Reborn Heiress: Dreamer

Here's a suggestion: less preaching. The first half of your previous book, *Du Niang*, was alright, but the second half was entirely didactic. A huge portion of the chapters weren't telling a story, but rather the author's own reflections on various theories and classics. This book is even worse; it's only been a few chapters and you're already writing about your own interpretations of values.

Don't try to figure out why this book was so unenjoyable to read. I feel like the protagonist is becoming more and more assimilated. His life of over thirty years feels like that of a native, while Fairy Jinghuan seems more like a time traveler.

This is truly a rare gem of a book. The logic and intelligence are both top-notch, and the protagonist's thinking is mature and natural! It's probably the pinnacle of Orange Literature right now! It's a pity that most of Orange's readers are currently middle school students and some college students—naive kids with no social experience! A gem is being wasted!

The lecturing is indeed too much. How can anyone be willing to pay to read the questionnaire? For those who understand reason and have their own values, isn't it a waste of money to read nonsense? For those who come to relax and have fun, isn't it just paying money to suffer?

Is it a lily? Can it increase lifespan?

Brother, just write your story properly like you did with Ferrywoman, don't stir up trouble when it's over a hundred pages long. You don't care about the comments going crazy. Those three little demons only did a few odd jobs in the end, don't completely ignore the comments.

Oh, is this another 100% change? 😍

The protagonist would have been better off being just an ordinary student; this feels a bit out of place. Putting everything else aside, she's a fairy, treated like prey by humans, existing only to be used for sand-firing, and yet the protagonist believes everything she's told? So naive!

It's been over 200 chapters, who is the couple?

At first, I thought it was pretty good, but after reading more, I felt the book's plot was developed solely to preach values, and the theme served to reinforce those values ​​(though it doesn't bother me now). While the protagonist isn't perfect, he's described as almost perfect—unafraid of fear or pain. Although the novel acknowledges these negative emotions, the reader doesn't feel them deeply.