From the Auditorium to the Entertainment Industry

I don't know what exactly you want to write! The beginning was very good, so I continued to watch it, and then the bland tour gave people an aesthetic feeling, so I watched it now. But why is it becoming more and more watery now? They often use Internet hot words like "Isn't it delicious?" The key is that even if you like it, many people don't like it! Just use it occasionally. You still don't have a heroine, you only flirt with others, and you tell the protagonist's tragic story from time to time. What do you mean? In reality, people like you are called "scumbags", do you understand? If the protagonist can't forget his ex, don't be ambiguous about it. If you're ambiguous about it, just cast the heroine and don't let him go in advance. What does it matter now? Do you want to be among the thousands of flowers without a single leaf touching you? What kind of balance are you playing with? Is giving the protagonist an infatuated persona the reason why he can pick up girls casually? The reason why so many people don't want female protagonists nowadays is because they are poisoned by poor books, but the correct solution is to create female protagonists with really good books and strong authors! And I found that your current plot only has a small part of the main plot such as work show and acting, and the rest is mostly based on all kinds of bragging, comedy and entertainment! What if we read this and read your book? In your words, Douyu and Douyin are not good? Doesn't he look good in so many online jokes? There are so many funny books on the Internet. Why read this one? As a senior reader, I spent half a day saying this just because I thought you could save it. You can also pretend that I didn't say anything. Of course, as long as you don't change it, I'll abandon the book.

I have read about twenty chapters so far, and I don't know what will happen next. Let me talk about my personal feelings first. The main problems are as follows 1. The emotions are sometimes incoherent The transition from sadness to comedy is too sudden, and the transition from comedy to sadness is also very sudden, which makes me feel a bit inexplicable. 2. Usage of punctuation marks The characters seem to speak without double quotation marks, which looks very awkward, and some passages (such as those where the protagonist opens his hair with a scarf) are funny to the end. 3. The problem of pronouns I found that in the first few chapters, he seemed to be rarely used to refer to the protagonist. When used most frequently, three Xu Yangs can be found in a paragraph of two or three lines, which can be completely replaced by him. I don't know if any adjustments have been made later, but I hope the author can make major changes to the first few chapters, at least add double quotation marks when speaking. Otherwise it would be too awkward to read.

I read more than 200 chapters and finished the plot of The Voice of China. I was surprised that I didn't see a song I had heard! Maybe it's because I can't appreciate it. When I listened to the songs in the book, I felt they were very average and nothing amazing. I basically couldn't listen to the entire song. Therefore, I feel that even though the atmosphere in the plot of this book is well done, it cannot hold up when it comes to the climax, cannot resonate with readers, and cannot be brought into the book. I understand the author's idea of ​​choosing these songs. But songs are just like that. Unpopular songs that are not popular always have their shortcomings or limitations. This cannot be changed subjectively by the author. Therefore, those more classic songs cannot be bypassed even if they have been overwritten by many works. In fact, classic songs are like high-quality ingredients. Whether they are grilled, fried or stewed and braised, whether they can be made into delicious dishes that can bring different enjoyment to readers depends on the skill of the author. But not just any mushroom can be called a delicacy or made into delicacies, not to mention that there are poisonous mushrooms. 🙂 I hope the author writes better and better.

Many people say that there is no heroine in this book. That's because you didn't read carefully. In fact, the hidden heroine was determined at the last moment of the finale. There is a narration in the ending when the male protagonist accompanies his daughter to the cemetery. He has forgotten the details, but it probably means that it is time to let it go. When he finally goes home for dinner, the male protagonist asks his daughter to call her mother over for dinner. In fact, this represents the final choice. Xiaoxue has been silently accompanying the male boss for decades. There must be feelings between the two parties. Although there is no response from the male protagonist for such a long time, it means that the male protagonist has not completely let go. It was not until the author gave a signal in the finale that it made up for Xiaoxue's long wait. It's a wonderful result.

According to the Marriage Law, for an adult man to adopt a daughter, the age difference between the two must be forty years. It's not an argument, it's just a simple suggestion.

The writing is quite good, but the song selection is a bit low-key. They are basically just salivating Internet songs. To be honest, it is a bit hard to resonate with.

School is over. If 500 people wanted to hit you at the school gate, what would you say? (Limited to four words)

After seeing Xie Xuan's chapter, I gave up wearing long hair and makeup in ancient costumes.

I think ~ this book is a troll book, the beginning of the content attracted me to decisively collect it ~ look at what you wrote? There are so many subjective consciousnesses criticizing this and that, it is too self-righteous. Author, I am definitely not a fan of those people, but what you wrote is completely different from my initial expectations of you, and completely inconsistent with your initial character design, so I gave up.

The portrayal of the protagonist's character is not realistic, and the supporting characters' personalities are not distinct. As for Teacher He, everyone knows who Teacher He is, but it is not obvious in the book, and in some small scenes, it does not match the real character. The character creation is not very full.

Dear Shennong, I can only hold on until Chapter 25, please come on

The author has too many personal items and his taste is niche. It feels like grabbing a handful of that thing and force-feeding it to you 🙂

To be honest, I don't know what the author wants to express now. He also needs the pig's feet to match the character of maintaining a dedicated character, and also needs to write some warmth. Finally, he forced a daughter to be created, and he also started to pretend to slap her in the face, playing a good hand of cards to pieces. Even after getting married in Chunyang, it would have been better than this 😅

The front end is very good, I almost cried when I saw it 😭 I really don't know what to say about the writing behind it. I'm just enjoying myself. What's the effect of writing a program and putting it on TV after it's written? Putting it off again and again is as embarrassing and boring as saying that there is no praise in the cross talk. I'm really a big star and I'm really a big star. I'm not trying to imitate him. That guy is so stupid that I want to send him a razor blade 😡, but imitating the audience's reaction after the show he wrote is broadcast. That's the fun part of entertainment novels…

Can the author stop writing ancient-style songs? I listened to the ancient-style songs you wrote but I didn't think they were very good. Not to mention Guanshan Wine in the semi-finals of The Voice. I can only say 6666 on this stage where I can win the semi-finals of The Voice.

After reading more than 30 chapters, I was very confused. It stands to reason that the protagonist is the one who traveled from the earth, right? But what follows is travel and period costumes... The things written down in the book are the wishes of the girlfriend of the original owner of the body! This is very magical. The author describes a protagonist who is in pain after losing his lover. In the blink of an eye, the protagonist forgets his original wife and misses the original owner's girlfriend affectionately? Some book friends said that the protagonist pinned his feelings for his deceased wife on the original owner's girlfriend? Haha, it's even more of a joke! Is this Yan Yue still alive? How about spending the rest of his life with the protagonist? Does the protagonist's wife have no ideals or wishes? Need the protagonist to place his emotions on a strange dead person? Do you feel the same way? I just feel it's against the law! No matter how you look at it, you can't combine it with the image in the first three chapters. In addition, the protagonist has already played Shake it during his lonely journey...

I hope that Xu Yang will be single with Sisi. How should I put it? It's not that I don't want Xu Yang to get married again, but I feel that Xu Yang's two lovers have already filled his love. Although his current lover is in his memory, it is still unforgettable, so Xu Yang goes everywhere with his two lovers to see the world. Meeting Sisi now feels like it has filled the regret between him and his lover. What's more, Xu Yang has never been attracted to anyone again, so the current situation is very good!

Coming from someone who read a pirated copy The writing is very good, but it just feels like a literate person. I have been reading the book for about 8 years. This is the only one that I have read chapter by chapter. I reread it three times while waiting for the book (really poor people 😭 don't even have a monthly pass) The writing is great. There is no love line, but the later timeline spans too much (maybe the author doesn't know whether to continue writing) But it does not affect the overall feel of the book. Looking forward to the extra episode. Give Xu Qian a happy ending! Following readers, try to read it a few more times, Liang Cao.

It is a very beautiful book. The words in the book are very interesting. You can feel the emotions behind the words, which is very touching. As a student party member, I don't have much money, except to post a book review to express my gratitude. Thank you, the author, for such a great story.

How to say, the flaws do not cover up the virtues. This is the only novel that I have read to the end completely in recent years. To say it's easy is indeed easy. But it's really heart-wrenching emotionally. There are no major ups and downs in the plot, it is just plain. It is not an exaggeration to say it is a running story, but it is really not boring. Everyone wants to be the protagonist, but in fact most of them are ordinary people. The protagonist in the book is actually an ordinary person. No adventure, no calculation, very good. Although the protagonist's character is slightly broken, it has little impact. The concept is also quite satisfactory, and some chapters have watery meanings, but who wouldn't be watery these days? It was during the last two hundred pictures that the chicken soup was a bit intense. I hope the next book will be moderate. Chicken soup should be as little as possible. Hey, come back and replenish your subscription.

Company of Heroes only came out in 2017, and Shinhwa was filmed in 2010. Why did everyone run out? You should have some logic when writing!

I beg you for a female protagonist. Now that I have read all the updates the author has made, the author clearly states that the male protagonist is already full and can no longer accommodate anyone else, so I personally don't think the author will forcefully introduce a female protagonist. Looking at the foreshadowing in the previous article, the psychological point of view of the male protagonist who has no emotions, no CP, and no female protagonist is the most suitable for the development of this article. After reading it in one go, I feel that the male protagonist's daily work in the entertainment industry is better than awkward love. In addition, I really like the cross-dressing boss, highly recommended! (*☻-☻*) But the most shocking thing to me is that someone in the comments said that they want the male protagonist to have a female protagonist in his previous life... Emmmmmmm, how can I put it, if there is a female protagonist, I can't accept it at the moment. I don't read stories with CP, I don't like it, not to mention that the female protagonist who requested this is still his wife in the previous life... I refuse it in my heart! (￣Д￣)ﾉ But, the author said in the article that now the male protagonist has two people in his heart, one is his wife in his previous life, and the other is his girlfriend after time travel (although I think it's weird, but I like the male protagonist so I don't think much about it). His heart is full and he can no longer pretend. From this point of view, this article is probably meaningless. CP writing (if the author is not influenced by outsiders and does not intend to write a female protagonist from the beginning, and does not intend to have sex, no CP is appropriate), if the author later forces a female protagonist to come in, the image of the male protagonist created previously will 90% collapse, and the experience of the story will be reduced if the change is too abrupt, so why would anyone demand that there must be a female protagonist? Is the success of the male protagonist based on whether there is a female protagonist? ಠ_ಠ Can't figure it out. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ When I saw a reader requesting my wife from my previous life to be the heroine, I personally feel that it is very inconsistent just to think about it. Think about the style of writing changing from the urban entertainment circle to the fantasy and supernatural romance style. If this is really the case... What is the meaning of the title? It's so shocking. . W(ﾟДﾟ)w The main purpose of posting so many complaints is to express my personal hope that this article will have no CP and no awkward emotional drama. I recommended it on the reading list and said that it is most likely to be without censorship. I collected this because CP has no emotional scenes. I hope it really doesn't have a heroine... (´･ω･`) emmmmmmm, I'm just complaining, don't complain, I'll run away first (´-ω-`)

It felt okay at first, but the more I watched, the worse it became. It felt like the main line was too scattered. If you don't like it personally, don't spray it. 🙂

After reading books for more than ten years, this book can be included in the top three of my collection. Life is like this. If you miss it, it will be a lifetime...

Come over tomorrow and order all of them. There are very few books that I can finish. I hope Xu Yang and the others can spend this life safely and smoothly. Thanks to the author for sharing a good story, and I wish you happiness in the rest of your life.

The writing is quite good, but the song selection is a bit low-key. They are basically just salivating Internet songs. To be honest, it is a bit hard to resonate with.

The author's great work is very poetic and philosophical, the three senses are very upright, and the book is very good.

After reading it, I have to say that this is the first time I have read a novel twice. From the four grave-sweeping scenes in the early stage to the several appearances of Xu Si later, it sometimes made me cry a little. I also thought about why I am so sentimental even though I am not old enough. But I have to say that some of the principles in this book really taught me a lot. Some people say that they are not good-looking. I can only say that the aesthetics of each book are different, but each book is the hard work of an author, and I have written it myself. If you don't persist, it may be because you have too little experience. I also know that the description of the plot does require a lot of energy from the author to contribute to everyone. Some people say that there is no female protagonist, but I feel that it is very difficult for a person to be like Xu Yang after experiencing this kind of thing twice. If Xu Yang hadn't met Xu Si, I don't think Xu Yang would have looked for her again. This is not what those people call just chatting and not doing anything. I always felt that before Xu Yang met Xu Si, he actually had a strong sense of alienation from those girls. They're all just friends. My cultural background is not high, but I think this ending is very good. It's a pity not to have a heroine, it's a pity not to be married, but isn't there a lot of regrets in life? Xu Yang lived a new life and lived out his own life. I feel like this is the best ending. Big cheers for the author

I just finished reading it. Although it is a pirated version, the book is really good.

After reading books for 10 years, this is the only novel worth reviewing. It is very real. Please do more urban literature in this style. Today's urban literature is a bit too cool.