I Am Not the Group Leader When I Cross Alni Road

See the chaos in the comment area for your thoughts. I will only talk about some objective realities from an objective perspective. I am afraid that good or bad writing will affect my cognition, so I don't read the book first. First, don't care about other people's comments (including mine), because everyone's preferences and perceptions are different, but at least they must be worthy of objective logic. Secondly, if the second setting based on the original author directly conflicts with the original setting, please do not plagiarize. . . Or it is said that it is a magically modified skill. The original setting of One Piece is that Kizaru has the speed of light and is the fastest in the world. Regardless of whether the original author is ignorant or wrote it blindly, this is a character he created. If you plagiarize this character and write it according to your own ideas and then force the original work, that will be the case. . . I can't find any meaning in this statement other than to dissuade readers. Thirdly, is it okay to have clearer logic in what you say and do? The person who criticizes clearly understands why he is unhappy, and addresses the real issues, instead of taking the position of "hating the author" and making mindless remarks. The author should also think clearly about the logic of the rebuttal. Editor, Dragon Ball everyone knows that its combat power is broken, One Piece everyone knows that Kizaru has a weird design, this kind of long masterpiece has many flaws to begin with, Sand Crocodile is a Shichibukai and he is defeated by the weakest Luffy. Who can I ask to explain? Does that mean that you also have to forcefully rationalize "Sand Crocodile is actually for xxxxx reasons, so it is useless to be domineering if you forcibly tolerate it"? But everyone knows that the reality is that Oda didn't think so much in the early stage. If you write a fanfic and forcefully write the Sand Crocodile's double domineering at the beginning and say that this is the setting of the original work, then you can only be scolded. After speaking, I found that I was still a bit biased towards the author. . . There is no reference for complaining. Mainly, I was really speechless by what the author said. Just delete the trolls you hate, or at worst, block them, or spray them back. Even if you just say I like it, it's okay for me to write like this. Who can be disgusted by the yin and yang of my own comments section + a long paragraph of nonsense? What do you gain by proving that Kizaru is slow from an angle that you can't even explain? I read the author's words at first glance without seeing anything (didn't read other comments, didn't read the book) (this perspective is objective enough, right). An author posted a long, erroneous and violent dialogue that instantly made me not want to open the book at all. The efficiency of this dissuasion is really impressive. .

You're a bit off topic when you write like this. I haven't seen you write much about the main character, it's all about supporting roles. I'm afraid you won't be able to handle it and will collapse in the middle and later stages.

It's a bit white to tell the truth, the logic is not careful, the characters are not well drawn, it feels like everyone's IQ is lowered, it's a bit poisonous

It's quite nice, but it's a pity there are so few of them. I often raise them to death.

Can the thunder fruit not defeat Garp? Can't he outrun Garp? Earlier, the protagonist was boasted to be able to fight three generals, but later he couldn't beat Garp's adjutant. Garp's adjutant is about the same strength as a general. Haha, he has the strength to be an adjutant? Later he will work as a junior in the navy, ugh!

Learning kung fu is the most useless waste. In the world of martial arts, speed is the only thing that cannot be broken. The top martial arts masters have said so. You obviously have such a fast thunder and don't practice it, it's a waste.

The author ignored the foundation and power of the modern social science system and went to learn so-called martial arts and ninjutsu. Unless you are wearing a fantasy skin, the exploration of the human body by modern medicine far exceeds the so-called martial arts in ancient society, as well as the use of thunder and lightning. What is strong in the ninja world is the chakra energy system passed down by Otsutsuki as an interstellar civilization. For the understanding and development of thunder and lightning energy alone, the ninja society's state of forming small groups and being self-contained cannot be compared with the modern scientific system.

Another Karp licking dog was born, I can only say goodbye

The first point is that it is impossible for modern people to become cultivators like crazy cultivators. It is good to practice a little every day. It belongs to three days of fishing and two days of surfing the Internet Secondly, regarding speed, Garp is the fastest, faster than Kizaru, Shanks is second, Kizaru is third, and Pluto Rayleigh is fourth. , Garp's adjutant is fifth, Wang Dian can only barely rank sixth among the group There are also differences in speed Burst speed: It belongs to the instant burst in battle, speed is related to strength Sustained speed: The speed in ordinary battle, related to physical fitness Elemental movement: After the elementalization of the natural system, it moves with molecules. The light in the fruit is faster than the thunder. Mental strength, control, fruit development, etc. Also need to be considered. Straight-line running speed: There is no turning. The speed of moving in a straight line for a long time. The speed of the flashing fruit and thunder will be faster than Karp, just like the difference between a marathon and a sprint Combat displacement speed: Movements that change directions multiple times during combat are related to body reaction regulation and physical fitness Only combined can we say who is faster and who is slower. Garp can beat Pluto Rayleigh and is faster than Rayleigh Rayleigh cuts off Kizaru's light elemental movement, Rayleigh is faster than Kizaru Adjutant Garp followed Garp in many battles to encircle Roger. The fact that he has not died till now shows that his strength is not weaker than Rayleigh Shanks is from The animation showed two terrifying extreme speed rescues. One rescued Luffy and the other rescued Kirby. It even felt faster than Kizaru The last thing is that the speed of the fruit's ability is related to the strength of the person. It does not mean that the Shining Fruit really has the speed of light. If there really is Kizaru, he can beat the world by himself

No, I have a lot of bad points to complain about. This book is really poisonous. Let me talk about the poisonous points based on the fact that I have read more than 40 chapters. Don't think that it is very few. Just over 40 chapters are very bad. I feel that my IQ is about to drop. The first point is these more than 40 chapters, and more than 30 chapters are all about supporting characters. What is the protagonist doing? As the owner of the thunder fruit, the protagonist is practicing the magical power of indestructibility? Just practice, but as soon as you got off the island and met Garp, he was knocked down by Garp with one move? Or is it when the protagonist tries his best to escape? My Thunder Fruit is shameless? I admit that Garp is very strong, but Garp is not that fast, okay? The speed of Thunder Fruit can compete with Kizaru's Shining Fruit. Garp couldn't catch Kizaru, let alone Eniru. He was caught up in one move while running away with all his strength, not to mention this. What's even more ridiculous is that after being caught and put on seastone handcuffs, the protagonist couldn't resist. Yes, I understand, seastone handcuffs can restrain the devil fruit. So what is the use of the indestructible magic skill that the protagonist has practiced? I just want to know what it is? If you can't resist Garp's punch or break free from the sea-floor stone handcuffs, what's the use of practicing? Just some fancy special effects? A lieutenant opened the handcuffs for him and asked him to fight with him, only to be beaten again? ? This adjutant is not the top three generals, nor is he at the level of the Shichibukai. You can't win here, and you can't win that. You will be beaten in seconds, and you will be beaten in seconds. You have been traveling on Elni Road for more than ten years, and then add a chat group cheat to give you time travel, devil fruits, and cheats. You are useless. You are useless. Everyone in the group is improving. Only you are still declining. And the protagonist's IQ is completely lacking. Online, you said this book is a hot-blooded one, but I didn't see any hot-blooded fights at all. You said it was a funny one, but I only saw the author being funny. I doubted the author had read One Piece properly. This book is the most poisonous of all the more than 40 chapters I have read. This means that whoever reads it will be poisoned to death. It doesn't work even after Shen Nong is here. What I said is, if you don't believe it, you can try it😏

This book is so confusing! The author wants to write everything but expresses nothing clearly. . . I would like to ask whether Enelu is the protagonist or the other people in the chat group are the protagonists? I read more than 20 chapters and no more than three chapters were written about the protagonist! Just the first and second chapters made me feel that after writing Enelu, you even forgot that you were reading that book. . . Can you imagine how serious your digression is? Except for the important supporting characters, one or two chapters is already a lot, right? This kind of book obviously has no priority!

Self-pleasure novel. Setting the strength depends entirely on your brain. Skipping them regardless of priority will have no impact on reading. I understand that you are trying to get the best effect with your wave of Ping Porcelain Cap, but if you can't beat it, you can still get knocked out with a punch. Thunder is a very popular among Pirates fans. Check out which one is so good. In the final analysis, Pirates are really just physically strong people, and they are still in the world of science. It is impossible for man to catch up with sound and light through the body. Then he was killed by the adjutant... This... That thing, I suggest you find out to what extent the navy lacks talents. It is impossible to follow Garp Salty Fish with this kind of strength. Just see it here. I can't stand it anymore, the setting is somewhat interesting, but it's a pity. The points came too quickly, and the items I exchanged were completely useless. Is it possible to run away if the knife dodges? You were caught and you didn't leave even though they gave you permission. It was too late. I didn't knock you out and didn't put handcuffs on you. Where was Wan 🤔 And the injury was not an elemental injury. Do you think you were pinching plasticine... Come back, Garp doesn't have the energy to wake up. A person who can fall asleep at any time has the energy to wake up. This... I captured a person with fruit abilities before, where did that person go? Also, the Heart Network is a development of advanced knowledge and knowledge, not what you call incomplete knowledge and knowledge.

To be fair, if you put your mind down when reading this book, it will still be quite interesting. But if you put your mind behind it, you will feel that the author has some deep grudge against you. This insults the reader's intelligence.

If you just write about pirates, it might still be popular. The mess is very poisonous

I read a few pictures to test the poison, but this is no good. The author has no idea in his mind. He writes wherever he thinks, and he doesn't understand what he is writing. He doesn't know the name of Tianlong martial arts. He has got his identity wrong.

To be honest, I feel that the protagonist is a fool. Why don't you ask the monkey and the group leader to buy the monkey's technique? The group leader wants to buy you the exercises for free and you know he wants to buy them for free, so you give them back?

When I saw the author's comment that the fastest lightning speed is 3,000 meters per second, I knew what it was about. He had the nerve to ask others to Baidu, which really made me laugh.

In this book, the protagonist is comparable to a supporting character, and even the plot of One Piece was not taken seriously. I just didn't think it was interesting.

. . . . I read about ten chapters, and then I started reading the table of contents, and found that the author basically didn't have much of a main point of view, describing the world of various group members. . . My head was buzzing when I saw it. . .

I found this book to be less of a big deal than the main character. All content belongs to other group members. The protagonist only mentions a few words occasionally. I can't figure out the priority. Know that you want to create supporting characters who each have their own personality. But if you can't even figure out your own priorities and write something down, it's going to hurt your brain.

The writing is very imaginative, but a little complicated. The main character is just a soy sauce, and he doesn't have as many roles as the supporting characters.

Don't read it. It's a waste of everyone's time. The author is overly flattering himself.

It kept talking about other supporting characters and so on. After reading so many chapters, the main character showed up. It was all about ancient three links, myths, and heavenly dragons. I came in based on the title of the book, but ended up disappointed.

A time traveler who plays with thunder and doesn't know about electromagnetic force

Stop it! It's pretty good-looking, come on!

Collect tasks and prepare to open the task system. The template is as follows. Any task will do! Task issuer: Xiao Song. Mission content: I want to go to the world of "Swordsman", kill Linghu Chong, save Yue Buqun, and strengthen the Huashan Sect. World error value: 20% (the greater the error value, the less consistent it is with the original world. There may have been travelers a hundred years ago, there may have been alien invasions, there may even have been a revival of spiritual energy, etc.) Task reward: 10 years of cultivation of skills with a level no more than 20. (It can be converted into advanced skills, but the loss is 50% for every 10 levels) Please post your tasks quickly and provide me with some ideas. Thank you very much.

Although I haven't started watching it yet, I know that more than half of the people who write about chat groups will be disappointed...

It's not easy being a fan. This time I finally got more recommendation votes than usual.

What is this writing about? This is just like the words written by a patient while sleepwalking. There is no main plot line at all. It is better to just garble the characters...

This month has almost passed and I don't have a monthly pass. I looked at the first 10 chapters and couldn't find the main plot.