Weird Apocalyptic Survival Game

In fact, I silently read everyone's comments. I was actually quite surprised to see several readers guessing which old writer opened the trumpet. I am a flamboyant, no, to be precise, fluttering is not considered flamboyant, only after signing a contract is it considered flamboyant, and I have been single-player for a long, long time. Later, I learned about internal investment from Tieba and started trying it. However, the road has been very bumpy. I kept submitting submissions and they kept getting rejected. During this period, I also thought about giving up and not writing anymore. Later, I silently opened Word and started coding. An accidental internal submission, Xingda asked me to add him on QQ to discuss it in detail. However, after many revisions, my manuscript was still very poor, so I had to give up again. I have to say that Xingda is really good. He carefully read every submission I made and gave me a lot of suggestions. He was never impatient. During this period, I tried to write a love story and submitted it to him, but it was rejected again. When I was revising the beginning, I accidentally thought of "Weird Apocalypse" and voted for it. The result was surprising, I passed. On the day it was about to be released, I started to back off again and read the first three chapters over and over again. Because I had failed too many times before, I was no longer confident. I'm afraid it won't be well written, and I'm also worried that no one will read it. However, I finally decided to write it down. This book may be poorly written later and the plot is not well written, but it is not a eunuch. I hope that when I finish writing this book, I will learn some writing skills, learn to create characters, master the structure of the article, and the direction of the plot. This book is purely for me to practice writing and prepare for the future. I'm not afraid that this time I'll lose as badly as before. After all, I'm a loser.

It feels like many of the new books in the new book library are test accounts written by veteran authors.

The beginning was okay, but the further you read, the less interesting it becomes. The whole story is about running for your life. When in danger, you rely on the protagonist's halo to explode. After reading dozens of chapters, the protagonist has not improved at all. It feels like a running account.

The plot is unreasonable. It's strange that humans are not extinct in such a dangerous situation.

It's too blunt. The creativity is very good, but when the protagonist encounters danger or good things, the author will occasionally throw in some surprises, such as portals, rooms that can refresh things, and accidents happen.

This book stitches together too many things, like a narrative. The good thing is that you can take a look at the author's own unique ideas.

Kind of like a doomsday puzzle piece, but without the height of that

I like this kind of subject matter. I feel that the plot is very straightforward and the dialogue between the characters is not complicated. Unlike those intrigue plots... I think you need to enrich the protagonist and his two partners, and I found that there are very few bad guys. After all, everyone is trying to survive in the end of the world... That kind of burning, killing and looting is really hateful

Woo woo woo woo, I found a nice new article. It's so hard to follow and it's even more heartbreaking.

The novel is pretty good, and the quality is above average. Except for the protagonist's deliberate power when he is in danger, everything else is pretty good.

This system is the same as the narration. Although it can promote the plot, it seems too deliberate. The protagonist looks like a tool man. It feels like an online game world to me!

Enter the tower and become a low-class person, and rely on the system to gain fame and fortune outside.

I want to see Mr. Auto, corpses are easier to get than blood. I got through the weird novel, but I got nothing. . .

So far, we can know that there is a problem with the timeline of this world, so we can infer that the people in this world are people from different parallel universes, and similar events have occurred in their worlds. The companion next to the protagonist, the one who is looking for his daughter, has a part of his personality that is the same as that of the Lord of the Night. There is also something wrong with the system.

The setting is okay, but the writing is not. The plot is too rigid and stereotyped, always leaving the reader with the impression of a running story.

The needle is not there, but there are a few chapters, which are not enough to read 😓

I'm quite optimistic about the first few chapters, but the later chapters (up to about 10 chapters) are a bit boring and hard to understand 😭

There is no need to write for free The author writes well Of course someone will spend money

What's the operation in Chapter 49? ? ? Can't understand at all

The plot is so blunt and bland, it feels like... Hmm... I can't say that the creativity is good, but the scenes described are very stiff,

Nice. Up above.