The Path of Ordinary People

It is a rare and very good book written by a mortal fan. I will continue to read it🤭🤭🤭🤭

This is the most unrealistic mortal fanfic. You can cultivate immortality all the way by blowing up the Nascent Soul. There are opportunities available in the store. If you don't give a golden finger, you can multiply the resources of the mortal world ten thousand times and feel overweight. Is this still the mortal world where you have to fight for your life to build the foundation pill? The human world does not have that many resources. I encountered loneliness along the way. . . The protagonist's adventure flow is inherently unreasonable. . Tiannan has the most resources. Yuanying relies on time to chaos the sea of ​​stars and is close to becoming a god. There are only a few gods in the human world. The original books all talk about the blood-colored forbidden land which is the greatest opportunity in the human world. Where did you go to steal the Qiyu Spiritual World resources that were tightly controlled? All the mature resources of nearly Dacheng were harvested. . Han Li also cultivated it by himself by picking up scraps and using small bottles. If you don't give a golden finger to travel through mortals and become immortals, there will be no resources left for you to go through the Mahayana tribulation. All the resources have been collected, and the rest are immature. . Look at Han Li even throwing a plug-in to Han Li, everyone knows that without a plug-in it is absolutely impossible to practice Mahayana.

This is the most speechless mortal fan I have ever seen, bar none. To tell a joke, although the protagonist is a casual cultivator and does not have a gold finger, the mortal world is peaceful, opportunities come to his door in turn, and various resource shops can be bought casually in the market. After buying, no one has killed him, so the protagonist can easily achieve Nascent Soul in a hundred chapters. The author is really 🐮🍺!

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If it's too exaggerated, it's not easy to read; if it's not cheating, it's too ordinary and uninteresting. So it's impossible to satisfy everyone, just write normally author

I am really short of books, so I read more than 30 chapters, and they are unremarkable. A batch of water is all about foundation building. It doesn't matter if the skills are not good. There are only two spells and no craftsmanship. Thunder attribute materials come out batch after batch. Although they are separated, the quantity is so large that no one else doubts it. The only one or two battles describe the picking of vegetables. To sum up: it is like reading a primary school composition, a poisonous weed. The only bright spot is that the author can insist on writing so much without cutting it off.

I read about forty or fifty chapters of your book and found two problems: First, the skins of fellow mortals are published. Except for two plots similar to those mentioned by mortals (the grandson of the Xiao family and the alchemy-forming monk who died in the Yuling Sect), the rest have nothing to do with mortals. Of course, there may be some connection with mortals or Old Demon Han in the later chapters, but at least we haven't found any yet. Let's talk about this later. Secondly, there is no golden finger in novels about cultivating immortals, so most people may not have the desire to continue reading. At the same time, it was also discovered that since it was a casual cultivating immortality, the monks were not found to be competing for resources and taking action. On the contrary, everyone is a good young man in a society governed by the rule of law, modest and polite. So far, this book has not even been successful in signing contracts. The above two points, especially the second point, are the key reasons, right? !

I swear here, if the protagonist does not reach the Golden Finger stage, it will be difficult to reach the Dan Formation stage. If he can reach the Foundation Establishment stage, he will be considered a high incense.

After seeing more than 300 pictures, I couldn't hold it any longer. It wasn't until about 400 chapters when I saw the protagonist being defeated by a peer and handing over part of his soul to serve as a guard dog that I was instantly poisoned and couldn't get up. Delete bookDelete book

This chapter of Ascension is really funny. After working hard for hundreds of years, one returns to before liberation.

So far it seems to be the best one written by Mortal Fans. 👍

Among mortals, the protagonist is the worst offender.

I couldn't stand the first few pictures and quit them. 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

I vomited when I saw Chapter 23. Two medium-grade magic weapons cost more than 500 spirit stones. In Mortal Cultivation Legend, more than 200 spirit stones can buy top-grade magic weapons.

The original work is a cool novel, but this one is reality. Pretty good

I'm speechless. Did the protagonist prepare four masterpieces for time travel? Ordinary people, besides the title of the book, who can remember what is written in each chapter and section of the four great classics? I would like to ask the author, how can you restore the contents of four novels without checking the information and relying solely on memory and handwriting? The idea of ​​making money through time travel and writing books simply defies logic ~ Poison!

The map of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality is very big! The majority of maps have not been developed by humans, and there are also many desperate and dangerous places! It is very unreliable to travel across countries during the Qi refining period, not to mention traveling across multiple countries without any accidents or anything like that!

This Mortal series is still very good. It is a step up from other similar series. The eunuch who can write so many chapters without interruption is much better than most authors. If you don't want to read it, don't get into the author's mentality here. Support the author, keep writing, and always write in your own style. There is nothing unacceptable for the protagonist to be dependent on someone else. Recognizing yourself is the reality. The limitations of fandom are indeed very large.

When they were in the human world, they were all on equal terms with each other. In the spirit world, they became their younger brothers, and their cultivation was even pushed to a higher level by Han Li. It was too embarrassing for the traveling army.

The advantage is that the plot has ups and downs, does not copy the original text, and the performance is not abrupt. Disadvantages The protagonist and characters in the play are all inexplicable and neurotic. For example, under the concern of fellow seniors, the protagonist thinks that it is none of your business to be sick. After going to the spirit world, he was inexplicably betrayed by the people around him. Instead, he promised to never leave the spiritual pet he brought into the spirit world. When the protagonist arrived in the spirit world, he suddenly turned against him and killed him without any reason. He created several clones and suddenly they were all killed, and the protagonist didn't react at all.

This is a serious matter. The Blood Seal has been taken into consideration. MD, will the Firebird come back? But when it comes to going to the fairy world, it's better to go as a human being. That's a story for another day. It's okay to return the Blood Seal, the Fire Bird is back, and the resources for reaching the peak of True Spirit are in place, it doesn't matter if you want the Blood Seal or not. After a person with a high level of cultivation takes over the Spirit King, he can go to other interfaces to play. Don't mess with these birds anymore. If you do it, it will be troublesome

It's just that Han Li is the protagonist of the original work. He can't do things like assisting others to ascend. In this late stage of the spiritual world, Han Li's face is good. After this guy leaves, will he still look at people's faces? Who can bear this? To be honest, my strength is not enough, I have to be enough. Han Li said something about helping others, and Yuan Yao was his role model.

I'm here to comment again. After seeing about 250 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. I feel that the character of the protagonist is vague, the main plot line is vague, and the breakthrough and promotion are vague. It is just that the Tiannan Dajin chaos in the sea of ​​​​stars keeps changing places to fight, and people die in different places. . . Like some people commented before, neurotic.

The sentences are fluent, but I can't understand them...

It looks good, it really looks good, and it has a strong sense of immersion.

I have read about 230 chapters, and I think it is pretty good. Most of them are original content. The writing is also good. Personally, I feel there are some shortcomings. For example, from foundation building to promotion to Nascent Soul, the upgrade is very vague, and you will reach Nascent Soul very quickly. . The cultivated spirit beast died, the second Yuan Ying died, and the split soul Xiao Hong self-destructed again. The split soul is always causing trouble outside, and the protagonist's main soul is practicing in seclusion, which is a bit strange. . . Some people like to watch multiple female protagonists, and some people like to watch invincible and refreshing novels from the same period. . After arriving in the Jin Dynasty, I have been preparing to compete with Lao Mo Han. As a result, in the late Yuanying period, when I was a great monk, I had a fair fight with Lao Mo and was beaten up by the Han model worker. It was a bit strange. It felt like I had not thought about how to write it, and it was a bit abrupt.

I feel that the spiritual root setting in mortals is not perfect, so don't the five-element attributes of the cultivation techniques correspond to the techniques? When you absorb earth spiritual energy, you can also cast fireballs, ice needles, and other attribute spells, as well as the heavenly spiritual roots during the Qi training period. The alien spiritual roots do not show special effects because they are just training blocks. For example, if the ice spiritual roots cultivate ice attribute skills, can't they be more powerful? The Ice Needle Technique is bigger and more powerful, Frozen Thousand Miles, etc. I feel that there is not much exploration in the Five Elements attribute.

Isn't the fairyland chapter finished?

The author writes well. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Click on the avatar to go directly.

As far as mortal fan fiction goes, this one is pretty good! It's a pity that there is no sequel to Fairyland! It is highly recommended to continue writing the Fairy World chapter!