Journey to the West: I Have Been Blind for Five Hundred Years, and My Disciples Are All Great Demons

Will the protagonist never know that he has cultivation or possess cultivation within five hundred years? It's good if there is a little turning point. If there is no turning point, it will be a bit like following the trend.

Pure water, short story, no characterization, no character, cool. The title of the book should be, I'm the only one who doesn't know I'm the boss. From the setting point of view, the protagonist automatically becomes stronger little by little, and all the words and actions come with invincible buffs. As a result, the apprentice also brings unlimited buffs, which is boring. [Time = Becoming Stronger] Let's talk about the plot, 🤔 You wrote Sun Wukong as a person who knows how to advance and retreat, understands the world, is polite and polite, and is not arrogant and domineering. This kind of protagonist is ridiculous! Journey to the West, you are not passionate! Not passionate! Is there anything else to see? ? ? Do you want to upgrade? 🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃 Without family, love, friendship, master-disciple relationship, it is very empty. There are dozens of chapters, and it has nothing to do with Journey to the West. There is no need to fight monsters, no foreign objects, and it will automatically upgrade. Journey to the West hasn't even started yet, but Monkey🐒 is already at a very high level. Is there another Journey to the West in the future? [The reborn me takes Wukong through the world? In addition, the brain supplement runs through the whole line. You have laid the groundwork in the front, how to write it later? 🙄In short, give up.

This book is short and weak😅

I saw that in the latest chapter, there is another female character, Lu Ya... It's really inconsistent. If you can't fit it in, and you can't write a female character well, why don't you just stop writing it? It's so inconsistent... I don't want to order it anymore. Come on, author!

Faster and faster. It's my first time to subscribe. Although I don't have much money later, I jumped here but it really feels good to my appetite. I am just afraid that the plot will go outside the territory in the later stage and it will become a fantasy novel again. As long as I don't go astray in the later stage, I will prepare to make up for the full subscription later. Ha, I will vote for you for the first monthly ticket.

I read it in one go, it's very interesting (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ I hope to publish more books like this

Previously, it was said that the monkey had become more like a Confucian scholar by practicing the Sage Sutra, but in the part about the White Bone Demon, the monkey was written like a zz and a reckless man. Just because Taibai Jinxing was provoked and his defense was broken with just a few words, then the Sage Sutra that he had practiced before was too watery. What's the use? He doesn't even have the same level of grace as when he was in Dragon Palace. Other characters have huge contradictions and their characters collapse. Bai Lian just changed her temper, had an epiphany, broke through herself, and became good, but she did not become stupid. Bai Lian is an innate spiritual being born from the beginning of the world. He has experienced so many disasters and witnessed so many big scenes. You wrote him like a competitive little brat with no wisdom at all. This kind of character should be like an encyclopedia, a team strategist with characteristics of wisdom, stability and rationality, but you turned him into a little follower with no independent opinion. None of the character creations were successful, and the protagonist was even more confused. The identity of modern people is the strongest golden finger, and they have not even shown basic reasoning and logical abilities. The protagonist has no clue about the behavior of each apprentice, and it is all based on imagination. The protagonist is just blind, not a brainless person. Since the protagonist likes to read online novels, he has read so many ancient myths, gods, and journey to the west novels. He also knows the plot analysis of the settings, and as a modern person, he has also read Journey to the West. As a result, the monkeys came, the little white dragon also came, and the white-bone spirit also came. He didn't even realize what was going on around him. He was really a paratrooper. There aren't many exciting moments throughout the whole process, it's all about the characters dragging their feet on the plot.

Brother, please don't make trouble when you charge money. Three and a half minutes and a thousand votes. I'm going to test the poison. Don't laugh. We know whether it's good or not.

The monkey learned the skills by crossing thousands of mountains and rivers, and directly passed them on to the black bear spirit without asking its master. So, what does that chapter mean by repeatedly emphasizing that inheritance of skills is important?

The deception is too much. Monkeys are stupid, but readers are not stupid.

Ahem, just, you understand

I posted a daily guide, which caused some controversy. Let me briefly mention that as long as the daily guide score is decent and it is still being serialized, you can be on it. Some people always like conspiracy theories and say that they paid the editor to give it, so they asked me, do I need to buy it with this amount of updates? Those who talk seriously about Journey to the West can't compete with conspiracy theories. It is said that Sun Wukong after the Monkey King is the six-eared macaque. It is indeed very eye-catching, but don't be led away. How about the book? You should read ten or twenty chapters first. I have basically never deleted all kinds of comments in the comment area. I am just a new author. I don't know how to operate and I am too lazy to delete it. However, there are always people who click in and read other people's comments and then comment. It's very speechless. You know, don't follow what others say, okay? Then many people started complaining after reading the title and introduction. To be honest, I did write this book following the trend, but you have to know that I am an author with no fan base. I can only afford a gimmicky title to attract people. To invite readers to click in, if I were the great god Bai Jin, I would indeed have the confidence to choose a book title without punctuation, but I am not. If I named "Xuantian Evil Emperor" and introduced the story of an ordinary boy walking on the road to heaven, ascending to immortality, and eventually becoming the eternal evil emperor, would anyone read it? It is estimated that you wrote millions of words before someone came to comfort you. Write slowly and wait until you become a god after 10 million words. It's 2022, still using a traditional introduction?

Laughing to death, this book deserves to be thrown off the streets

No, you have already traveled to the west, so you have to ask Qin Shihuang to make a fuss about it, right? As mentioned earlier, the great witch turned around and became a witch for nothing, becoming Ying Zheng's younger brother. Don't you think it's contradictory? A rebellious and contemptuous witch acts as a little brother. Do you still boast that Qin Shihuang loved the people? To tell a joke, Qin Shihuang, a talented and generous man who loved his people as his own son, cut down all the Xiangfei bamboos in a whole mountain because of a storm in the lake. Because the meteorite fell to the ground, all residents within a hundred miles of the meteorite were killed. If he had lived ten more years, the Qin Dynasty would have died. You would still make a fuss about it, and you would have to follow anti-intellectualism, right?

This book is already rotten at the end. It was exciting and interesting at the beginning, but then it was just blowing up and downgrading its intelligence. Especially the blind protagonist has no IQ and is just a tool. Anyway, I gave up.

Please recommend this kind of mindless writing to me

Over a hundred chapters, from Buddhism to Fangcun Mountain, the conflict started and I felt like I was falling apart

Such a bad book still appears in the introduction. If you want to enjoy yourself, why not be more exciting? Why are you so restrained?

LV4, written at this level, is going to be a lonely starting point.

In fact, when writing about Journey to the West, you can check the information first. Buddhism has a very low status in the Chinese mythology system. The Tathagata Buddha is one of the five elders in the mythology system. The real Journey to the West, Sun Wukong, could not even get through the door when he entered the heaven. The Jade Emperor sent a decree for the Tathagata to subdue demons, so you can check the information first. If you write according to the current system, it will definitely collapse.

There's no need to look at the back part, it's all rotten.

I asked weakly, the protagonist has always been in a mortal body and still has to eat and drink. Can he poop? Would such a high-ranking deity in the minds of the disciples defecate anywhere die on the spot?

I finished reading it in one sitting, it was so good!

Delete the last chapter and rewrite it. Your book is definitely a good book in the Xianxia genre. It's such a shame that it's so bad.

It would be nice to give three tickets to someone 🙂