My Life Has a Narration

After reading a few pictures, it was really uncomfortable. It is wrapped in the skin of modern life, but the story it writes is out of tune. Although reality does not require logic, I think novels still do.

This book is good in every aspect, but the brother who is the protagonist is not good at writing. I don't know what he is trying to do by writing about this brother. If Hua Tuo reads this, the brother who is the protagonist will be poisoned to death.

Rubbish. This is a one-star article. Your parents are targeting you. Your sister is targeting you. Your parents put the doghouse in your house and won't let you in. You told your brother that you were going to die and asked you not to buy medicine. You just hung up the phone and later played with that person

This book... In fact, I am tolerant of family relationships, but my writing is based on reality rather than reality. You can't have ten sentences and seven jokes. Just make jokes in a moderately obscene way. Occasionally, just make a joke. There are a few people who have conversations that are all jokes. The system narration's psychological descriptions are ok, but the dialogue and communication are still normal. There is a reason for the outcry in the book review area, and I hope the author can take it away.

Chapter 8 successfully persuaded me to quit. The author would like you to check it after you finish writing it.

The book is okay, you can read it. The biggest poisonous point is that the male protagonist's mother is an old fairy, and she is crazy about urging marriage.

The author has been like this before from the audience. It feels like he has great ideas and arranges various routines without caring about the readers' feelings. In some cases, the settings and writing feel a bit off. But it's just to give you some poison, maybe with private goods or something like that. I continued reading after reading the first twenty chapters, maybe because I was hoping for a twist, but I felt uneasy🙂🙂

It was pretty good before the bull market. Made short videos to solve crimes, with a little sweetness interspersed with the comedy. As you get rich, you become more and more vicious. A lot of pretense, slaps in the face, and vicious fights lower the grade. What a pity.

It's pretty good after reading it. It's quite witty and humorous. Sometimes I can't help but laugh while reading it. It's a good book.

The beginning feels rushed, the pace is too fast, and the protagonist's charm is average. It is recommended that if you write an unsatisfactory protagonist, don't join the harem, and don't be a good partner. Goldfinger is too strong, the plot is not good, the characters are average, and the writing is smooth

When I read Chapter 171, I felt that it was written by two authors. It felt so torn apart. The plot before and after was really amazing. The plot went from one extreme to another. It was very uncomfortable for the viewer, at least it made me feel uncomfortable. Remove it, remove it, I didn't read any books that day, let's talk about it again, maybe I won't be able to pick it up again.

Personally, I think it's a good movie for me to watch. I won't be led by the system all the time, and there are quite a lot of life stories.

What I wrote later was so good that I couldn't help but feel sad. . .

Come on! The writing is very good, I will update it →_→

Why do this book have so many bad reviews?

My parents are in their 40s and 50s after graduating from college. When my son comes home, his parents don't show any concern. The whole family is disgusted. I really don't understand. Is this a warm and everyday life?

In fact, I think the biggest failure is that the single female protagonist has to focus on describing the other female protagonists, especially the teacher. It is really difficult to understand. This operation will make any group look distorted. If the harem is not a queen, the single female protagonist describes the ambiguity of others for a long time. Oh, author, think about it yourself.

A group of people who were safe before the narration were uncertain about life and death after the narration.

Let me complain, it's just a small flaw. Does the author have no idea about height and weight? 180 Is only 65 kilograms. You are a telegraph pole, right?

Shen Yi

I've read the first dozen chapters, but not the rest. I don't know what happens next. To be honest, there's nothing that attracts me. It's OK to make family jokes, but it's more or less within limits. It gives me the impression that the whole family is crazy because they've eaten too much mushrooms.

I was curious about what the comments said, so I went to read it. In fact, it's not that bad. It's just that there are too many Internet memes. The family is mentally disturbed. I can barely read it. Normal people can barely read it. It's quite a niche article. I saw Chapter 6. The reason why I didn't read it was that I couldn't accept it and contacted the old A. . It is actually a very serious thing to hang up the phone on the phone in the middle of the night with diarrhea. Even people with poor quality may hang up. . I can't figure out why the author arranged this plot. It will definitely persuade a lot of people to quit. It can only be said that there is something wrong with the author's three views. There is a reason why a million words is so small. The writing and narration are pretty good, but it's a pity. .

The first few chapters are so toxic that I can't stand it anymore. They have to create an image of the protagonist who is disliked by everyone. His friends are rubbish, his parents dislike him, and his sister doesn't even kiss him. Who wants to read this?

People who watch this are going to have a brain hemorrhage. You have a single heroine, so tell me in advance. You describe so many supporting characters with ambiguous partners, and then you only have a single heroine. Either you accept them all, or you just write about the heroine being ambiguous. It's a waste of time.

In the first chapter, I was so angry that I had a cerebral hemorrhage. The first poisonous point was that I ate Yunnan mushrooms given by others. The second poisonous point was that everyone knew it was mushroom poisoning, but I didn't go to the hospital and asked my friends to buy Xerizin. I bought laxatives from the pharmacy and they didn't deliver them the next day. The third poisonous point was that I woke up the next day and didn't call the police. I damned said I was unlucky. Shennong was poisoned to death.

There is a big problem with the family atmosphere. There is almost no family connection between family members, which is really a failure. It can be seen that the author wants to describe a humorous family relationship similar to that of a family with children, but what is shown is the protagonist's aggrieved feeling of being marginalized and excluded by his family. The reader's senses are very poor after immersing himself in the experience. However, the author does not intend to leave this kind of family. It is like serving you a plate of unwashed nine-turn large intestine at dinner. If you don't want to eat, it will be there to satisfy you. Many book friends will basically be disgusted by this kind of family relationship when reading this book. It is really impossible to imagine the author's understanding of harmonious family relationships. If the author himself grew up in this kind of family, I would sympathize with and bless him.

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Pictures found in the book next door

Extremely uncomfortable, Chapter 8 is poisonous, one chapter is tolerant, one chapter is about mentally violent parents, dog-licking friends, eight chapters are gone, one chapter is poisonous and one chapter is

Conceive the novel, there are no less than ten poisonous points in the first twenty chapters. The brother is fake and will not call the police if he is poisoned. The childhood sweetheart catches a wanted criminal and does not care about his casualties. The sister is yin and yang and snobbish. The parents do not regard people as their own sons. They have only been out for a few days and gave the room to the dog. The dog can step on the hero's feet. Yes, I suggest you be greedy for being rewarded with 20,000 yuan. Did your son not graduate or something? He has no job to earn some money and is divided by three vampires. How do you divide it? A university teacher is greedy for that little money? It's all a collection of bad jokes and jokes, with nothing of his own. The score is so high for a novel like this. Don't make people laugh.