Elf: Leader of the Whole System

Although I don't reject the system. But I very much object to the system giving it directly to living beings.

There are some small flaws in the front, but I still keep reading. As a result, the author did a lot of operations before it was put on the shelf. Now I have no idea. The system is intelligent and can directly give life forms. In fact, I can accept this. But the system wants to get rid of the protagonist every time he has money. The author thought it was a joke, but readers actually don't seem to like it. So after the protagonist gets a big sum of money, he gives the option to spend the money I will solve the household registration problem for you (well, according to the author's settings, you can be the gym leader without being discovered, which means there are still consequences. There are also levels below where you can become the King of Champions without being discovered and a level with no consequences at all. This means that the system may still cheat money with this household registration problem in the future). But, the protagonist has always taken the lone wolf route and does not enter the gym. In fact, the impact is not that big. And it is also said that when the strength is strong or the cultivation level is high, identity issues are not a problem in basketball. Moreover, the protagonist has saved Qinglu and is good friends with Qinglu. It is actually easy to solve the problem if Qinglu helps. Qinglu also invited the protagonist to join the alliance But the protagonist refused. I thought the protagonist didn't care about identity. But turned around and the protagonist was ready to take all the money he had just received and go to the system to buy a dangerous identity instead of using the money to improve his strength (I don't Sister Li. Isn't this in the river? Maybe the author thought that keeping the protagonist poor would be a money-hungry thing in the eyes of friends) Is it a fun thing to follow? Like Kezang? ) The protagonist went to Zhenxin Town and planned to find Dr. Omu and provide him with a few undiscovered evolved types in exchange for resources. Let's not talk about whether this behavior is correct or not. Let's just say that since we have this idea, it is better to solve the problem with Omu and it is not as risky as the system. Not to mention that the protagonist has a relationship with Qinglu and saved him. I am not very good at Sister Li, especially when there are other routes to solve the problem. This is a good way to screen readers before putting it on the shelf.

Touko's plot was really vicious. He was targeted all the time. When he got to Shion Town, he was suppressed and beaten. In the end, he refused to fight. He was suppressed for so long and didn't break out. And it was outrageous that Giratina couldn't defeat Reshiram. The dark side of the world couldn't defeat reality? 😓

Can the elves be bigger? The game and anime settings are different. I suggest you follow the anime settings and then make your elves a little bigger.

The author is a street kid. All four books are extremely poisonous. If you come later, please don't click on them. You will thank me.

Touko's plot is a bit toxic, wait and see, if it doesn't work, just run away

The author is screening readers. Dark writing is understandable, but your identity requires six million, so you can suppress the protagonist in various ways.

After reading the book review, I jumped directly to the listing. Six million for one identity? Also, your system has too strong a presence and talks too much, which seriously affects your reading mood. Goodbye.

Will you give me the Ivy Snake for the flying competition? Electric shock monster? ?

The author always feels like writing is broken. From the beginning of strategizing to finding out that he can't solve it, I feel that Nazhi is starting to collapse. Although it may be an outline, I just want to complain. It's so bloody. So much information is given for nothing. Just thinking about it makes me lose blood. Mewtwo is still controlled. This Pluto dragon started to cause problems here just to provoke Gengar. He has to be chased by Team Rocket. I feel aggrieved.

Most of it is pretty good, but the further you read, the less you can stand it. I originally thought it would be good without a female protagonist, but I didn't expect that there would be one. Then I found out that there were multiple female protagonists, which ruined the writing a bit. The writing is quite delicate, but I accepted it, but I didn't expect it to be too much.

The most powerful elf leader system. Even the identity of the protagonist is not solved at the beginning. I am embarrassed to call it this name.

A suggestion: an ellipse is an ellipsis..., A period is a period, don't use "...". You still have to pay attention to the format.

Ash's adventure is over...

On the surface: Gyarados, Pidgeot, Kirby, Crystal Rock Snake, Mini Dragon, Charmander. Secretly: Big Mouth Bat, Black Luca, Ghost. Egg: Scorpio. insert eye. Jpg

He made a big mistake and then kept suppressing the protagonist and abusing him. It was enough. It made me laugh to death.

Moreover, as long as someone joins the Rockets, it doesn't matter whether you are a gangster or not. You really don't have an undercover agent. I don't understand, but you need to have a clean identity to join a dark organization?

It was originally very exciting, but the recent update has changed it too much. .

After reading it, I can rest assured that this author has been criticized for all four of his books. If you can't write, don't do this. Wouldn't it be nice to find a class?

The book written by the author of Mine Clearance is all waste paper and it will stain your eyes. This person is not here to write a book, but to retaliate against society and cause mental pollution.

Can you memorize all the skill effects and attributes before writing a Pokémon novel? It's really uncomfortable to see those low-level mistakes. And how many generations of skills do you have? Things are inseparable? After the physical attacker has strengthened his physical attack, can he use his special attack skills to fight against others?

Why not write about Douluo? The author's two Douluo novels are both very good.