Nine Star Totem

Please mark the role: (This depends on fate, you may not choose it) Name Totem (star beast, weapon, armor, element) Main star body (it is recommended that 5~7 is more reasonable) Identity ( Recommendations: Soldiers, members of the Desolation Regiment, Xuan Yi's subordinates, students of Tiannan University, teachers, and monsters are all acceptable) Family background (optional) Character (please describe this in a little detail) Weapons to use well: (optional)

The author can't be Yu's trumpet, right? I feel like Qingrou is against Dawei, and Lin Ce is against Tao Tao, both are nine stars✌

I haven't finished it yet. After reading dozens of pictures, I have a feeling that this book should be difficult to finish. The author feels a bit like writing a book for the first time. It feels good, but various details have always been a little flawed, and it feels like the experience is not worth it.

How did the plug-in for the protagonist to go to another world come from? After reading 10+ chapters, there is no explanation. It seems that this plug-in is inexplicable (Purely personal opinion)

Isn't this Yu's nine-star series?

Post a post to make up the numbers 🤭

The writing is quite good, but I don't like the main character's background being too big and complicated.

It's almost like carrying a hunting space with you

Is the power system equivalent to a ring? The first ring has 9 stars, the second ring has 81 stars, and the third ring has 729 stars. This increase in strength is a bit exaggerated. When it reaches the 9th ring, it is not 9 raised to the 9th power. Can you count them?

If I'm not mistaken, the "an analogy" in your introduction should be "an analogy", right?

Um, let me give you a suggestion. After nine stars, should I break through the first turn or the first level? This should be unified, otherwise it may be a bit confusing if you turn to the next level and the previous level if you write it later.

With such detailed settings, it is easy for the settings to become confusing later on. After all, people's energy is limited. It's okay at the beginning, but it will be very difficult to perfect the settings of a world later.

First time oh oh oh

This may be the author's first time writing. The plot and subject matter are quite good, but there is something wrong with the writing style.

First to second level? Second to first level? You need to unify this, otherwise it will be a mess.

My plan is to update one chapter (four thousand) at 12 noon, and one chapter (four thousand) at 12 o'clock in the evening. Three updates in two days. After it is put on the shelves, I will try to change it to 8,000 tomorrow. That means two updates a day, but it may be a bit difficult. I will see if I can save some manuscripts before they are put on the shelf. The manuscript is to prevent the author from being unable to update for emergencies. It is not deliberately not posted) But I have to go home tomorrow, so I will update it tomorrow (four thousand). If the writing speed is changed to a computer, the faster the coding speed will be, the more chapters will be added If you have anything to say, feel free to say it As for the rules for adding updates, since I am not a fast typist, I will make this a little higher when I put it on the shelves, so that I don't have to add updates. 🤓 As expected of me 😁😁😁😁 (I looked at my other account and found that this was not posted, so I went back to the platform to post it again.)

Have you never thought of taking his brother with you?