The Boundless Immortal Ship

I have a question: if cultivating immortality truly exists, then that's science, right? The two shouldn't contradict each other, should they?

Why are there always some people who like to ride on other people's necks and do evil, as if they are setting an example to teach the world that this is how a person's life should be spent! Lu Yuantong, a transmigrator, originally only wanted to cultivate immortality peacefully, but the world was dark and people's hearts were no longer pure, constantly disturbing his peace.

I'm not trying to nitpick, but so-called "science," in its physical essence, has always been troubled by microscopic particles, using the so-called "God particle" to fool governments into investing huge sums of money into a bottomless pit. In biology, fraud is rampant.

Unlike what a newcomer would write, the plot lines are very clear, both overt and covert.

I've read similar stories about cultivating immortality on warships before. They all treat warships as blessed lands, which I think has potential. However, the world of cultivation limits the development of these blessed lands. I feel a dual protagonist story could be possible: one is a transmigrator who arrives at the blessed land where the warship is located, and the other is the captain, the…

The title sounds impressive, but the plot is dragging and there's almost no development; it's all about struggling to survive under the oppression of the natives.

Hello everyone, my name is Bai Xiaochen, hehe.

Here are my initial impressions after reading the whole thing. First, the subject matter is old; many people have written similar pieces, and it's difficult to write well. Second, the premise is clichéd, giving me a Renaissance-like feeling. Third, it's too formulaic; anyone who's read a few novels will find these tropes familiar.

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