The Boundless Immortal Ship

I have some doubts. When cultivating immortality really exists, it is science. There is no contradiction between the two.

Why are there always some people who like to ride on other people's necks to do evil, as if they are teaching the world by example that this is how a person's life should be spent! The time traveler Lu Yuantong originally only wanted to cultivate immortality in peace and quiet, but the darkness of the world and the old people's hearts kept disturbing his peace. He couldn't bear it anymore and could only save the whole world! "I master science!" "I own the Great Luo Mothership!" "Whoever disobeys will be killed first!" Rating: Liangcao Tags: time travel, cultivating immortals Thoughts after reading: When Lu Yuantong woke up, he felt his neck was stiff, his head was swollen and aching. As a young man, he thought it was because he often stayed up late, but he never imagined that he had actually traveled through time. This is a great world with extraordinary power. Unfortunately, the channels for advancing to the upper class are extremely narrow. Only those born as gods or born with spiritual roots can cultivate immortality. In addition, there is an ancient extraordinary path, which is to become a god by blood. The protagonist's predecessor has already tried these two paths. Just like an army crossing a single-plank bridge, he was pushed back as expected and died. Fortunately, the protagonist has studied Taoist cultivation methods in his previous life, so he wants to try this path and popularize science by the way. If successful, it will open up a third path to immortality for ordinary people, which can be said to have immeasurable merit. As we all know, this is a road that everyone in the world is enemies of, because it involves the interests of hundreds of millions of people. With their hearts and minds united, murderous intentions are everywhere, the fields are filled with bones, and the sea is filled with blood. Lu Yuantong walks alone! "Mencius" said: Although there are thousands of people, I will go! Summary: From the introduction, it can be seen that the author has huge creative ambitions, because he is creating a brand new thing. After all, it seems that no one has written a novel in which science and immortality go hand in hand. (If it is true, please forgive me for being ignorant and frivolous!) Here, I can only borrow flowers to offer to Buddha, and offer Mr. Hengqu's four sentences as the protagonist: Establish a heart for the world, Establish a destiny for the livelihood of the people, Continuing the unique knowledge for the past saints,                                                               To create peace for all generations! Above.

I'm not nitpicking, but the so-called "science", in its physical nature, has always been troubled by microscopic particles, and the so-called "God particles" are used to deceive the government into investing heavily in bottomless pits. As for biology, it is full of fraud. "Science" has not been able to cure even a viral cold so far. It relies on people to deal with it, euphemistically calling it a "self-limiting disease." Now it is necessary to get involved in the mysterious cultivation of immortality, which is neither fish nor fowl, and the author's scientific literacy is simply not enough.

I don't think it was written by a newcomer, the bright and dark lines are very clear

I've seen it before, which is basically similar to the story about battleships cultivating immortality. They are all developing warships as Cave Heaven Blessed Land. I think there is still some progress, but the world of cultivating immortals has restricted the development of Cave Heaven Blessed Land. It feels like there can be two protagonists, one is a time traveler who travels to the paradise of Cave Heaven where the battleship is located, and the other is the captain, the owner of the battleship, and the supreme warrior. The two may have conflicts of interest or ideological conflicts. One wants to take the path of science and technology, and the other wants to take the path of cultivating immortality. Under external pressure, the two combined to create an unparalleled battleship

The title of the book is quite lofty, but as a result, the plot drags on and has almost no development. It is all about struggling to survive under the oppression of the indigenous people.

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Let me talk about my thoughts after reading the whole article. First of all, the subject matter is old, many people have written similar articles, and it is difficult to write well. The second is to set it up in an old-fashioned way, which gives me a sense of renaissance. Third, it is too clichéd. Those who have read a few novels may find these clichés familiar. Finally, the pace is too fast, and many things can be written slowly. This is probably the first time the author has encountered this subject. It feels like I have copied all the shortcomings of those novels from a few years ago.

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