The Xiuxian Maiden Is Very Innocent

This is the only article that after spending money to purchase the full text, I was left with most of it and couldn't stand it. I spent more than 70 yuan on the entire article, and it was really just two words. It was so rubbish that I logged into my account to complain! ! From now on, I won't spend money to read articles anymore. You can also delete this app. I'm not willing to spend money to read articles. It's embarrassing to write such rubbish.

The author's writing style is very good. The heroine's character is very realistic, and she doesn't have that silly and sweet feeling. I like it very much.

Why do you always write [get] where [of] should be written? It greatly affects the reading experience! This question has appeared in dozens of chapters, and it is really difficult to understand. I liked your previous book Tianhu on Immortal Cultivation, so I am looking forward to this one, but I have to say that the level of this one seems to have dropped a lot. Regardless of the plot of the story, the frequent typos and unclear sentences make people feel that the author's writing attitude is not serious enough and unfair and disrespectful to the readers. With 4,000 words a day, can't I really take 20 minutes to reread it before posting?

Don't you, the author, read the comments and fix the bugs? The heroine sometimes goes by this name and sometimes that name.

The author should read his own article again. Some of the sentences are not fluent, and some of the meanings do not match.

The author's heart is too small, the depiction of immortality is serious, and the writing cannot be more exciting. This is a big problem as a whole. The other problem is that there is no character design at all. There is no reason for the villain to be evil. For example, the heroine is targeting the original heroine in the early stage. It feels like a child playing house to me. Why target the original heroine? What did the original heroine do to him? If it is to fight for opportunities, then you have to write about the way of heaven. As a result, people who are transformed by the way of heaven are everywhere. It is too stingy overall. It is not difficult to be advanced. The advanced ones can trick people into it. I suggest you read more male videos about cultivating immortals.

After reading some of them, I roughly found that only the first hundred chapters are the real plot of the book. They are purely about: after the heroine is reborn, how to use the foreknowledge of the plot to seize opportunities with the original heroine, and dig holes for the heroine by the way! Basically all the time, I am either grabbing an opportunity or on the way to it! As for cultivation, of course you have the "destiny" to drink enough water. From building a foundation to becoming a king, it is just a matter of a few words! It's just that until the heroine suddenly entered the upper world next to the hero, she didn't understand how the cultivation levels in this book were divided. Moreover, there were still a lot of holes in Qianyun Continent that had not been filled in. For example, what were the "non-human bones" brought out from the ancient secret realm? Cangyun Sect regrets and refuses to open the ninth floor of Tianhuo Pavilion. What will happen next? ... And so on. I feel that the author has a great framework, but many plots are missing after being written. I don't know if I forgot to explain them or deleted the plots! Including after entering the upper realm, the plot often feels emasculated. For example, the article said that the palm sky picture was originally pieced together from several pictures. At first, I suspected that I had missed it. In fact, I probably didn't explain it, right? There are even inconsistencies in the plot (which don't match up). For example, the son and direct disciple of the Cangqiong Palace Master is named Situ Lei. The palace lord's first appearance was to use power for personal gain-to prevent the heroine from becoming a direct disciple and clear the way for his idiot son. But after a plot, the son of the palace master suddenly appeared again and became "Meng Changqing". He said that the reason why he became a direct disciple was that he was too strong and deserved the title... I wonder if the author has changed someone! To sum up, I talked about rebirth and seizing opportunities. After entering the upper world, the main task is to fight monsters, upgrade and kill all parties, supplemented by investigating the conspiracy and struggle of life experience! Although the training system is confusing, the plot is occasionally missing or contradictory, many details are dug up and ignored, and there are too many typos... But because the heroine's golden finger is particularly thick, the tone of the whole story is not gloomy or aggrieved at all! Especially after switching to the upper bound map, there are many dungeons, big imagination, magnificent waves, and killing all directions, which is no different from the cool novel of the heroine Long Aotian! Overall, it's a bit hard to describe! If you don't care about details and don't want to use your brain, it's a good way to spend your time!

Has the author considered publishing a physical book? Help

Am I the only one who thinks the heroine is very arrogant? It was good in the early stage, but it got worse and worse later on.

Why does the heroine make enemies everywhere🤔

I read two hundred chapters, but it tastes the same and the sentences are not fluent.

A book that I take for granted is like Jue Wa, I won't read it anymore

It feels like there are still a lot of holes to be filled. Didn't the former master ascend to the throne and become a Bodhisattva? Isn't there any role arrangement? I feel like the plot is incomplete

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I kind of dislike this heroine, I don't know why but I dislike it😒

The heroine is not supposed to be in love, but she is a little bit opinionated, and she really doesn't like the hero. Her need for control is a bit outrageous. Can she be more rational? Regarding the heroine's parents, can't the hero let people make their own decisions? Do they have to revolve around the hero? It's a bit of a provocation. I'm really speechless.

Author, would you like to re-read the article you wrote? Although the content is very good, it ended too hastily.

The author is seriously considering making a spin-off. I'm really curious about the future life of the male and female protagonist, so let's think about it! The author is great😭😭

Hahaha, do you like to read it or not? It's fine if I like it. I think it's good to write. If you don't like to read it, just write it yourself.

Does the age difference have to be so big? He is from the same era as her father! Every time I see them showing off their affection, I feel so sick, but I also want to see other parts 😰

How to say it? Even so, some treasures belong to others. It is really rude to just break into someone else's room like this.

I feel that the author's writing style is very good. The heroine's character is very good and not too saintly. It is very realistic. The kind of person who only cares about herself is very human. The kind of person who cares about her is not the kind of heartfelt dedication. Everyone is just for themselves. It touches my heart. I like it very much😍

I believe in you, the author. Your writing is very good. I like it very much. My concern is my confused mind. Hey, I like it very much.

There are so many typos, what do you want me to think? Do you want my sense of language to be wrong?😰

Why are there so few scenes of Forgetting the Moon?

Why doesn't the author update it anymore? 😭 I really like it. I really like the author. Please update it. 😢