Liver Progress Starts from Yiqijue

The plot is okay, but the water-filled chapters are almost overwhelming. It's not like it's free. Goodbye.

The writing is okay, but it's too watery. Chapter 3 is not as good as other books and Chapter 1 is too draggy

The standard mortal flow plus proficiency flow Xiaobaiwen, you can see that it is food and grass, not too poisonous (I don't feel it yet).

It's a very good novel. The pace is a little slow at the beginning, but the plot is really good and the writing is very realistic. However, the realm is blurred and there are too many types and slight flaws. Good luck, author.

Within thirty chapters, this book counts as food; within thirty to two hundred chapters, it becomes hay; between two hundred and two hundred and thirty-five chapters, it is a pity to throw it away if it is tasteless; after that, it is a pity to throw it away if it is tasteless. There are two flaws in this book First, there is a logic problem after joining Mr. Ji's subordinates, especially after starting the Genius List. Two, emotional dramas, writers who don't know how to write emotional dramas should stop writing them. The female ration was made to appear mentally retarded, and the male protagonist was also made to be a fool.

I was really convinced. The author went crazy adding narration and explanatory text: in one chapter, there were three moves in the ring, and the audience's disdain was written twice. Every time a move was made, the expressions and psychological activities must be written. Those who have Yan Yi write Yan Yi, and those who don't have Yan Yi write "surprise", "ferocious" and "unbelievable". Battle details? Is the battle exciting? Have no idea. The first move is for the protagonist to use sound attack. The second move is for the opponent to block the sound attack and use a special move. In the third move, the protagonist blocks it with a golden bell and then breathes fire. The fight is over. Full of water for 8 pages. After typing, let's give a summary, audience reaction and psychological description, and then two pages. The first update is completed, let's live together.

A woman's snow-white thighs, the sea is full of water. It is impossible not to drink water, but if you keep drinking it, you will feel nauseated.

It's not interesting or eye-catching to write about more than ten chapters of fighting in the arena. There are some outstanding descriptions in the middle, but they are drowned in the wonders of a large number of passers-by + idlers who don't know why. It is easy to think that these deletions have no impact on the plot. In fact, this is also the case. The article must be watered down. It is really difficult to read if it is dry, but it is enough to add water once. The same plot, the same exclamation and the same crowd of passers-by will only make people feel unhappy. Impatient, which makes more people give up. Speaking of water, it should also be a little more innovative. If nothing else, I have seen the plot in which Gothe was amazed several times in many books. This homogeneity is too serious and it cannot stand out. You may be emotionally aroused the first time, and you will feel it a little bit the second time. The third, fourth, and fifth time. This is not an uncommon plot. Too many people are like this, and the further back they are, the more they will suffer, and the water will be scarce.

I can't stand it anymore. Eighty percent of the content of one chapter is the description of the second generation mocking the protagonist and looking down on the protagonist? The actual plot doesn't progress much. It's really nonsense literature. Even if you insist on ridiculing it, forget it. The plot of the same thing is not developed. Five or six chapters in a row are changed to five or six people. Various psychological descriptions are made to look down on the protagonist.

When it comes to hydrology, I would like to follow the author as a starting point.

Can the author tell me why the last book, The Eunuch, suddenly disappeared? How can readers who have read that book read this book with confidence?

Why do they always write about him as if he is nothing if he doesn't practice martial arts? Modern fighting skills are useful as long as you are that humanoid creature, okay? How come things like chokeholds and crossbars are useless? Many skills are useful, okay? Even if you haven't learned it, you should still listen to it. Even if a modern person hasn't learned it, but you can think about it after listening to it, you should be able to practice it a little bit. Besides, there are still plug-ins. Don't devalue modern things and make them worthless just by time travel, okay?

This is my first time reading a book by this author, and I feel that this author has no outline at all in his novels. I have only written 104 chapters so far. Logically speaking, there are not many, but settings have been added frequently. A setting must be added almost every dozen or so chapters, or even multiple settings. I've only reached chapter sixty-six now, but this has happened at least five or six times. This is not so much adding settings as changing settings. Because these settings are made out of nothing. It's not the kind of setting that builds an entire novel world and then gradually fleshes it out. Instead, it has no beginning and no end, and the settings are forced into it very abruptly. For example, the name of the continent that the protagonist travels to appears only dozens of chapters later, which is outrageous. Lingsha, such an important setting, can be said to be the foundation of all martial arts techniques. It was actually dozens of chapters later that the name appeared for the first time, and it was only mentioned briefly. How important are bloodline awakening and gene awakening? Well, this is also a situation. There are many more settings that I won't even mention. These settings are placed in other books, and each one is enough to lead to a whole chapter of the story. And the core setting like Lingsha must be throughout the book. As a result, the author just said it in such an understatement and forgot about this setting after this chapter, never mentioning it again. It gives the impression that the author didn't think of anything in advance. The story is now written and there is no need for such a thing. Then make up one right away. This part of the story has passed and is no longer needed, so I don't think about him anymore. The author has no overall plan at all and writes wherever he thinks. This is not impossible. Many talented authors have great control and can write masterpieces without using an outline. But the key is that you are not these geniuses. If you really do this, this book will be ruined.

Deleted. After it was put on the shelves, it started to be flooded. A hundred households arena and more than ten chapters were served.

This one hundred and thirty-four chapter of thermal power generation is too poisonous. The author's brain circuit is indeed a bit unusual! I died from poison

I wrote 10 chapters after just one fight. I just need to read the table of contents. I know the content even if I don't subscribe.

Are you getting more and more out of touch with the topic as you write? Your solar body has always been the lowest, and you have forgotten it?

Mr. Ji can be discarded after he comes out. The author should have sold it to the studio. The protagonist changes from a flesh-and-blood person to a crooked-mouthed dragon king.

The imaginary steam is not real steam. The temperature of real steam is higher than 100 degrees. Steam power requires a very strong shell and very good sealing. At present, your imagination cannot convince me as a reader.

All the characters in the book are slowly becoming mentally retarded.

Absolutely, the ancient oriental world of high martial arts uses genes, it is better to use blood, and it is not a modern world that combines science and martial arts.

It's really stupid. Fortunately, I'm the first V and I have full discount coupons. Otherwise, I'd be at a loss.

Did someone change the writing after it was put on the shelves? I feel that the writing is not of the same level.

It's too watery, now I'm dancing looking

Even if the author enters the palace, he still leaves a message.

Logically speaking, the author should have sent

What's the use of having so many talents and skills? Have you thoroughly studied the body of the sun? Just relying purely on talent and skill level is not as good as hay.

I didn't even say anything about your word count, and now you've simply disappeared.

There was no warning about the cutting, and they didn't even come out to say anything. They didn't even try to fool them.

Three eunuchs in a row. This number is useless