The Lords of the Heavens Are Coming

In fact, what is precious about Dragon Snake is not the strength training method, but the tempering of the soul, which improves the spiritual realm in the process of martial arts training.

I really can't stand it anymore. It's fine in another world, but once I get to the world of dragons and snakes, it becomes extremely greasy! I'm so embarrassed!

It is recommended that Dragon Snake write a few more chapters, then it will be considered as completing the phased tasks and can travel to other worlds. You can try Jin Yong's World. Although many people think it is badly written, in fact, the world of Jin Yong's novels is grand and complete, with rich characters, and is the most friendly and suitable for novice authors. You can also try other novels, such as the Four Great Classics, Liaozhai, Legends of the Tang Dynasty, etc. Because these have passed the test of time. Online novel fan fiction is actually the most difficult thing to write. Many online novels are only close to the minds of certain readers at that time, or some chapters are more exciting. If you want to add another story line to it, you must at least have writing skills close to those of the original author.

It's both watery and poisonous, and it can't even be described as basically defeating the enemy. It's all about being bullied and then slapped in the face. Why did you go there so early? Water for the sake of water, I really don't plan to change this problem. If you think there are too many people, just say so. There is no need to use various story excuses to trick readers into reading hydrology and poisonous articles.

Author, you can delete the comment. Yesterday, after I complained about you for a few words, you deleted my comment. If it doesn't work, it doesn't work. Is there something wrong with what I said?

Smiling but not smiling, touching the red mole on the nose, and calling her "little sister" with a slick face, please change it quickly, otherwise I don't know how many people will be dissuaded.

I don't want to watch anymore, I'm getting more and more cowardly

The main character is a loser. It's just garbage.

Summary: It's mediocre, tasteless and a pity to throw away.

I just wrote about Dragon and Snake. I have to add Zhe Tiandu, which is in a different system. How can I complete the second part of Dragon and Snake?

The world of dragons and snakes is not only not exciting, but also smelly and long. Immortal cultivators went to the dragon and snake world in the early stage to have sex. Even the world of Galaxy Emperor in the later stage has no aura. How can you still practice Taoism? It's outrageous. 😓

Forcibly creating a conflict, this plot is too awkward

Stop writing, let us go and let yourself go!

As soon as I got on the train, I started to use poison, and then it became more and more poisonous.

It's really painful to watch you write a novel, and it's not enjoyable at all.

The author later brought in private information, so it's better not to have anything to do with reality, 😴😴

What rubbish is written to smear the country?

Chapter 86: What the hell? Just put poison in front of you. Seeing this is extremely poisonous.

The world of Xianxia doesn't know the meridians and acupuncture points of the human body?

I won't want a eunuch, I'm sure I still haven't waited for the Shushan Volume

It sucks. The ending is outrageous 😰

Awesome, just reading the comments can make me unable to open the book 1

The main world also has elements of the Red Mansion, so it's difficult to write. The protagonist can't just wander around the world all the time. Let's just briefly touch on the main world.

I just subscribed to the latest chapter Jie Jie Jie Jie. It's really a bit awkward. Also, the author's next copy will be the Shushan volume. I can't wait to see the protagonist beat up Emei.

Take the time to update, don't stop updating at every turn