I'm a Taoist and I Know Some Magic. It Makes Sense.

The protagonist in your novel clearly stated that he didn't want to be involved, but he kept running around. He wanted to write a protagonist like Li Changsheng, but he was portrayed as looking for something to do, and then things kept coming one after another. Shouldn't writing a story about Gou protagonist be treated as an everyday article? There are a few sporadic things mixed in with the daily life, some are funny, some are tearful, take a look at what you wrote. At the beginning, when the divine corpse happened, he said that he did not want to get involved, but then he went to see the valley where the divine corpse was hidden, and accepted the divine corpse. It was also involved in redemption and other forces. Since he wanted to be stubborn, shouldn't he hide his cultivation? It doesn't take much thinking to know that a grandmaster in his twenties must be a genius. The protagonist reveals his strength as a grandmaster at the beginning, and then becomes a grandmaster within a few days. Is this really a stubborn mentality?

There is no sense of immersion in reading. The cultivation system is messed up, technology is not like technology and cultivation is not like cultivation, and the IQs of the decent and villains are not online. The protagonist wants to be a slut but doesn't behave like a slut. This is just a suggestion

I give two points for the passage. The plot is good, the language description is not vivid enough, and the emotional description is awkward. It gave me the impression that it looks good but tastes unsatisfactory. The world view is too flexible, and the possibility of failure is still high

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There are a lot of elements in the Yiqi Dao Alliance, inside and outside the circle, to draw a circle.

Author's vest: The salted fish of extravagant hope

The writing is good, but there are still some problems. For example, why doesn't the protagonist work hard?

Shouldn't the royal family define one word as seniority? For example, one-character generation, one-character generation, etc.