Looking Down at the Ninja World from the Samsara Eye of Naruto

Female protagonist? Shouldn't that be on a female channel?

The author has no writing style to carry his own ideas. This is also a common mistake among fan authors.

Why does the protagonist have no chakra attributes? Shouldn't the owner of the Samsara Eye have all chakra attributes? Nagato in the original work is like that. After all, the Samsara Eye is the "power of all things". Doesn't the product of Yin Yang Escape have a dimensionality-reducing impact on the Five Elements Escape Technique?

There are quite a few bugs. It is impossible for Jiraiya to teach several war orphans for three years. In the original work, before Nagato revealed his reincarnation eye, Jiraiya only wanted to take care of them for a few days because of guilt. After seeing the reincarnation eye, he thought Nagato was the son of prophecy and was willing to teach them for three years. It is a dream to want Jiraiya to teach you for three years without revealing the qualifications of the son of prophecy.

There are a lot of bugs that conflict with the original work. It feels like the author doesn't know Naruto well enough, and even created some secondary designs that conflict with the original work. The author also said that it has no impact. Anyone who knows Naruto can't stand it.

Let me just say it, it's okay to change from male to female. If you want to write a heroine, just change from female to female. Don't let a big man try to figure out a girl's behavior every day. Of course I am not a dissenter, but there are some things that I still have to stick to. The proliferation of this kind of novels may arouse the values ​​​​of some people who are new to novels.

There is no need to go out of your way to cover up your samsara eye. You can hide it when you are weak, but it is not necessary when you are strong. Those who pretend to be pigs will eventually become real pigs. Do you think people in war-torn countries hide their guns on their bodies, or do they take them out openly? Force is used to deter, and nuclear bombs are used to let others know.

And now that I have read about ninety chapters, I feel that the author's Rinnegan Eye is mediocre. Not to mention the powerful suppressive power of the Six Paths, even Uchiha's Kaleidoscope is more powerful than the current Rinnegan Eye on the protagonist. It is only supported by a name.

Note that the protagonist is a female, it would be a waste of time if you don't write tags in the md introduction.

The introduction should include a description of the transformation, and whether it's a single marriage, a marriage, or something else. Just tell me so I can run away.

You Hokage has impure writing. You will regret it even if you don't have Hiruzen. Danzo, I am the Hokage.

But this book doesn't seem to be about transformation. . . It's a woman wearing a woman's clothing, and it feels like it can be used to play both male and female videos. After all, it's usually the way that a transfigured person can play male videos.

Seeking the Way Jade is a perfect fusion of the seven attributes of yin and yang plus water, fire, wind, thunder, and earth. It is a blood inheritance snare, and cannot be compared with the three attributes of the blood inheritance.

Are all the female videos coming here now?

Why do female channel novels need to be put on male channels?

The main thing that I dislike the most is that the protagonist's strength fluctuates up and down. She is "evenly matched" at all times, otherwise "even now she dare not say that she is sure to win."

There are too many flaws. To give a simple example, Minato was able to obtain part of the Flying Thunder God's information without knowing Jiraiya. The next chapter also states that he was of ordinary origin.

Can it be resurrected?