Gaowu: the Beginning of the Outer Body Training Method

It's this kind of plot where you lead a group of losers to pass the assessment. Is it interesting? This examiner has no brains, arranging this kind of team assessment

The plot is old-fashioned, the connection is jerky, and it seems that one routine follows another, making it difficult to follow. I have read novels for more than ten years, and I have basically seen all the routines. I look familiar with each one, which makes me feel very uneducated. The article has no content, and many plots appear suddenly. The ending is abrupt, the writing in the middle is too jerky, and a lot of things are not explained. It looks like a domestic movie sent for review, with the plot cut to pieces. I can't stand it until chapter 30. I hope to work on the coherence of the plot, the writing of the article, etc.

The normal plot should be that big data shows that you are getting stronger at an abnormal speed, and you are asked to tell you how to get stronger. Then if you don't submit, you are kidnapped, brainwashed, tortured, or coerced. With the help of martial arts and technology, the punishment you receive is countless times more cruel than being cut to death by a thousand cuts. You are killed in an instant, so you live a life worse than death as an experimental subject. Life, everyone you know was secretly killed. Under the experiments of the experimenters, although you became a little stronger, it was still useless. The speed of becoming stronger was incomparable with the people who used the things you squeezed out to become stronger. Then the world was unified, and all the dissatisfied people were killed by the strong ones who got you. Everyone in the world was completely controlled by means, and your life was hopeless.

Let's develop more cheats. It's also good to publish the skills in exchange for resources, provided that the protagonist has eliminated them.

It's the same old cliché, the main character is kind-hearted, but she's still a little virgin and boring.

The plot is relatively smooth, and there are not many chapters. It would be best to revise the three views of the protagonist.

He said he was a descendant of martyrs and was adopted by his uncle's family, then turned around and said he was malnourished. Is this a secret expression?

The plot is cliche and blunt, and pig's trotters can't be written without both parents dying. Is it so good to have pig's trotters as waste material? Originally, the golden finger was only an assistant. People are not good at it. Even with the golden finger, it is impossible to reach the end, unless it is a pig's foot. This is the current situation of most Xiaobaiwen

Forget it, support a subscription, written by the whole studio, that book is a routine to get the 5000 years of the end of the world before the college entrance examination

Overall, it's good, but the plot is too tight. I feel like I'm rushing to show off every time, either pretending to be cool or on the way to show off. Being too deliberate makes the real genius seem like a waste, and the supporting characters are all dumbed down.

Another woman with good martial arts scores, I don't even want to see it.

I feel like I can't stand it more and more

After reading the introduction, I found it interesting. Then I looked at the catalog and scrolled down. All I saw were assessments, assessments, assessments. . . .

Eat it for a few more months to keep it safe and then have it cut off.

Why isn't it updated? Are you a eunuch?

One chapter a day, I really don't have the mood to read it

I hope the author can describe the realm in more detail