Tokyo Boy Doesn't Believe in Love

It's not easy

It's quite awkward. I thought it was about an energy-saving male protagonist when I read the title. When I went in, I saw that the female characters in it were all based on their looks. They pounced on them one by one, making all kinds of strange statements, touching the soft flesh on their foreheads, etc. Please work harder.

Element detection: 1. The protagonist is a time-traveler 2. The protagonist has been hit by love in his previous life 3. The setting of Chinese time-travelers + Japanese high school students 4. The protagonist is very handsome 5. The main theme of this book is relaxed daily life? 6. There is no extraordinary element yet, I don't know if there is one. 7,. . . . . . . (To be continued)

Japanese students have special sportswear in physical education classes, which is considered a kind of school uniform. In Chapter 7, I saw a female student running in a skirt. It's impossible. Even if there is a physical test in Chinese physical education class, the teacher will tell the girls not to wear skirts. The details determine success or failure. If you are not serious, someone will always notice and moisturize first.

I looked at those Japanese names for a long time, but I couldn't tell who was who. They were too confusing and difficult to recognize. It would be better to simplify them, which is easier for me to remember. It took me a long time to figure out who the protagonist was, and the supporting characters were still a mess.

Emperor added my childhood time

What should I do if there is only one chapter left in the manuscript?

The plot is quite flowing, like a detailed outline

It was recommended by the daily guide, and after reading twenty chapters, I felt that although it wasn't amazing, it was still okay and was enough to pass the time. Please vote for recommendations in the past two days, and if you are still reading the paid chapters, you can support it with a monthly vote.

Congratulations. I haven't seen Sanjiejun's poems for a year. I miss you so much. It turns out you are writing light novels. Come on! ! !

Woohoo, finally found a book that I can read.

When will the ex-girlfriend appear?

As shown in the picture

It would be great if the female protagonists were all anime heroines. First, they would have their own backgrounds and personalities, which would be easier to write. Second, they would be well-known and attractive. There is no need for more, just girls like Megumi Kato, Shiha Kasumigaoka, Rina Takasaka, Yui Yuigahama, Saeko Busujima, plus a few ladies like Sayuri Sawamura, Sayuri Takagi, Mrs. Yuigahama, Momma Sakurajima Mai, Mommy Hinazuru, Hana Kirisaki, Mrs. Yukinoshita, Yuko Amaha.

I feel that the plot moves too fast, and the characters of each heroine are not distinctive, and the characters are not obvious. There is a lack of lines and plots to reflect the personalities of different heroines. They all have the same character, that is, they all like the male protagonist?

It feels like there is no main plot. Give the protagonist a career line.

What happens if you don't inherit your parents' debt and house? Shouldn't these two be considered inheritance? And isn't Japan's inheritance tax quite high?

The writing is a bit dry, with little foreshadowing from the teacher and the proprietress, and this gay friend. Well, after reading dozens of chapters, I feel like it's just for fun. Is there any main plot line?

Evaluate it, from the basic skills of using words and language, it is very good. But from a plot point of view, no, there is no contradiction or conflict, which leads to insufficient characterization of the characters. After reading thirty or forty chapters, I close the book. For an hour at most, I will forget those characters. It takes more effort to write the characters more deeply into people's hearts. More psychological and scene detail descriptions can make people immersed in the scene.