Mystery: the Queen's Path

The heroine of the female knight/sword bearer

The importance of Klein cannot be replaced by the protagonist. I don't understand why Klein was deleted. You might as well write a book by yourself instead of writing a fanfic. Now that the plot has not fully unfolded, hurry up and catch up

Really don't waste your money! ! ! ! What an exaggeration!

The essence of the Lord of Mysteries is the Tarot Society, and it doesn't matter whether the rest is involved or not.

Very few people write articles about mysterious female protagonists. Please vote and look forward to it.

The new book has been signed and can be fed. I guarantee you will not suffer any loss or be deceived.

There are too many unnecessary adjectives in the descriptions and dialogues, which makes it look awkward and a bit draggy. It would be better if the writing were more concise. I haven't finished watching the original plot, so I won't comment on it, but the protagonist's style of pretending to be a god is gone. The first member, Miss Wisdom, behaves a bit too casually when facing the gods, which is not in line with the social background where belief is common. Too brave to show any awe.

The heroine feels quite suitable

Is there no Klein in this book?

The writing is quite good, but the part about clothing is really not flattering. Why don't you copy clothing design?

In fact, I feel that you can write a similar novel without writing a fanfic at all. You can just make some changes based on this novel. It's hard to explain in one word what you wrote in this fanfic. You say it's a fanfic, but you don't have the protagonist of the original work. I personally think that fan fiction is where the protagonist drives the development of the plot from a God's perspective. It is unreasonable to rashly delete the original characters. You can add plots, add characters, and even change the outcome of things, but you just can't delete people. Because if all the characters are changed, this is no longer a fan novel, and you can completely write your own novel.

Thank you (Yu root) for your 12 recommendation votes

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It's very beautiful, but when I'm pretending to be a god, I feel like I talk too much, which makes me look uncomfortable and doesn't feel like a god (personal feeling, don't comment if you don't like it)

Let me give you a tip. I know it personally. I hope that when the protagonist pretends to be a true god, he will speak concisely and with fewer words. Only in this way can he be convincing and not need to explain too much, because you are a god and God cannot be blasphemed.

Aren't you afraid of being blocked when writing Lily on Qidian? It's better to get married. Lily = GL, writing BL will result in a prison sentence, not to mention GL?

Hiss - this long paragraph of text and a lot of names reminded me of the first time I saw my best friend. It gave me a headache.

The writing is good, but the protagonist is not strong enough. Up to now, the protagonist is only a female knight of Sequence 9. As the lowest level of extraordinary, she is always involved in the Sequence, Demigod, and Angel. Isn't this a stored attempt to seek death? At least the protagonist needs to be promoted to mid-sequence to be involved in these things. As a result, the protagonist encountered this kind of thing just after he became sequence 9.