Invincible, I Pass Through the Heavens

Although the writing is different from the fixed upgrade route of most authors, this kind of random travel is much more interesting, but the writing is all about the scenes that are mentioned in one stroke, which are superficial and have no sense of participation.

What are you writing about? It takes a while to finish a world with just a few pictures.

You put it on too quickly, 20 pictures in one world is enough, the most important thing is to be sexy enough. It's better to have a bug.

It's a great idea if the author recommends his own book in all daily posts.

The little black guy created by the protagonist has good ideas and ideas. I saw that the protagonist traveled to Douluo Continent and got a gourmet tablecloth spirit similar to that in Doraemon. In a novel I read, Doraemon's gourmet tablecloth is used to the extreme, because no food can appear on the gourmet table. So the author in that book wants to test whether he can create thousand-year-old vermillion fruit, ten-thousand-year-old ginseng, three-thousand-year-old flat peach from heaven, and other genius treasures that are useful for spiritual practice? The fact is that the efficacy of medicine and the energy in the body are not that high. When making flat peaches, he almost exploded the gourmet tablecloth. Later he thought of using the Woodcutter's Fountain prop to throw the gourmet tablecloth into it. The goddess of the spring appeared and said: Are these the gold and silver gourmet tablecloths you dropped? Then the protagonist replied no, the spring water goddess said you are an honest person, and the spring water goddess rewarded him with gold and silver enhanced gourmet tablecloths, plus the original tablecloth. After getting the enhanced version of the table layout, you can finally realize more advanced genius treasures. The gold gourmet tablecloth can embody the three-thousand-year-old flat peach and the three-turn golden elixir, and the silver tablecloth can embody the ten-thousand-year-old peach and one-turn golden elixir. I want to say that the protagonist's martial spirit can completely manifest that genius treasure, thousand-year-old red fruit, ten-thousand-year-old ginseng and so on. Don't just focus on skills and the like. The last novel I read (Ten Thousand Me Across the Heavens) was similar to a time-traveling story in which 10,000 protagonists were split into 10,000. They once traveled to the Douluo world, and one of the awakened spirits was Doraemon. There were 9 spirit rings, including a bamboo dragonfly, a magnifying light, a shrinking light, a lime hat, a time wrapping skin, and the last spirit ring was a prop-enhancing mirror that could copy everything. They copied the King's Treasure during the Holy Grail War, and copied the Star of Deviation from Heaven and Earth. So sometimes don't underestimate Douluo Continent. Their fighting strength may not be that strong, but their martial arts may bring us unexpected effects.

Is it always good to read a good article? I even lost my body in the middle. Is that really a sign of acceptance?

Dashuibi's traditional skills: Protagonist attribute version

There is no desire to read in this format

What rubbish is written. A long introduction, when you meet a character, the reasons and consequences are given. When you move a hand, it is either an introduction or a plot. When you cut it off with a knife, you need to introduce the sword technique. Who has practiced it and how it is? There is no bullshit in one chapter. Rubbish. Waste of my traffic.

As long as you read enough novels, anime, and movies, you can keep writing. After all, this kind of writing can really be done by me 😂

When you arrive in a world, you just pick up garbage, collect secrets, collect good things, strengthen yourself, and then list a bunch of data to show how strong you are, and then turn around and leave without participating in any plot. Can this thing be called a novel?

It's the first time I've come to the high-level world and I'm on my knees. We can understand it, after all, there's a gap in strength! The second time the result was even more outrageous: It was okay for the thing you created to betray you and you could ignore it, but the creation actually wanted to kill the protagonist. The protagonist could still understand the creation and forgive it. How did you think about this? It doesn't matter if you betray and run away, but if you want to kill the protagonist after betraying him, this can be forgiven! It's equivalent to initiating divorce after your wife cheats on you, which is understandable; but if your wife cheats on you and brings an adulterer to kill you, the protagonist can also forgive her. What do you think? Betrayal is okay, but it threatens the protagonist's own safety, and the protagonist still looks indifferent, which is understandable. This is hard to accept! ! ! You said that it's okay if you can't encounter random time travel. Why do you have to write that the protagonist can understand the thoughts of creation? People want to kill you, but you act like you understand. This makes the protagonist look useless!

It feels like it can be used as an outline. Hahaha

The water has been filled, when will it be updated? !

Wow, brother, is it so poisonous? It's been smooth sailing before, but why does it start to be poisonous as soon as it's on the shelves? I've lost all my wealth by pretending to be a mortal cultivating immortality. How can I keep reading this? That sentence is good. If the heroine is lost, the reader is willing to read dozens of chapters to save the heroine. If the storage bag is lost and cannot be solved within one chapter, the reader will want to kill the author.

To talk nonsense, I have never seen the three major migrant anime, Fire Death Sea, but I understood the general plot of the two anime, Naruto and Pirates, by reading the fan novels. Except for the details, the general events, I know 7788, but I have not watched Bleach, because there are very few fan novels about Bleach on the Internet, and the most popular ones are Naruto and Pirates.

Seeing that 108 can be discarded, what I wrote before is so impressive. When a mortal is cultivating immortality in less than a second, only the soul escapes, and the physical body is directly left behind. Is it a stupid coin setting? The soul can travel through time, why can't the physical body run together? It's really rubbish. The title of the book is still invincible, but it will be invincible when the book is finished.

Really just passing through the heavens...

I didn't read it, I just flipped through the table of contents. This book gave me the impression that it was a no-brainer. To be honest, even if you travel through the world, you have to distinguish which worlds you can wear and which worlds you cannot wear. This needs to be divided well. Also, if you write a world as an author, you only write these few pictures, which is of no use at all. A world can be written in just a few pictures. What is written in it? If you write like this, you won't write ten worlds, you will write ten thousand worlds, and no one will read ten thousand chapters. No matter how many chapters a junk novel has, it will still be junk. No matter how few chapters a high-quality novel has, it will still be fine. The quality of a novel is not the quantity. Author, instead of biting off more than you can chew here, you might as well write about a certain world. You are one world, and you can write fifty or sixty pieces.

I've read Chapter 23 and can't stand it anymore. . It doesn't matter if there are too many typos in one sentence or one line, I can still read it. The most annoying thing is that there is very little substantive content in each chapter, and it is all about popular science. Everything that appears in the book, no matter what it is, is given a lot of long-winded popular science explanations. . . It seems very wordy. . . . . .

This book has no nutrition, it's like reading an introduction instead of a novel 😰😰😰😰

After looking at the previous introduction, I wanted to give it a try, but suddenly I found out that there were two cartoons: One Piece and Naruto, and I immediately lost my mood.

I seriously suspect that I traveled through time in the comment section.

It is recommended that the author sort out the outline, do not go through it randomly (it feels like there is no outline at all), have more situational dialogues, and do not introduce some useless hydrology, so as to attract book friends.

Are the creatures in the protagonist worried about betrayal because they have been betrayed in reality? You are still loyal because of the bargaining chip for betrayal. If we talk about reality, then why don't you say that every cell in your body may betray you? There's something really wrong with my brain.

What? Is this the end? Xiao Hei hasn't been killed yet

You, the eunuch king, have written so many eunuch books

The author made this paragraph, after reading two pages, I didn't want to read it anymore

Your typesetting. . I thought I was reading poetry

With your novel, Tomato can expand at least three times if you find anyone.