The Infinite Journey Begins with the Ability to Think

If you can't write emotional scenes, why don't you write good ones? It seems that you and this Feng Yu are really embarrassed () = convex

Speechless. I wrote a lot of sub-worlds but not the main world. Then why bother arranging a main world? Just let the heavens flow through the worlds one by one. Since I have written the main world, I have not written dozens of chapters of the main world.

In the fourth chapter, I felt like I was being persuaded to quit. Well, I felt the character of the protagonist, and I couldn't bear to look at it.

The characterization is really amazing. I find the protagonist disgusting and vulgar when I read the text, and I feel embarrassed for some of his actions, but the author keeps describing how handsome he is, and the supporting characters think how handsome the protagonist is. I really want to ask the author, how do you praise such a vulgar character like this? If someone threatens you, just write a chapter and say it!

The most taboo thing about writing fan fiction is original short plots. It's very boring. What do you think I came to see for the purpose of watching the fan fiction? Then why did The Destroyer forcefully show it to me before I fell asleep?

The protagonist is particularly speechless. He actually spared Hisoka's life and then let Hisoka cause trouble later. I'm really convinced. The comics are quite charming. In reality, there is this person. Either stay away or kill him. Stay away from Gon. Gon is an idealist and a gray man. Kill the exam guard in the original Killua and abstain. Do you think the guard is unjust? Gon is still chasing Killua. If you travel through time and encounter such a hiding place, you don't know how you will die.

Sure enough, there is a reason for the poor performance. The whole article is about the author talking to himself, having fun alone, awkward dialogues, awkward emotional interactions, and the scalp of the reader is numb. In comparison, a short chapter of one or two thousand words is insignificant.

Has the author never watched One Piece? One Piece is not the invalid fruit of sea water, but the sea stone factor contained in sea water.

There are 140,000 words, and there are only two chapters describing the main world in 62 chapters. So what's the meaning of the main world setting?

The emotional scenes are awkward, and the main character's ability setting is too greedy, not distinctive, and not as good as the heroine's ability setting.

I would like to give the author a suggestion: make some adjustments after reworking, otherwise there won't be much reading and subscriptions if you continue to post and write.

Is this a hunter fan? Pirates are such ghosts, pirates, they will be assigned to three characters in Impel Down City

Old bookworms still can't watch these, they feel so awkward, especially emotional scenes. If you can't write about emotions, don't write them Nowadays, emotional scenes are not certain, and they don't have to be added. Even if you just find a vase based on your strength, it will be much better than now.

Look at the title of the book, then the table of contents, and finally the comments to persuade you to quit.

I feel relieved when I see someone scolding you.

The setting of the protagonist's abilities is very interesting. The only bad thing is that the Hunter story is too long. I know that I don't return to Pirates now because I don't have enough strength to escape Impel Down. But if you want to run away with Luffy, it's very boring. There are too many One Piece stories that lick the protagonist, and it's boring to read.

The writing is not very good, forget it, he is still a fucking bitch

I just read Chapter 4, which is very embarrassing. Only those who can persevere through it without feeling awkward are suitable for reading this novel.

After time travel, it's still Zhu Tianwen. You use the name of your body instead of the name before time travel 😳

The world of beheading girls is too dark, the protagonist just needs to do things, so it's better to have a female protagonist. Make trouble, make trouble, make trouble.