The Grindlord Martial Saint: Starting With an Experience Panel

Writing about parents would be too restrictive. People nowadays like to have fun, and if you don't handle things well because of your parents, many people will disapprove.

I've only read the first few chapters, and the story involves the character being extorted for protection money twice by thugs in just two days. The plot also uses the character's father being beaten to advance the story. This kind of writing will only attract fewer and fewer readers. At least I can't stand it!

The book didn't do well because the protagonist was too eager to show off and lacked common sense. Nowadays, novel protagonists generally play it safe and never reveal their true strength.

If you're going to grind for experience, then grind properly. Creating conflict right from the start, getting extorted for protection money three times in just two or three days—that's a recipe for disaster. What kind of business can you possibly run? Rule-makers at least need to outwardly follow the rules to ensure long-term, stable profits. Conflict shouldn't be created like that; it needs to be gradually integrated into the story. Forcing conflict into the plot is truly a headache.

Actually, I'd prefer a normal storyline. I don't like how the plot always relies on torture or oppression to introduce it. I think normal cultivation, where a portion of one's strength is displayed among ordinary geniuses, allows for recognition and enjoyment, while also enabling one to secretly plot without being constantly harassed by insignificant figures. It shouldn't be like an honest poor person relying on mutation, unleashing a burst of power with every kick—that's boring.

He's too brave; if it weren't for the protagonist's halo, he wouldn't have survived more than a few chapters.

Is this a new author? If all thugs are this violent and aggressive, why have I never heard of any gang being wiped out in a few moves? People join the underworld to live well, not to show off. Do you believe that in real life, if someone offends a low-ranking member of a martial arts school, the boss would immediately take care of that member?

I couldn't read past chapter twelve and died from the poison. Goodbye.

It's written so stupidly. The cheat system is okay, but the author is terrible at writing. How can a newbie become a superhuman in just one or two days? Is this some kind of cultivation game? It's very illogical, and the pacing is faster than any cultivation game.

It's mediocre and the conflict feels forced. The deliberate attempt to imitate the conflict writing styles of master writers feels awkward and out of place.