I've Already Founded the Country, but You Say I Haven't Traveled Through Time?

There is no need to pursue it, the author has already written about the collapse. According to the previous setting, the country of Poseidon is countless times larger than the current area of ​​the earth. As of the latest chapter, I feel that it may not be as big as Australia.

I was a little scared when I saw that the comment area was so extreme, but I still wanted to take a look first. I didn't expect it to be very good. I suggest the author control the comments and continue to update. If you are a eunuch, I will draw a circle and curse you.

I originally thought that the subject matter was novel after reading the first few chapters, but the more I read, the more and more something is wrong. I have read more than 30 chapters and feel that these are not good 1. There are too many descriptions of women (water) and things will turn against each other. I feel that the author has a worm in his head 2. The plot of each chapter is originally watery and spans so much, I It is recommended to write one thing in 10 chapters, or describe the matter clearly in one chapter 3. A little bit of wisdom, the protagonist's national language is Chinese, and his race is yellow. When his scouts discovered that there were yellow victims and they could speak Chinese, they did not report it immediately. They just said that an unknown race appeared. Also, the mental state of these victims must not be that good. They were wearing modern clothes and had no armor or weapons. As a scout, couldn't you observe this? There is also Qingqiu Ziyue, who is so silly in portrayal, and the protagonist gives her such a high official position. If she really fights against an outside country and is killed in a matter of seconds, why not just treat her as a powerful soldier? Can't the commander be that birdman? At least she is smart 4. The plot description is poor. When the sea giants destroyed the expedition fleet, it was mentioned in a few words. Originally, this plot should be described a little bit, such as people's psychological reactions, the reaction of the expedition fleet, escape, or what to say. I think I can write two chapters here, just like describing a woman who keeps flirting with women. Not only this, there are many places that could be described to make the content richer, but these were not written out. I only saw which woman was doing what she was doing, what the protagonist said to the woman, and the protagonist's strategy and combat power were not really shown at all. Identified as a small poisonous weed

First-rate creativity, second-rate plot, third-rate writing

I give you one last chance, leave the big pen position, subscribe to a big subscription, continue to write and delete it directly, what do you think?

It's extremely watery and disgusting. Please delete the book and say goodbye.

Write less about women and descriptions. You have nothing to do when you become a king. It is boring to write too much. This world and myths are waiting for you to conquer. That is what a man is...

One hundred points, I am not short of this dollar. I just want to praise that this book has the qualities to become a god, and the author also has the appearance of a great god. Because he is so talented, just like the great author from Qidian.

To be honest, the setting of this novel is very good. It's just that the author is really too weak, the plot is super procrastinating, and the story has almost no advancement. As the super-powered king of a country, all his subordinates are super-powered people. As a result, he quietly sneaked into a group of mortals, fearing that his identity would be exposed. It was really a suffocating operation. Originally, the protagonist could make the remaining people listen to the protagonist's words by killing those Tianzhu people, but it ended up being a waste of more than ten chapters. In addition, a very speechless female character was arranged. She only appeared once or twice, but she appeared in every chapter, with a higher appearance rate than the protagonist. The key is that her inner activities are even more speechless =_=. The above are all personal opinions, don't comment if you don't like them.

The idea is great, the article is bad, but the combat power is not accurate. One moment, fighting the outside army on the island is like playing, another moment, several mercenaries can fly inside, one moment the missiles are like toys and cannot break through the defense, and the next moment, machine guns dare to run rampant on the island.

Author, if you want to become popular, you don't need water. This has just been put on the shelves. You are so good, you only have one or two hundred people, and you have ruined so many chapters. The key is that all your troops have superpowers. They are not ordinary people. Do you need to be so careful?

What a waste of my subscription. I wrote 70 chapters before it was released. If I switch to a novel with a tighter plot, I finished it in 7 chapters! Keep talking nonsense and talking nonsense. I thought it would be better after it was put on the shelves, but it was exactly the same! Don't you know how to write novels if you don't write nonsense?

Although I hate to say this, this is due to the author's poor ability to control the rhythm. The climax is diluted in all kinds of water, making it impossible to get excited. Originally the idea was very good and the writing was not bad, but it was really too rough and the author was like a sea king! The problem is that quality is also very important. For example, One Ton Big Apple's "My Years as a Marvel Superhero" is also very good, but the level of quality is very high. Many readers even left messages asking him to less advance the plot and write more about daily life. Can you believe it? ! But what about this book? It's really watery, meaningless. Many dialogues, paragraphs and descriptions make you feel bored. For example, the interactions between several commanders make you feel awkward. Because they are too imbecile, you can't feel the charm of the characters at all, and you will only think that they are a group of retarded people. The author seems to have no experience interacting with the opposite sex at all, and he has no way of showing what kind of women are attractive. This only proves that the author has too little experience in getting along with the opposite sex, and it is full of all kinds of inappropriate otaku-style obscenities. Finally, the author, you must not have learned mathematics well when you were studying. You can't tell which one is higher, the loss of readers due to the low number of words, or the benefits brought to you by those who stay. I admire you too!

It looks great, but is the pace a bit slow? Did humans discover it too early? Unless the extraordinary power is particularly powerful, I really think those forbidden weapons are just decorations. I hope the protagonist can survive in a stalemate and surpass the power outside, and at least limit the entrance and exit from the outside, otherwise it will be uncomfortable.

Chapter 36 begins with the topic. The protagonist realizes that he has not traveled through time and is still on earth. Wow, normally, I shouldn't have explained it in the first three pictures. Is this too watery? And I feel that the amount of information in each chapter is very small. It either describes the appearance or some psychological activities. Shui's technique is really good.

This book is quite good, at least it is still good to read so far, but it would have been better if it was less watery. By the way, there are too many descriptions of women. Personally, I think this description would not be so objectionable if it contained 30% less content.

Why do you want to add a younger sister? I feel like it's a failure. Isn't it good to focus on the Great Wilderness race? I feel like it's hard to deal with family issues.

To be honest, I don't understand what Pig's Foot wants to do. He has a sharp weapon in his hand and is murderous, but he still has to work hard even though he has invincible strength against survivors. Is Pig's Foot's experience of fighting in a wild world fake? It doesn't make sense if it's because you're afraid of exposing yourself. Are you afraid that the survivors will have firearms? But firearms may not be able to defeat pig's feet, and Qingluan's surveillance is not fake! Besides, if outsiders can come over and use scientific and technological means, they will definitely expose the country of pig's feet. If they can't get through, wouldn't it be the same if the pig's feet are exposed or not? The most important thing now is to quickly pick up the survivors and develop their own country to face external threats with strong strength. How long is the Survivor storyline? Is it necessary? Isn't it good to place the descriptions of the various characters of the survivors in the context of the development of the country? Shouldn't the focus of this book be the development of pig's feet in the wild world, and then show the game between the country of pig's feet and the outside world? It's all on the shelves, at least give me some useful information! I don't know if my idea is right or not. I hope book friends can correct me.

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I feel like the beginning is a bit slow. I rush into it with the main character and modern people meeting each other. Why haven't they met yet after tens of thousands of words? If it weren't for the author's good writing, I might have given up and continued reading.

It's so damn watery. It's just a waste of money.