I Don't Know

I am not used to the first person. It is similar to an autobiography and is relatively niche 🙂

Why does it not add up when I put recommendation votes every day?

Awesome, well written, update soon

After reading one chapter, the logic is a bit confusing. It feels like a Japanese translation

If you feel that the writing is not good, you can end it quickly and then summarize your experience and start a new book. I just saw the qualification test. 1. Your first few chapters are in first person, and later on you are in third person. The first person is very discouraging 2. It depends on what kind of immortality or martial arts you want to write about. If you feel like a novice, keep it simple and write about an extraordinary training system. 3. The protagonist wears it through the space channel, and then feels very awesome, and can even test it in disguise. It's very abrupt, as if you are very good and know a lot. The reasons and logic for joining the sect are not that strong. 4. In conversations and social interactions, you must pay attention to the "order of superiority and inferiority" (the size of your fist). In any society, there are three levels.