I Have a Book of the Myriad Heavens

Yang Yinglian

Consort Wan

Hokusai, Zhou Miaoxuan

Zhou Miaotong

It seems like it would be better if you removed "The Legend of the White-Haired Witch" and "The Smiling, Proud Wanderer" from the story, since the fighting power levels are different.

That's awful! Iron Head died, and the protagonist immediately went to a brothel to play with women. He really doesn't value life that much. What's the difference between him and a bandit? Just wearing a disguise...

I have a friend with an incredibly strong sense of justice. He's about to die, and he said he wants to criticize these kinds of novels more before he dies. So, author, please write as much as you can, preferably at least 20,000 words a day, to fulfill my friend's last wish, okay?

What a load of nonsense! When asked how to take down bandits, the protagonist replied, "Everyone grab a knife and just hack and slash." Anyone could tell that. Stubborn and brainless, it's just ridiculous.

The main plot revolves around sleeping with all the women in the story; the rest of the plot is a mess with no logic. As long as it's coherent, that's fine. This book is just a harem novel.

It makes no sense. He leaves the injured he rescued at the inn and goes off to fetch water for three days. He's already killed someone halfway through and then goes off to have fun. This has happened several times. It's ridiculous.