Lizard Lord

The overall writing is very interesting, and it can be regarded as an excellent novel about exotic beasts. The most obvious flaw is that in the hunter's relics, it wants to portray the kindness of the protagonist, but the writing is very stiff. The protagonist can repay the hunter if he wants, but the problem is that he has no specific information about the hunter, and it is inconvenient to communicate directly with humans, and he will soon flee and migrate to a distant place. Under such circumstances, it is really hypocritical to forcefully carry burdens and imagine that he can return things to the hunter's family. In fact, this arrangement that highlights the protagonist's humanity can be written as if he digs a tomb for the hunter to thank him, instead of writing that the protagonist seems to know that he will meet someone who can help him complete the task soon, so he makes this choice with inexplicable confidence. This can reflect the goodness of the protagonist without appearing hypocritical.

The author is obviously not animal blind, and the animal-related content is quite comfortable to read. The current plot is quite satisfactory. Although it is a bit lacking in twists and turns, there is no deliberately arranged plot. The reading experience is quite smooth. In addition, the fantasy lizard protagonist transforming into a dragon is a bit vulgar. The author can learn about the dinosaur lizards in Total War Warhammer, which is quite interesting.

The fantasy is really cool and thorough, and it's already on the new book list after 10,000 words.

I don't have much experience. If I find something uncomfortable, I just say it casually without greeting my relatives. One of my few strengths is that I can admit my mistakes. I will consider and reply when I see it, and I will try my best to correct it. Thank you all.

After reading the first few dozen chapters, I found it to be quite average and a bit bland, and there was nothing special about the protagonist's character or behavior. It gives me the feeling that although I have turned into a lizard, my speech and psychology are the same as an ordinary person. I feel that when reading about alien beasts, I want to see something different from ordinary characters, whether it is greed and cruelty or order and justice.

This book is called pseudo-DND, but its taste is more authentic than the one claiming to be DND. At least have read the 5e rule book.

I feel that the protagonist is too weak. This is a magical world, but the protagonist is just a larger lizard with a strengthened body. Also, the protagonist evolves too slowly. It has been fifty or sixty chapters since the last evolution. This span is too long. Is this the Alien Beast style? , There is absolutely no characteristic of the Alien Beast Style that focuses on strengthening one's own strength. The label is Alien Beast Style, but what you wrote does not have that flavor at all. Also, although what you wrote is basically not poisonous, it is too bland. Can you give me some excitement?

The strength of the protagonist is very strong. Evolving bone spurs is really boring. When there is an option to evolve and there are sub-dragon materials, why not evolve towards the sub-dragon? Evolve into a sub-dragon. The strength, recovery, endurance, and digestion capacity will all be improved by several levels. You can also have dragon power. With dragon power, you are still afraid of a hammer goblin. Isn't it better to kill the dragon power directly than your psychic power? There is also a scale armor that is more than ten meters long. No matter how low the defense is, it is not as outrageous as yours. It is as injured as an egg when touched. The thickest armor is not even one centimeter thick. Are you wearing a hammer armor? If you were a human, there would be nothing to say. You are a giant beast that is more than ten meters tall. Are you kidding me when you wear armor that is a few millimeters thick?

It's useless, it's better to just make a human lord. I originally ordered them all for the evolution of the alien beasts, but I didn't expect that the dozens of pictures without evolution were all lord plots. Most of the Lord's plot is close to the Warhammer world view, and this Lizard Lord is really neither good nor bad.

The author's main problem is that his writing skills are too weak, and many important details of the storyline are not included. The protagonist lizard is a modern person who traveled through time and has the knowledge of modern people, but it is also a fantasy novel. It does not even clearly describe the "advanced knowledge" that the protagonist brings, how to practice magic, and what changes have occurred in the world's background and level of strength. The rune magic, firearms and artillery, handling of racial conflicts and territory management are all omitted. Only a lizard is written to fight everywhere without revealing the connotation. The timeline is also vague. In the end, this result is really not unfair. I don't know if the author was hit too hard, but I think I like the advantages of "Lizard Lord" very much: seeing the world from the first-person perspective of an alien beast, the protagonist is upright, has character, and does not stick to trivial details. The golden finger and the protagonist's aura are also very small, and the gentle upgrade and evolution "it would be better if it drives the evolution of weak races." These highlights are the motivation for me to finish reading.

Especially the evolution time span. Fifty or sixty chapters are really too long. For someone like me who wants to see the protagonist evolve into a stronger, more monster-like character, such as bigger, multiple heads, horns, etc., Your way of writing is a torture for me. However, your writing has no poisonous points and the plot is smooth and reasonable. I can't let it go.

It looks like this is a complete eunuch, right? Daily tomb sweeping.

How do gluttony, greed and justice and tolerance combine? What a different personality.

Come on, author! As long as the alien beasts don't change into humans and then go back unchanged, that's fine. (It's okay to change into a human being, just have fun with it occasionally)

I don't know what to say either? I just felt that the plot was too bland, and the contact with humans felt too abrupt.

The update frequency is getting slower and slower. I guess we are not far away from the eunuch.

Do I have a problem seeing myself as a lizard princess?

It seems to be well written so far, and I have invested~