After Death, I Became a Weirdo

It's time to create a new happy picture, but you ended up messing it up like this. I don't even want to subscribe to the remaining 6 chapters. Oh, that's it.

They can kill through this planet, so what kind of game will they join to make the Dragon King crooked...

It is not easy to create a new book. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. If you have any suggestions, you can join the group to discuss with the author. Comments that affect other people's reading experience will be deleted or sent to the small black room. Brothers and sisters, please cherish your feathers and respect each other. Reading is just for fun. If you think the author's writing is not to your taste, please leave quietly and don't pester. Finally, don't try to teach the author to write a book. If you see it, you will be really speechless. If you are awesome, please open the book. That's it.

You, the heroine, make it difficult for me, a pure love warrior, to handle

I have just finished reading Chapter 50, so I will write down my feelings and share my thoughts with you First of all, the author gave the protagonist a setting of "invincible", or almost invincible, but as readers, one of the things we like about invincibility is that he can "do whatever he wants" Especially not restricted by the secular world, but in the early stage, the protagonist was too patient, and generally speaking, it was not fun. Of course, fighting the black dragon in more than 30 chapters really relieved the anger; secondly, the emotional line, I still hope that the protagonist can be more ruthless, after all, it is the main line of the weird relationship. It's easy to break down (I think it may be difficult to write, but I didn't say that the author's outline is good) Overall, the main line of the novel is okay, the idea of ​​the incarnation is weird is good, but it is not enough, and the emotional line is subject to discussion. Friends who like invincible promotion can leave it out, but I like to take it slow. Friends who have a rhythm and a protagonist with a little "humanity" may consider reading it I just read the book review on QQ Reading. It is that the author cares too much about readers' comments. The readers' suggestions are one direction. It is up to you to change it or not, but deleting the review is a bit petty. These are some of my feelings after reading this novel. If you have the same or different ideas as me, you can discuss them together ~

It seemed okay at first, but after I joined the National Security Bureau, I thought I was going to solve the weird, but ended up writing a lot of troublesome things. If you look at this in the weird article, it's okay if you want to kill it directly, but the result is that you call the police to find the police. Skipping all these will not affect the subsequent plot.

Why did your main plot become the Dragon King? It's so weird when it's put on the shelves, so you can take care of yourself

Can it be done without a heroine? I think it's best for this novel to not have a heroine. It feels weird.

The idea of ​​this book is very good, but it feels like the author is getting more and more useless as he writes.

I feel like the protagonist has a weird personality and is quite open-minded, which is quite cool. But if you keep encountering trivial things, showing off some of your strength, expanding your worldview and developing outwards, isn't it better than mindlessly pretending to be slapped in the face by the things you encounter every day?

Stop whining about these things and quickly get into the main line. Now that you've entered the main line, write some more of these things.

To be honest, I can make over 10,000 yuan per day by writing this kind of plot in just two hours. If I put a little more thought into the novel, I can write more than a thousand words in an hour. Writing 5,000 words in an hour is really not a problem. If the money is so good, it will be fine.

Author, where is your home? I don't mean anything else. I just wanted to ask what color do you like for the little dark room?

Author, I don't want you to write the protagonist like the people of the motherland who kill without blinking an eye, but at least they must kill decisively. It's really hard to watch at the beginning, but it will be better later.

The author's work is very good from the perspective of refreshing writing. I think it is a qualified refreshing writing. However, some details are still not handled well. For example, establishing a more complete world view is very important for a work. This determines that this book will give readers a sense of the pattern and size. If the world view is vague, It is easy to write a pure and cool novel, Long Aotian, with no airs, but if the world view is established completely, for example, a full-time mage has a complete world view, giving readers that this world is not just a story imagined by the author, but this story should be what really happened in this world, not just a story but a "fact" from another world

Please be careful when writing about female protagonists. That's not to say don't write it, but don't write it into an awkward love story.

There is an inner smell. It is a very good book for relaxing after 16 years of inner smell.

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I saw chapter 65. So far, the subject matter is good, but the plot is a bit complicated. There are situations where villains or decent figures are demoted and the upper limit is forcibly raised (it's written about a genius monster who suddenly jumped out of a main city, so I stopped reading it). The setting is a bit like a mysterious revival, but he wrote it as an urban novel, and it may develop into a fantasy novel from six or seven years ago. However, there are still bright spots. The subject matter is not too old, and the idea is good. Unfortunately, there are a lot of poisonous points, not big poisonous points, but a lot of small poisonous points. (The above is just my personal opinion. Everyone has their own preferences. If you haven't seen it, you can give it a try. If you disagree, you are welcome to point it out, but please be kind.)

Except for the strength rising a bit quickly, the rest looks pretty good. In addition, the description of the plot other than the protagonist is a bit perfunctory. In fact, it could be more detailed, otherwise it would feel a bit forced to subdue one's wits. To give a real example, Cixi cut off land and paid indemnities, and her backbone was gone. As long as the historical background and the composition of the government at that time are clearly explained, so that people know that there is really no hope, there will be no sense of surprise.

It is a good book for those who are new to reading cool articles on the Internet. Old bookworms will feel a little familiar after reading it. The content of the book is mainly about semi-invincibility, and then the pig's feet are used to defeat monsters and upgrades.

Cao. . . . . . . . . Eunuch

Brother, practice your writing more and think more about the plot.

I have been reading novels for seven or eight years, and this is the first time I have read such a novel that appeals to my appetite.

Although the characters and plot are not very detailed, the theme and setting are the best. It is very interesting to watch. I hope the author can maintain the rigor of the setting. I will give you two monthly passes.

When I saw the missions released by the system, they sounded world-class, but in reality they were the so-called divine suppression of ball-breaking levels, which showed that the system was low-end. I knew that the author was going to undergo an abortion, but I didn't expect that he would actually perform the procedure.

The updates are a bit sparse, but they will be updated quickly and it will be available on the shelves. It's not worth your money for genuine products.

Although I support the ending and not starting a new chapter, the ending is a bit perfunctory!

Faster, faster, more, I can't stand it anymore

I feel like I'm going to collapse. I want to think of a better ending. Don't mess up. The weirdness didn't affect the protagonist at all. The protagonist does not necessarily have to defeat the old gods, maybe the protagonist himself is a member of the gods.