I'm a Decent Swordsman

More than two sets will be confiscated and fined

Too short

The biggest problem with this book is that it does not express a sense of reality. Your golden finger can have functions in the game, but the whole world must be very real. The two best books of this kind, "Super Mechanic" and "This Game is Too Real", are both very good. If it cannot be written with a sense of reality, can this book be called a time-travel novel? It is clearly an online game novel.

This novel should be imitated by Toad's "Shu Mountain". Many readers may not have read the original series of "The Legend of the Shushan Swordsman" by Huanzhu Louzhu, and think that the level of the skills should be similar to the levels of the monsters in the surrounding environment like other fairy novels. However, in the original "The Legend of the Shushan Swordsman" by Huanzhu Louzhu, this is not the case! Take "Baiyang Illustration" as an example. This is the authentic foundation-building technique of Xuanmen left by the senior master Bai Yang who ascended to immortality in the book. It ranks first, and there is no one even tied. The location of this technique is also public, and the big guys know it, but Baiyang Cave is there. Very few people can find it, and very few people can go in to learn it! In the original work, there was only Ling Yunfeng, a second-generation immortal lady, who was forced to learn it by being brought in by Cui Wugu, the white-haired dragon girl of the poor god Ling Hun. However, Miss Ling was too ignorant and insisted on buying the casket for the pearl. She abandoned the most precious core part of "The Illustration of the White Sun" and failed to learn it. As a result, the effectiveness of "The Illustration of the White Sun" was cut off by 60 to 70%. According to the positioning in the book, although Ling Yunfeng is the second generation of immortals and has some good fortune, her virtue is not worthy of her and she is not worthy of the complete "Baiyang Illustration"! This is the real reason why "Baiyang Illustration" is known as the first foundation-building technique of Xuanmen's authentic sect, and its location is known to the big guys, but few people have learned it for thousands of years. Many people find it unbelievable, but if you compare it to Li Yingqiong, the absolute protagonist in "Three Heroes and Two Clouds", you will understand. This Li Yingqiong was abandoned in Mangcang Mountain when he was a teenager and had not started cultivating immortality. As a result, the little girl took it out and grabbed the strongest immortal sword Ziying Sword from the broken drum of the ruined temple. Then a little girl who had not yet cultivated immortality killed several zombies who were about to turn into flying yakshas, ​​and then killed the mandrill and obtained the thousand-year-old red fruit. Note that when doing these things, Li Yingqiong had not yet become a disciple of Emei and had not started practicing immortal skills. She was just a little girl who had learned some Jianghu Kung Fu. This is the good fortune of one of the Three Elites and Two Clouds, the future headmaster of Emei! What Master Bai Yang means is that if you have deep blessings, then even if there are a bunch of monsters and monsters guarding you, you can still learn "Baiyang Illustration" without any damage. On the contrary, if you don't have enough blessings, what qualifications do you have to learn this authentic foundation-building technique of Xuanmen?

Except that the levels are too complicated, everything else is great! It's level 100-120 again, and it's golden elixir foundation building again! Magic weapons are also extremely complicated. Forget about levels 1-9, there are blue, purple, red, legends, and rare treasures. . . . After reading more than 20 chapters, I don't even know what level the pig's feet clothes are!

It's been a long time since I've seen an online game like Shushan. Online games like Xianxia are rare now. I support it and the author will update it soon.

How to put it this way, the setting of this book is actually quite good, but something feels a little wrong from the beginning of the second chapter. It feels like this world is not a real world, but an illusory game world. Also, why do you have to make a statement about how many levels there are? Since it is a fairy world, can't you set a realm? There is also the main character's panel in Chapter 2. It feels so confusing. There are a lot of things, but I don't remember a few of them.

The Emei here, the righteous ones, are just like hooligans, their juniors are worse than the Young and Dangerous, they are uneducated, and they are completely hypocritical from top to bottom. The protagonist is like a spoiler. One day he steals a few treasures, but tomorrow he will be plotted against. The sect is redundant and can only be besieged and beaten passively. The concept of creating education and developing farming have been mentioned in one sentence. The plot in the book is driven by the fact that the protagonist was provoked and started fighting, and was provoked and started fighting again. Even after fighting, he didn't kill a few people on the opposite side. , If it's broken, then it's broken. Why update? This book is written in such a way that you can't make any money just by reading the monthly scores. I actually spent money to read so many chapters. Now I feel no pleasure at all, I just feel annoyed.

First of all, there is a problem with this setting at the beginning. You said holographic reality, so why can NPCs be resurrected after they die? It should not be dead or dead, but the game situation has changed. If your sects have been wiped out and you can still be resurrected, how will the pattern of this world change? It has always been those sects.

Another Zhenqi and mana. Zhenqi is Zhenqi, and mana is mana. Don't mix them together, okay? Zhenqi is mostly the energy system of martial arts. Although some authors also use it in the cultivation system, it is only used in the Qi training period and is upgraded to Zhenyuan in the foundation building period. Mana is the energy system of traditional cultivation and a macro concept. The energy system of all spell-casting units can be called mana. The concept of true energy comes from martial arts novels. It is used for cultivation because the force breaks through the void and ascends to the immortal world (the world of immortality or cultivation). The level of low-end martial arts can be regarded as the period of physical training or Qi refining, the foundation building and soaring after the completion of the period, etc. Middle martial arts or high martial arts have fallen out of this category. Some high martial arts have exceeded the level of cultivating immortals. This has led to a dispute between warriors and the system of cultivating immortals. However, because zhenqi has long been defined as the concept of a low-level martial arts energy system, in order to allow warriors to compete with cultivators, warriors have also changed to use the spiritual energy system. This becomes me in you, and you in me. To put it bluntly, warriors have been included in the cultivation system. If you can't defeat them in martial arts or physical cultivation, you can join.

Finally, I have a Shushan online game that I can watch. The flaws are not hidden, the settings can be imitated, and the cheats are appropriately suppressed. The potential is huge.

Shuhuang is looking for Similar Shushan online games or Xiuxian online games, thank you all

(#｀Van´) I*... I just want to ask a question, is this an online game or a time travel to another world? ! The introduction is obviously about time travel, and the classification is also about cultivating immortals. But if you look at what the male protagonist does in it and most of the settings, it's like an online game. He looks more like a player than an NPC. Also, I wonder if the companies in the opposite player's world can change or interfere with this world? ! They can do it in the memory of the male protagonist's previous life. If they can, wouldn't the male protagonist be at the mercy of others? ? He himself thinks that this world is not real, and he himself is doubting it! Is this world real? (Doubtful Life) In short, is it an online game or a different world? Is this a case of selling dog meat over sheep's heads? It is the author himself who gave us the illusion that this is the world of online games, and it is fake! (The world of online games - all in vain in the end.) It's not that this novel is not good, it is actually well written, but I feel that the author cannot accurately grasp the positioning of the male protagonist! I just want to know this question. (It's almost suffocating me)

I can't stand it anymore after I wrote it. I kept talking about how I was doing with Emei, but I never saw you take action to kill an important person in Emei. It was always Emei who caused trouble for you and you were trapped. I really don't know if you were the Holy Mother or something.

How many Shushan online games can write with the author's style? The author's writing is okay, at least it doesn't look awkward. Also, the style of Shushan online games is fundamentally different from traditional online games, so don't mix them up.

This book is a template for online game players, and the Shushan system is used. However, it turns out that it is fate after writing it. The protagonist has been targeted by Emei, and he dares not to kill, but cannot kill. After starting a sect, he is still a nanny. It is unsatisfactory. If you can't kill this, you can't kill that. Why write an online game? It's better to wear a time-travel skin and hide in it. The more you read, the worse it gets.

There are a lot of female characters, and there are also female apprentices. . . A bit poisonous

The clone's persuasion to retreat seems unsatisfying, especially the clone that can cultivate consciousness and slips away.

Is there a Shennong or not? I am afraid of the typical story of licking a woman, then giving things to the hero to save the beauty, and then I fall in love with the protagonist.

I am also convinced, I am the leader, and I am just like a casual cultivator fighting alone every day. I am always besieged by Emei, so the elders and disciples of your sect are invisible. You might as well write that you are a casual cultivator.

If the experience points can still be connected, it would be great if everyone could become a businessman. There would be no need to practice or fight monsters to level up.

I wonder if it was written by someone else 🤔, the early settings are missing (Qi Jinchan can still jump around after being killed), the players have no sense of presence (the protagonist can only appear when he thinks of cutting leeks and is only used to cut leeks), and there are no game props (the early fairy mansion key has not appeared)

Did the author forget to set the setting after reading the book? The end of Chapter 146 and the beginning of Chapter 147 said that Qi Jinchan was dead, but in Chapters 272 and 289, Qi Jinchan came out again. Both Li Yuanhua and Lupao could only work as wood in the sect. Why could Qi Jinchan still wander outside?

There are two books connected to The Eunuch. Can I still read the new book?

Is this one too? Why are so many things like this recently?

Is this the background of the online game Qingcheng Sword Fairy? The side sect's authentic level, Zhushan's flying swords and level settings, as well as the Zhushan teaching players, one of the top ten masters in the previous life, have such a strong sense of déjà vu.

The level was raised too slowly. Starting from the 120th level of the golden elixir, it has been advancing at a very fast pace. I am either refining treasures or on the way to refining treasures every day. I feel that the magic weapon of pig's feet is enough. I should seize the time to improve my level and cultivation level. The result is still the same. In refining treasures, you just refining 100 million ninth-level magic weapons with a ball. The boss of the gods and gods will slap you to death, and no one uses the magic weapon. The pig's feet feel a bit like putting the cart before the horse. Now this magic weapon, now that magic weapon, but you don't know that cultivation is everything.

Why is this book always on limited offer?

It's a bit boring, but the writing of "Thunder Tribulation" is so bland.

Is it cold? Start a new book soon. You are not suitable for writing this type of book.