
I Sell Devil Fruits in American Comics
我在美漫卖恶魔果实
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I just read Chapter 10, and I can't stand it any longer. I feel that the protagonist is too low-level. It doesn't matter if the Devil Fruit is sold for money, but the experience card is sold so cheaply. Money is number one for ordinary people, but as a superpower, what is the difference between money and paper? If you just give a healing fruit to a passerby and let him help you make money, the profit will be less than a trillion.
Six or six?
Let me give you some advice. First, don't have mutants. Avengers is enough for you. There is no need to forcefully integrate worlds with different worldviews. After all, why do Avengers become heroes and mutants are scolded? That doesn't make sense. And it loses the fun of showing off in front of S. H. I. E. L. D. After all, mutants are crawling all over the place, who cares if you can be bulletproof? Second, the difficulty of obtaining Devil Fruit is charged in US dollars. What is the difference between this and exchanging a stainless steel basin for an aircraft carrier? You can artificially increase the difficulty, such as buying abstract things such as lifespan, luck, sin, merit, etc., And you can only get the corresponding fruits, and after losing these abstract things, there should also be corresponding side effects. Otherwise, what's the point of just selling fruits? Write the store's ledger? In the end, the more you sell, the more it will become a mess with no plot. Third, change the way to enhance the protagonist's strength and add a recycling system. For example, after someone eats the Devil Fruit, the fruit will be recycled after death, and only after recycling can the protagonist improve his strength. You can connect with the previous side effects to design the plot. This is also a disguised form of cleaning up the possession of Devil Fruit, otherwise it will become bigger and bigger, easy to collapse, and boring.
I feel that this cross-dressing fruit has been ignored by the author. You can think of Stark's armor, various sacred clothes, etc. As a kind of clothing. Devil fruits depend on your imagination. How powerful your imagination is.
😒 It collapsed in Chapter 10, and the fruit that can cure all diseases only sold for 3.5 Million US dollars. From now on, giving big shit pills to cure rake poisoning will cost a billion dollars.
If Devil Fruits are settled in US dollars, the Fed can buy them all for you...
The Federal Reserve is printing money like crazy, but your tens of millions of fruits are of no use. Or are you underestimating the power of capital? Not to mention banning fraud, why can't they give money to each soldier?
This book will collapse. . .
It's stupid to settle this thing with money.
The protagonist, LOW, is just like a beggar with a golden rice bowl. Selling devil fruits should come to those who are destined to do so. Just like the street salesman, the price is really reduced. Setting up various obstacles to buy is the attitude a store manager should have.
Seeing DC Cyborg coming to buy fruits, I would like to express my personal opinion. The author should have known One Piece and American comics. At least there are no mistakes in the setting. Even if some fruits are a bit exaggerated here, such as the Slippery Fruit, the general framework of the protagonist relying on selling fruits to enhance his strength is not bad. The character of the protagonist in the author's works can be considered decisive and does not care about the changes in the plot. At least it is more interesting than some fan novels about ship flow. However, there are several shortcomings in the novel that are obvious. The first one is the way to get the fruits. In the early stage, it was difficult to sell the fruits, so the price was reduced, and to attract people, it was okay to use banknotes and gold. In the later stage, it was obviously too much to get the fruits so easily after the world was famous. Especially the protagonists can actually use luck, and the superpowers were too cheap. Those who paid with luck did not have the same luck as them later (the author did not write it). The second point is that the protagonist sometimes says that he is just selling goods and then goes to kill Thanos, which is inconsistent. Once the protagonist intervenes in this way, the whole novel is like an assembly line, recruiting people - introducing fruits - selling fruits - making copies - if the buyer is not good, the store manager will come - touting the store manager. The third point is that the Devil Fruit introduced by the protagonist is really not a good match for Marvel heroes (and the author has also created several Devil Fruits by himself). Since they have all been created by themselves, it is better to be more thorough, just like Cyborg and the Shasha Fruit. What did the author think? It is better to match it with a transformation fruit. The fourth point is that the gap between the fruits sold in the early stage and the fruits sold in the later stage is too big. If Hawkeye buys it later, can he buy the fantasy beast species? As a result, he bought a falcon too early, and the Cyborg that appeared in the later stage directly went to the natural system. This is really a loss of coming out too early, and the combat power in the later stage will definitely collapse.
I only watched the first few pictures, but to be honest, the protagonist is so low. The protagonist is just a salesperson and does all kinds of promotions. He has no worries about food and clothing, no illness or disaster, so why should he live in such a humble life and make all kinds of swearing and swearing in order to promote sales? Isn't he low?
A missile is more expensive than your fruit 🙂
I have always wanted to have a Devil Fruit, such as the Shock Fruit. Although I am not physically strong compared to the Pirate World and cannot produce earthquakes, my hands are vibrators and I will definitely have no problem sweeping through the young women's world.
There are many American comic book fans, but most of them can't stand it. One of the reasons is the author's writing style. The characters in the original work all look very silly in the author's writing, which ruins the original work.
A few million dollars, a devil fruit, good guy, and the American money printing press can support the entire group.
As long as money can be used to buy things, in the eyes of capital, they all belong to him. This book will definitely hit the streets.
What kind of fruits are you selling? Bullet fruits, wheel fruits, and coat fruits. Come on, be funny. Selling fruits is not very good. It is better to set up levels and let them grab it by themselves. You are too cheap. Too easy to get
I feel like I have no brains. You have already opened a store to sell this thing publicly. SHIELD will not be able to detect such a conspicuous thing. I am worried about SHIELD and I will go there. Are you so naive?
So what is the protagonist doing? A salesperson like a nanny or maid? He will pay careful attention to every aspect of his customers, and will specially introduce the unpalatable taste of Devil Fruit and its effects as long as the first bite. He will say hello to his customers, be careful on the road, and welcome to visit next time! Is this really the protagonist who sells Goldfinger? Isn't this Devil Fruit something life-changing?
U. S. Dollars? Believe it or not, the Federal Reserve's money printing machine directly shorts you.
This is so stupid. . . . Give wisdom to everyone directly. Devil Fruit cannot be developed by itself. It will always do what you say it can do, and the person who eats it will not consider anything. . . The reason why devil fruits are powerful is that they have infinite possibilities. . You set the limit directly.
With the X-Men, I feel like Devil Fruits are just like that. The collapse of combat power caused by the
Marvel writing mutants? Then Luo Dan doesn't have to work so hard to form the Avengers to gather so many people. Professor
How can I put it, the subject matter is quite good, but the author has a big problem with his understanding of the fruit. The Slippery Fruit sold to Deadpool can actually restore the face that was run over by a train, which is outrageous. There is also the healing fruit, which is said to be able to cure all diseases, which is outrageous. I won't go into details about the way the fruit is sold. You can buy one fruit for hundreds of thousands or millions. This is really outrageous. You might as well change your name and promote devil fruits at Marvel.
It feels good to create your own Devil Fruits. If the system is upgraded later, there will be some Human Fruit, Fantasy Beast Realm, Demon Type, Superman Type, Black Light Virus Fruit, Human Fruit Fantasy Beast, Akkado Form, Human Fruit Fantasy Beast, Ten-Tails Human Power Pillar Type. If we continue with this idea, it is not impossible to traverse the Marvel multiverse.
What are you writing about?
It's an old-fashioned shop article. I might as well read The Strongest Shopkeeper. At least it's written by someone who can't stand it. We read your book to see what changes Devil Fruit has brought to Marvel. You always write about that broken protagonist who pretends to be a slap in the face every day.
When I saw the zombie crisis chapter, I lost interest in reading it. The author didn't plan the plot at all. The patchwork story seemed to be a foreshadowing, but in fact there was no follow-up after it was written. It was like having Li Xunhuan in the early stage, but in the end it had no effect. Several of the characters written in the early stage basically disappeared in the later stage. It was boring to just watch the protagonist selling fruits one after another.
The writing is too vicious. Why don't you sell the fruit to the villain? The villain is eating your rice. It's really disgusting. I'll withdraw it.