before was inexplicably hostile to Xiaoyan, which poisoned me to death). Overall, it is a good Dou Po fan!

I saw some book friends saying that the author's plot has been watery recently, let me tell you my opinion. I started to get into novels in 12 years old. I accidentally opened a novel on my mother's mobile phone reader and I was addicted to it. I still remember the first novel I got into - Peerless Martial God At that time, because I was still in junior high school, mobile phones and computers were strictly prohibited at home. Every night, I would wait for my mother to fall asleep and secretly take my phone and hide under the quilt to read it for several hours. At that time, I especially liked reading fantasy novels, especially Tudou's. Dou Po was the second book I read. Later I read more and more, and became more and more picky about the quality of the books. Basically, I couldn't find one for a long time, so I had to read the books I had read before, and then I found that the plots that I thought were very passionate and exciting now seem a little middle-of-the-road, but like Tudou, Wangyu and others, the novels written by them are no longer After reading it back, I can still read it The author's Dou Po fan fiction is logically reasonable among the few I have read, the characters have normal IQs, and the plot description is very touching to me. I really like it. I feel that the author has too little sense of water. I finished reading it in three days, and I still feel that it is not enough. The first time I wrote such a long book review, it took me more than ten minutes to write it. I think the author is very impressive for being able to write such a long book. I hope the author will continue writing in this style, and I will continue to follow it.

A lot of Dou Po novels require Xiao Xun'er, and after doing so, the protagonist can be a good brother. Do you think it's strange? If it were you, you would have a girlfriend that you have had since childhood, and she would never leave you and be devoted to you even in the most difficult times. If you suddenly and out of nowhere become close to a friend of yours, and after you get better, and become good friends with you, that is not a disease. So in my personal opinion, Xiao Xun'er's words are not impossible, but you have to move the timeline forward, and the protagonist's time period and plot cannot be developed unless you force it. In that case, I can only wish the author to write better and better Is it worse to be friends with Xiao Yan? It is better than being friends with Tang San. The person's character and later development are all there. I've read many comments saying that being friends with the protagonist means being a dog-licker, but there's a difference between being a dog-licker and being a friend. My personal opinion is that being a dog-licker is mindless, while friends are about helping each other and working together for a win-win situation.

First of all, I haven't read this book yet, I just came in here to post In my opinion, when writing a fanfic, you must first clarify one point of view, which is the protagonist. I mean the original protagonist is a dynamite bag, and the relationship is better. Some people say licking, some almost say abuse, no matter what, some people criticize, so first make it clear whether you are with the protagonist, or you are on your own. The second point is Yao Lao. I have seen many fights. Fans, one thing that most fandoms have in common is that they worship Yao Lao as their teacher, but the original protagonist worships Yao Lao as his teacher because Yao Lao made a mistake in the first place and ate people's vindictiveness for three years, so he agreed to become his teacher. What should the protagonist do? So Yao Lao is actually inappropriate to become his teacher. Then there is the heroine, first of all Gu Xun'er. The reason why he and the original protagonist are able to be together is because the original protagonist went to give people to people every day and midnight when he was three or two years old. Warm and nourish the meridians. Only if you continue to have feelings like this, and I think the original work is also about a chaste and fierce woman who cannot find you halfway, forget this. Then there is Ya Fei. The original work of this girl is very scheming. If you are starting a harem, I do not recommend adding her, it may make your harem uneasy. Then there is Yun Yun and Medusa. These two people share a problem. If they grow up with the power Yun Yun is fine, but whether Medusa favors the snake people or you will deviate from the character. Yun Yun also has a problem. Nalan Yanran, if you want to accept Lan Yanran, how to deal with the conflict between them is your key. Otherwise, it is very likely to be a poisonous point. The remaining heroine is not a big problem. There is also the last question, what does the protagonist practice?

I haven't seen the paid chapters yet, but I have read more than 40 chapters. The plot is reasonable and the supporting characters are not outwitted. It can be regarded as the fairy grass in Dou Po fan fiction. It's just that the author has some problems with the order of sentences. Please check carefully when sending it out. It's all ordered. I hope the author will continue to write like this.

The comic version of Yun Yun is really pretty

Alas, the writing is actually quite good, and it's pretty good among Dou Po fandoms, but as soon as I saw the Little Medical Fairy appear, I felt like giving up. The main character is always flirting with other people. I'm not saying that I'm not allowed to find girls, I just feel like I let myself go as soon as I see a beautiful woman, and my loser mentality is revealed. Just like Qin Shi and others, no matter how the protagonist starts the game, he will become a bitch when he encounters Yan Lingji or Jing Salamander.

After reading this book, I suggest you read Dou Po again. This book just changed the protagonist and copied the rest.

Xiao Yan is a real genius. Tudou said that Xiao Yan's talent is not top-notch, which refers to hardware talent (physical constitution + soul power talent), but Xiao Yan's software talent (mainly refers to brain and comprehension talent (learning ability and creativity), refining talent, and mentality adjustment talent (what Tudou himself said in the chapter of Fighting the Ancient Demon) , although I don't understand why this is called talent)) Invincible, software talent is reflected as follows: In terms of learning ability, Xiao Yan quickly learned and practiced the fighting skills that others had to learn for several years. The most typical example is that it took him so many years to practice the Three Thousand Thunder Phantom Body before he became famous. Let's look at Xiao Yan again; in terms of creativity, Xiao Yan has nothing that other fighters have created of their own. Yan Dou Master created his own fire lotus and went his own way; his talent in refining medicine is top-notch in the world. He refined medicine at the age of 16 and reached the peak of the fourth level at the age of 17. Eight years after Yao Lao left, he studied by himself and mastered what Yao Lao had learned all his life and rose to the eighth level. The key point is that Xiao Yan's refining medicine is just a side job. He spends most of his time fighting and running around. , Refining medicine and just sharpening a gun in battle can improve it so quickly. This brain is simply amazing; of course, there is no medicine old Xiao Yan who would stop fighting kings and kings. This is normal, because although Xiao Yan has a good brain, strong understanding and talent, and is at the top of the Tudou universe, he is not strong enough to understand the truth of everything he sees like the ruthless emperor in "Shading the Sky". Create your own skills to achieve the point of breaking the monopoly of resources from scratch, from 0 to 1. Xiao Yan is still limited by resources, and his character is not good in the early stage. If he does not meet Yao Lao, he will only waste his peerless talent, and his understanding talent will not be explored. He is like a Tsinghua University Peking University seedling, you let him be born in a remote mountain valley If he does not have access to good educational resources or even textbooks, he may only be able to get an ordinary undergraduate degree. For example, if he is born in a poor peasant family in an era when book resources and knowledge were monopolized by aristocratic families (such as the Han Dynasty), he will be a commoner all his life. In the age of society, if he has the opportunity to come into contact with book knowledge, he will soar into the sky. Yao Lao is Xiao Yan's guide. Only after discovering Xiao Yan's diamond, Xiao Yan has the opportunity to convert his talent into strength; in the sports world, talent determines your upper limit. Without talent, it is useless to practice until you vomit, even if you practice until you vomit blood. Effort is the process of turning talent into strength. Bolt is an example. Top talent + top effort. Everyone basically ignores Xiao Yan's software talent. Now think about Xiao Yan's comprehensive talent. It is really abnormal. If Xiao Yan's success as emperor is not due to luck, then is it too much to say that the century-old dominance is still attributed to luck? A bunch of big guys in the world have been stuck in the late stage of the Holy Grade for who knows how many years. The so-called divine bloodline is nothing compared to them. In this way, comparing the divine bloodline with Xiao Yan's talent is an insult to Xiao Yan; in addition, don't many people like to say that Xiao Yan relies on medicine and resources? First, are these resources really much more than those of the Imperial Clan? Second, think about it, did Xiao Yan get those resources as a rice bug like the genius of the Imperial Clan, or did he earn them himself? Xiao Yan is an alchemist, the top productivity in Dou Qi Continent, and has the ability to create value. Xiao Yan refines many elixirs by himself, and many resources are obtained by relying on his alchemy skills to create value for others. In the Tianshan Blood Pool, he used alchemy skills to cure diseases with gold and stone in exchange for the best resources, and he used them to create value for his ancestors. The full version of the Three Mysterious Transformations of Heavenly Fire was obtained by refining medicine for Burning Flame Valley. His medicine refining skills allow him to create value for others, trade to obtain resources, improve himself and his relatives and friends, and use them to build forces. In this way, he can also be criticized by others for relying on resources. How can you make those rice bugs of the ancient race feel embarrassed? I know that many people like to belittle Xiao Yan's talent because they want to say that Xiao Yan is just an ordinary person on earth. Don't you know that after three days of separation, he should be treated with admiration? You know the allusion of Wu Xia Amon, some people can only realize their talents in a specific environment and the right field. If the football king Messi was born in China, which factory might he be turning screws in now? Many people want to be Xiao Yan, and try every means to convince themselves that Xiao Yan's talent is generally just good luck and perseverance, so he reaches the top and experiences the feeling of a counterattack, right? I was like this when I was a kid. Now that I have played the game many times and grown up, I realize that I was terribly wrong. I ignored Xiao Yan's software talent, his brain and understanding talent, although they are nothing compared to the ruthless emperor in "Zhetian" (the ruthless emperor was born in a waste body, and his cultivation is better than ordinary people). It is countless times more difficult to pass the test, but with full brains and understanding), but in the Tudou Universe, it is really top-notch. There are three people in Douqi Continent who can compete with Xiao Yan in software talent, Huang Quan, Jinglian and Xiao Xuan, especially Huang Quan, who does not have the Dou Emperor bloodline to reach the Half Emperor (the bloodline begins to mutate), Xiao Xuan gathers them all The half-emperors who have the blood of the whole clan, Emperor Soul and Gu Yuan have the blood of Dou Emperor and the resources of the entire clan have only been at the peak of nine stars for thousands of years. These three people are also talented in software, but they cannot refine medicine and do not have the ability to create value like Xiao Yan. Sometimes creating value is much more useful than fighting. This can be achieved The ability to directly contribute and benefit everyone. Now that I think about Xiao Yan's software talent, we are not allowed to compete with Xiao Yan. It's just like we can't compete with people like Newton, Maxwell, Einstein, and Bohr. In a word: we don't have the brains.

What does this book say? In the early stage, it was always said that the protagonist knew the original work, but later on, all the basic adventures in the cave were taken away by others. The resources you have belong to you, and the resources of others are always given to you by others. What others give, you have to pay back, okay? You just want the protagonist to rely on the royal family, right? I had a good opportunity to become financially independent, but I missed it. I really don't know why the author likes to treat people like dogs so much. Whether it's the royal family's life-saving grace or parenting grace, wait until you are strong enough to repay the favor. It is obviously impossible for the protagonist to wander around the northwest continent all the time. He will go to Zhongzhou sooner or later. However, the protagonist is still weak and has the opportunity to become stronger. You missed the opportunity to become stronger. You also said that other residual pictures are useless and cannot be saved. What do those people say? Why can't you take this residual map? As long as you don't talk nonsense, who knows you have residual pictures, and there is no GPS positioning system on them. Moreover, it is said that the collection of remaining pictures is incomplete, so what can I say? Anyone who has read the original work will know where these 4 residual pictures are, so just take your time to find them. Now it's good, many family members know about it. In the later stage, the silence will definitely become more and more thorough. Will they be given to them at that time? Some people told me to lick the dog, but I didn't tell two people to start a fight and then spray all kinds of things. I accepted it. I can't stand this book anymore. I'll see you guys by chance.