I Stumbled Upon My Master's Secret, Then Muscled My Way to Immortal Emperor

Many people are talking about the issue of the second senior sister. Let me spoil it in advance. Bai Weiming was the princess of the previous dynasty, and her relatives were killed by Ji Guang's father. She was using Ji Guang to plan the restoration of the country from the beginning. She had no feelings for him, only hatred, so there was no ntr behavior.

It's pretty cool to be able to write such a stupid, scumbag and irresponsible protagonist👍🏻

The portrayal of the female characters is okay, but the IQ of the protagonist can be appropriately improved. He is always said to be a powerful immortal emperor, but his performance is like a fledgling boy. Also, I agree with another book friend. Don't keep writing plots where you can't die. You can just go with the flow. If you can die, it's good. If you don't, just go on like this.

In recent chapters, I would like to give some suggestions to the author. I saw some chapter reviews and book reviews written about ntr which caused discomfort. The main reason for the discomfort may be that the protagonist and the senior brother have no conflict of interest. Judging from the previous plot, they even take care of the protagonist. This leads to the sudden ntr big brother, which makes the protagonist give readers a bad impression. If it can be changed, it would be better to change it. Either write in the front that the senior brother hates the protagonist and there is a conflict of interest between the two parties, or polish this part of the plot. If it doesn't work, you can write less of the part describing the senior brother, so that there won't be so much interaction between the senior brother and the protagonist. After all, this is still Seven Points, not a pornographic network, and the protagonist is not a villain.

It's hard to describe this protagonist... He has no IQ and no brains.

Bai Weiming, the heroine, can only say that the author is young and ill. He insists on writing this kind of plot even though he knows that readers don't like it. If you don't pounce on it, who will pounce on it?

Let's talk about it again. I really stopped reading Bai Weiming's book, but later because of the shortage of books, I was unwilling to give up this kind of high-quality book source, and then I read it again. This previous setting should have been mentioned earlier, this should have been paved earlier, and the content was connected. This book would be invincible. I feel that it is a top-A book, but now it can only be rated as top-B.

This is written as if it were written more than ten or twenty years ago, but the author has just come to shore and his style has not yet changed.

After reading the introduction, I felt that Da Neng was being plotted. The unknown existence felt that Da Neng might threaten him if he broke through again, so he pushed the protagonist to become the Immortal Emperor. However, the protagonist is incomplete, which means that the protagonist cannot cultivate to perfection. Similarly, Da Neng is incomplete without the protagonist. Nor can it be perfect. This will eliminate the threat.

You can write it. , But if you really die, I feel that this book will have a different breakthrough, and it will probably become popular.