Konoha: One Failure in Three Years, Starting with an Immortal Body

The Great Sage of Konoha - Itachi Uchiha Sarutobi There is such a strange person in Konoha. He is in a suppressed class and his family interests are being damaged every day, but he has the consciousness of Konoha's ruling class. The conclusion is that it is almost impossible to find such intelligent species in the human world.

It seems that there are about ten chapters, forget it, I still can't stand it. Nowadays, many people write fan fiction based on the fan fiction, or even write the fan fiction based on the commentary, and all kinds of secondary settings come into their minds. Conspiracy theories are rampant. I still don't read it, the conspiracy theories are from many years ago.

Don't write to improve your strength? I write a lot about trivial things, I'm speechless...

This kind of writing written from a young child is too protracted and inevitably watery.

It's a bit outrageous. There are too many different magical transformations. Shikamaru transformed into an omniscient god, Anko transformed into a shadow-level summoner, and Itachi transformed into a violent and extreme man Shikamaru, a 6-year-old child, can know things that even the higher-ups don't know Anko is even more outrageous. He doesn't even have enough chakra to summon a damn shadow-level serpent, and even if he summons it, Come on, Orochimaru can't arbitrarily control the thoughts of all snakes, so Anko can give orders? Itachi has loneliness, sadness, peace, profoundness, etc. In his heart, but there is no expression of killing Sasuke at will when he is hurt and humiliated This author is either too good at yy, or he only reads some fan fiction or commentary before writing a book

I can't stand Chapter 7. The reincarnation eye cannot be given until you have the strength of the Sixth Path. Then I already have the strength of the Sixth Path. Why do I still need your broken eyes?

I want to say something, the protagonist's Zanpakutō is fake, right? It stands to reason that the soul will be shattered with one blow. The duo will kill each other and start to solve the problem.

It's a bit outrageous. The second time you choose one of the two, you need to grow the Sharingan. Only when you reach the Sixth Level can you become the Rinnegan, but the Rinnegan is of no use to those who have already reached the Sixth Level. The other option is the kaleidoscope of the self-selected pupil technique. If you don't get this self-selected one, you can still watch it. If you have the self-selected one, you don't need the divine power and eight thousand spears. Instead, get a growth gift pack that can only be opened after reaching the level, but the things that are opened have little effect on the current level? The protagonist also has a fairy body, and the Eternal Eye in the middle is not necessary for him. Moreover, it is not impossible to evolve directly by choosing Kaleidoscope, but it is just more troublesome.

Seeing Uchiha Itachi, I can't stand it anymore. There are too many personal prejudices. It seems that as long as you don't like this person, everything he does is wrong. He shouldn't even have the right to breathe. Uchiha Itachi doesn't comment on whether it is right or wrong for him to destroy the clan. He only says it's you. How would you choose? The Uchiha clan, which is completely impossible to win, and Danzo, who is pressing every step of the way, and the leader, the Sandaime Hokage, who has faded away from his glory and is completely unqualified for politics, what will you choose? Whether Uchiha Itachi is good or bad, at least he is not that stingy. His murderous intent when his brother loses is really not the Itachi in the original work. He praises him to death if he really likes it, and hates him to death if he dislikes him. Sakura even defended her, saying "Naruto has no father." "Mother, that's why I'm uneducated" are really uneducated words. Of course, in a place like Konoha School where bullying is constant, the education may be quite distorted. The only reason why the Hokage group has not grown up is that their political ability is too simple. Even people like Danzo don't know much about political struggle. . There are too many personal dramas, and there are many mistakes. It is recommended to read more official explanations in the original comics, such as the Book of Formations, etc., Go through the timeline, note personal abilities, and try to add as few conspiracy theories as possible, such as Shikamaru. It was so embarrassing there. How could he know information that only a few high-level officials knew. When Kushina was a Jinchuriki, even the Sannin did not reveal the information. Of course, this Sannin was probably referring to Jiraiya, and Tsunade and Orochimaru could probably guess it. I can only say that the book is a bit messy overall and not to my liking, although I prefer to read it all. .

I can't stand it after reading Chapter 20. Brother, I have no objection to you accepting Sakura, Ino, and Hinata. I have no objection to you accepting Mitarashi Anko, who are of the same age. Although they are older, they don't have the idea of ​​falling in love. You can accept them. But Kurenai Yuhi, Asuma can chase a normal woman, but you go and destroy her, and when Kurenai Yuhi was twenty, you were four years old. Forcing a woman to wait for you for more than ten years. This is not a question of whether to accept or not, this is a question of character. Lustfulness and tastelessness are two different things. You can be lustful but not tasteless.

I just read the first ten chapters. This time, the protagonist becomes a clown due to lack of information. How can the adaptive Sharingan compare to the self-selected kaleidoscope? As long as you choose one of Uchiha Hikari's Eight Thousand Spears, mark it on Naruto and Sasuke, they will be reincarnated within a year.

Apart from the name, everything else has nothing to do with Naruto, and he also likes to feed him💩

There are a lot of little pornographic books under the skin of Hokage, which range from Yuhihong to Xiaoying when they are less than ten years old. After reading dozens of chapters, I didn't do anything serious, so I just highlighted a few flirtations with women. A hot-blooded fanfic, why is it written like this? Gone

So brainless? If Kenji appeared in front of people now, it would have been known to the ninja world that he was impersonating Madara. How could he wait until the 5 Kage Conference to announce it to the world? What Kenji wants now is to hide behind the scenes, slowly influence the course of events, and collect tailed beasts. Do you really not read the original work at all and just write it yourself?

Judging from the setting of this book, I thought it was 15 years ago, with the eight colors of Konoha and the kaleidoscope that comes with Izanami and Izanagi

Brother, write well, don't flatter yourself, add your own personal details with inexplicable explanations

Why is the protagonist still so wise after the death of the third generation? ? ? Is it the time of climax when you let Peppa Pig go?

You started with a fairy body, not a Senju Hashirama. As a little Karami who doesn't know whether tomorrow or an accident will come first, you try your best to become stronger and your head is filled with yellow waste all day long. What a scumbag.

I think Senju Hashirama can beat Uchiha Madara because of the additional wood escape bloodstain limit, the ultimate developed sage body plus the perfect sage mode to benchmark the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan, the single ultimate sage body should benchmark against the Mangekyō Sharingan, at most it has no side effects, like Naru Only the perfect Sage mode can match Sasuke's Mangekyō Sharingan, and the Fairy Fox mode can match Sasuke's Eternal Mangekyō. Only the perfect reconciliation mode with Kyuubi surpasses Sasuke's Eternal Mangekyō single Sharingan or the immortal human body has been developed to the extreme. In fact, it can compete with blood stains and eliminate them. Blood stains are eliminated within the limit of blood stains. The Sharingan Immortal's human body can increase chakra, but you can hit the six-level level at will, because the six-level level must have blood stains and snares, such as the reincarnation eye, the seeking jade, and the turning eye. They are all blood stains and snares. They are the fusion of water, fire, wind, earth, thunder, yin and yang. Created together, those who have obtained one of the above three are basically all attributes. For example, Madara does not have all attributes at the beginning, but he will have it after opening the Rinnegan. Toneri also has all attributes. The Otsutsuki clan basically has all attributes. Without the blood-stained snare, you can't fight at the Six Paths level.

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