I Have a Lot of Talent, so It Will Be Very Easy to Fill in Next Time

I have a question, why do you want to play martial arts in reverse version? Changing paths is not that difficult, and the reverse version must be interesting to play. Now that everyone you care about is dead, why are you just letting it go? Isn't it because other ways can't extend life? Don't tell me that the ancestral laws are immutable. People are going to die. Everything else can be done later. Besides, it can also be transformed locally.

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The author is probably in his 20s, has no life experience, and what he writes is a bit taken for granted.

Writing a book review, the copy has basic logic, but I feel that the logic is there but not high. The linear narrative does not have any reversal, foreshadowing, or digging holes. It is easy to write in a self-motivated state when writing like this. For example: "I work on the front line of the power system. I work overtime every day, 365 days a year, and I do it voluntarily. In order to ensure the electricity consumption of every household in my jurisdiction, I constantly and voluntarily check the power supply." The aging of the electrical facilities... Ah! I am such a good person! How can I be so selfless? "This is embarrassing. I also think this character is a good person, but I know more clearly that I am reading a novel. This is a character in a novel. Because you said that when you voluntarily work overtime for 356 days, no readers will have a sense of substitution. If you are a workaholic who voluntarily works overtime every day for 365 days, who will read novels, right? This is just a metaphor. The character in your question is too monumental to have any sense of involvement at all. Then you write some touching sentences that seem very emotional and make the readers crawl with goosebumps.

The writing is not good, the knowledge is not enough, the imagination is not big, and the low-minded protagonist is not readable...

I have to say that the previous settings are okay. It's really hard to write about a simulator that suddenly appears. Many times when something goes wrong, readers will think about why you don't use an simulator. And because you want to highlight this tense atmosphere, you don't use simulators. Readers will think that using a few more simulators will reveal why you don't use them. Writing about real simulators is very difficult.

I just watched it, and I feel that it is better to directly say that the simulator is better. Otherwise, I feel that the singing voice of purple has increased. Is it a cry after birth? All the monsters in the world are dead. The protagonist said that there must be light... The protagonist directly comes to the world as a god, and directly evaluates 3S.

. . . . Needless to say, it was definitely a great read, but I was a bit speechless. I felt like it was a little bit toxic every time, but it always came back. At first, I thought the super brain talent was just a simulator, but it turned out that it had other functions. Then when I was having a meeting and having a meal, I thought the protagonist had become mentally ill at first, but it turned out that it was just a show for my teammates.

So far (chapters 1-30), the writing and plot are 80%, the theme is 85%, and the characterization (protagonist is 70%, supporting role is 90%). Keep up the quality and this book will be a hit. This should be a trumpet, right?

I'm really speechless. You keep telling me about common sense issues and that the author doesn't understand common sense. What else can you do besides showing off your limited IQ in such an inexplicable place? First of all, I checked the Baidu Encyclopedia on whether children can open their eyes. It turns out that children can open their eyes after birth and can see things. Unless the encyclopedia is wrong, don't argue with me. OK? Second, regarding the male protagonist's eating problem, I believe I have explained clearly the source of food for the underground homeless people. The reason why I mainly talk about eating moss is just to highlight the difficulty of survival in the underground world. In fact, they have bits and pieces of food fed by the above-ground world, ordinary creatures that have not yet mutated, bugs, mice, cockroaches... The male protagonist eats earthworms to supplement extra protein and nutritional intake. Do his parents eat shit outside every day from sunrise to sunset? Don't you bring other food back every day? You all said it's a matter of common sense. Since it's a matter of common sense, can't you think about it with your brains? Since eating moss and earthworms cannot feed the people in the underground world, there must be other sources of food in the underground world. Since the male protagonist's parents dare to have children, then there must be a living environment for children in the underground world. You have to think that I have common sense if I write down everything the male protagonist eats, drinks and eats three times a day, right? Otherwise, I will turn into a gangster and disgust people every day?

I don't know why it actually has 240,000 fans. I thought I found a good grass, but it turned out to be a poisonous grass. The writing is mediocre at best, the protagonist is like a straw bag, and a child less than ten years old unified the entire underworld. I skipped to the end later, thinking that it would be better. However, 3s was exposed as an S-level. The reason given was that I wanted to be more careful. Isn't the S-level high-profile enough? I really can't watch it. I guess my taste has changed.

No, what does it mean that the recently added books to the bookshelf have been updated collectively?

The first marriage is poisonous. In the last life, if you didn't push for marriage, you will get married in this life. It's still forced. Don't think one thing and do another. You can't make the decision in your own life. What's the difference between setting up a memorial arch. The most annoying thing in my life

After reading a few chapters, there are no major poisonous points, but there are many small ones, and the author lacks common sense.

I have read more than 30 chapters so far. Overall, alas, I just feel very embarrassed. The author completely misses that expressiveness. It gave me the impression of a chuunibyou patient, saying, similar to bursting, reality, smashing! Such unclear words. But people watching always feel embarrassed. I hope the author can improve these, otherwise it will really affect the sense of substitution. After all, I can't bear the dark history of my own past, let alone watching others suffer from chuunibyou...

I haven't finished the first world, but compared to other similar novels, this protagonist is too useless. After 16 years of infinite deduction, he is still a noob.

Doesn't the author think this kind of plot is boring? We obviously talked about the world of personal power, but ended up talking about armies and military wars endlessly, and the writing was stinky and long.

I have a question, in this world where everyone travels through time, what do schools teach? The world has been developing for so long, there are so many people who have traveled through time, and the assessment content can be discussed with each other, what should the school teach? Survival tips? Basic fighting, basic technology, basic medicine, basic training? It feels like these students don't know anything.

I've only read more than 20 chapters. To be honest, it's a bit awkward. The fight between homeless people in the sewers gave the impression of a national war.

After reading a few chapters, I have a question: If only the protagonist can simulate reincarnation and change his fate against the will of heaven, how can other reincarnated characters obtain reincarnation points? How can other people change their destiny if they don't know the fate line clearly?

It's really poisonous, as if the author has no life experience, and there are indescribable feelings of violation in many places.

Infinite deduction, perfect genes, executive authority, one of the protagonists in other novels has taken off immediately, but here you still have to buy a cheat book at a bargain price and cut off half a chapter, you can say whether you should or not.

At first I thought the others were okay, but why does the author always like to write the protagonist as 6-7 years old? This will discourage many people. So far I have seen the second world travel, I hope it won't be like this in the future. .

I really ran out of books to read at Qidian, or I have finished reading everything I could. I can force myself to read this kind of book... It's like I'm forcibly feeding myself something... But the terrible thing is, his book is awkward and some parts are wrong, it still has some merits, which makes you complain while still reading. Do you know what this feels like... It's like being pulled back halfway to death and then continuing to repeat such operations. I'm really unhappy. Outrageous

Although the author may have stopped writing, I still want to complain. The author's writing style is really speechless. Who taught you Chinese after school? Let's say it was taught by a physical education teacher. It feels a bit like complimenting you. I guess I learned it by myself while dreaming. I just asked what "after all the fun-loving teenagers closed their eyes", are they all dead? You can't just say that you fell asleep. You never check the article after you finish it and just publish it, right? I'm going to vomit just looking at it 🙂🙂. I usually don't comment on it. I really can't help it!

It's a pity that it's late. I wonder if anyone has told you not to assign intelligence attributes to the protagonist. How can you, an ordinary person, write a monster? If you write it, you will be scolded.

The first few worlds seemed fine. But the public world just can't stand it anymore. It's smelly and long. According to the settings, it can be written directly into a book. There is a person cultivating immortality and a dynasty competing for hegemony, which is a bit of a conflict. This model is generally suitable for Qi Luck Dynasty. In short, the world is written in a very chaotic way, and it becomes chaotic after the protagonist is assassinated. If in the end it is still a matter of personal strength that matters, why not focus all your energy on promoting the realm and engaging in military affairs in the first place? After becoming invincible in personal strength, he strives for world domination. Originally, it was possible to make good use of the military soul. For example, if the entire army's power was concentrated on the general through the military soul, he could exert great strength. In this way, the protagonist's strength can be briefly mentioned, and the story can be focused on fighting for world supremacy. Moreover, this fantasy world is not fantasy at all. It is written by ordinary people. It is too ordinary, just like ordinary people in the ordinary world. Wherever the upper limit is, it has skyrocketed and moved mountains and seas, and people all over the world have nothing to do with it. The army in the world of cultivating immortals is also written in the same way as ordinary people. In terms of strength, it depends on who has the most and who is well-equipped. Is ten thousand Qi training the same as ten thousand golden elixirs? Even if the enemy has 10,000 golden elixirs, our ancestors will be able to overcome them one by one. The little fox is not that rare, and he doesn't say what state she is in. Anyway, it's awesome, but it's all done with sugar and barbecue. The most annoying thing is the whole behind-the-scenes thing. You also need to understand the secrets of heaven and earth. If you have the desire to improve your strength, you can slap the world into ashes. Even if there are Zerg, the public enemy of heaven and earth. It is said that this is the territory of the reincarnated world for his younger brother to test. Why isn't the mark of reincarnation on top? When the sky falls, there is someone tall enough to support it. Why is there no one tall enough except the protagonist? Personally, I think the writing is too heavy. This kind of enemy has too many differences in strength. Reading a book is a pleasure, and it feels like beating the protagonist of BOOS to death with a slap in the face. It's a different feeling for the protagonist to go through all kinds of hardships and have his family members die and be beaten to death in the end.

Don't bother with the trainee's posts. You have to see for yourself whether they are good or not and whether they suit your taste.

The front is pretty good, but the back is not so good.

The first copy is so retarded, just forget about the nuclear earthworm. The struggle for power is too much like children's playing house.