Time Loop: Captured by Six Doors at the Beginning

The writing is very good, and the rhythm of the plot is very appropriate. The plot has twists and turns, and it is not at all cliche. It is not like Xiaobai's plot rhythm that depends on the supporting villains who are specially slapped in the face by the protagonist. The foreshadowing set up in the early stage is revealed bit by bit, which makes people more and more excited to watch. Moreover, the character creation is also distinctive and flesh-and-blood. If there is any pity, it is that the chapters are a bit short, not enough to read, and not enjoyable!

I read it to the end in one breath, and it was hearty. Although there are some flaws in the middle, overall the author's writing style is still good. He did not deliberately suppress the protagonist, so you can still read it.

It's very well written. I'm afraid I'll die from it, so I'll give it a try.

The world view and setting of this book are excellent. It is not popular because it has a big poisonous point. The Huang Xiaoxiao part poisoned me to death. I didn't dare to read it at all and just skipped over it before I recovered. Now that I have seen Jin Shangjing, it is much better.

If there are new friends coming, I can explain a few points here. First, the world view will be relatively new. I have put a lot of effort into the training system and martial arts design. It is suitable for those who like high martial arts and interesting martial arts. Second, time loop system The protagonist will not really suffer, it is just a dilemma designed at the beginning. Third, the layout is still carefully designed Friends who like to see the layout can also watch it. Fourth, the overall story is quite innovative. I ask myself that the writing is quite serious, and every setting is taken seriously. Fifth, I am quite diligent in updating, usually three times a day. 8am, 12pm, and 6pm. So every reader is welcome to come and watch Finally, if you think the writing is good, please support it, such as giving a subscription or something. This is the only assessment standard to measure the author's work. This way the work will have a chance to gain more exposure. Thank you to every reader for your support

Write about emotions and development, don't listen to those eunuchs

There are too many wives. If you see a girl, just accept it. Regardless of whether you are a widow or a married woman, the children are older than the protagonist. It is too heavy.

After Chapter 150, the level plummets, abandon

First of all, I still like works with this theme, so I would like to comment on it and give it up. The bugs in this work are: |. The male protagonist reaches a level every day, and no one suspects it? No one went to investigate? 2. Didn't the male protagonist use this time to make a comeback (author Goldfinger) and not think twice about doubting it? Isn't there a price? , The villain in this game has a low IQ, and a dynasty in Daxia is now purely a background. Just ask, at the beginning, the male protagonist killed a dragon guard, but he was not sent to investigate or anything like that. He did not commit any self-destruction. To talk about a relationship with you, let the male protagonist run errands to send a message to the author Shui Zhang? There is almost no description of Da Xia in the back, and it is all about the martial arts. For example, in the beginning of the martial arts hall, why is the identity revealed? Later on, the male protagonist can even shrink and pretend to be martial arts, wouldn't the villain not be able to? Can't you pretend to be something else? What's written in the back is so awesome, and what's written in the front is so cool. I don't know how to expose it to the male protagonist. Others are doing things secretly, why can't they use dirty methods? Others are a big sect, and they also send a Dragon Guard from the Dynasty. You don't even have a male protagonist in the beginning. What are you thinking? And the male protagonist uses so many crossbows later on, why can't they use them in the beginning? This work is based on a popular female protagonist, and the relationship line is hasty. It can be seen that the author is overthinking and basically rushing to catch up with the plot. Now the latest chapter is like rushing. I don't understand how the female protagonist fell in love with the male protagonist? . There are still many questions that I don't want to talk about. To sum up, the subject matter is good, but the plot is overwhelming. It generally revolves around the key points of the writing time. Basically, it will be mentioned every few chapters. It is annoying to watch. There are mixed reviews. I can watch it but I can't use my brain to read it. It costs 500 to write a book review, which is 5 yuan. If I didn't like this kind of subject, I feel like I would have lost money.

It's really not easy. I can say that I have written a few books that are not unfinished and have no eunuchs. They echo the previous books. After reading online articles for so many years, I really haven't seen a few of them.

The protagonist now directly looks for an opportunity to kill all the emperors, and then casually makes up the lost royal family, matching the protagonist's current strength and his adoptive father, and then directly arrives at his loyal palace 🙂

I didn't expect to meet the author on Zhihu 😂

1. I didn't want to read this book after reading the title and introduction. It was too vulgar and cliched, and I didn't see any skill from the author. The title and introduction were completely copied from others. Although such straightforward introduction and title have the advantage of pointing out the main elements of the novel, they are really bad 2. Read later There were so many good reviews that I couldn't help but click on it. It's true as the reviews said, you can't read the first part, it's very bad. Not to mention the eight chapters in the review, I couldn't survive three chapters. Maybe this is also one of my shortcomings. When I first read a novel, I like to read it carefully. When I read it carefully, many problems with the novel came out. First of all, the writing style is not good. The author thought he had written everything he wanted to write, but in fact he had not written it at all. 3. For example, if the old beggar dies and the protagonist is angry, the author may want to show the protagonist's disregard for human life towards the Six Gates, which breaks his original understanding, so the protagonist is angry, which leads to the conflict between the protagonist and Qianhu reaching the extreme, so after the protagonist is resurrected again, he says he wants to kill the Six Gates. But please, please let the author clearly understand the plot at that time. The protagonist was powerless to resist at that time and allowed that person to manipulate him. If the protagonist didn't have a golden finger and could do it all over again, he would have died long ago, so most people will be frightened now. 4. But now that the protagonist has a golden finger, when he sees the beggar being killed at will, he should think more about how to get out of the current crisis and how to survive until the end of the twenty-four hours 5. Furthermore, if the protagonist is because of Liumen Kusuga If one is angry about human life and breaks one's inherent cognition, one should not shout out, because at this time the protagonist's original cognition has been completely shattered, and it is no longer angry, but something on a higher level. At this time, the protagonist's external performance will not shout, but will freeze. 6. The last point is the most ridiculous. The protagonist has already heard the habit of the Six Doors during the first reopening, which is to disregard human life and turn right and wrong, so the protagonist will not be angry at all. At the same time, in this critical situation, the protagonist can only think about how to escape. 7. I have only read a few chapters of this book. I jumped to the front and I don't know which chapter saw Huang Xiaoxiao discovering that the protagonist is not himself. I really couldn't read anymore. I didn't read the cause and effect. Judging from this plot alone, the author's plot arrangement is unreasonable. To put it bluntly, it is not likable. If the author is the time-travel protagonist, would the author want to be discovered that he is not himself? I don't think so, so this directly filters out some of the substitute readers. 8. Finally, to summarize this novel, it may be like the review. The story at the end of the first volume is enough. It may be like the book "Master of Secrets". After reading the previous ones, read it without thinking, only read the main information, and wait for the exciting parts to bring your brain.

Don't be fooled by the title and chapters 5, 6, 78. After the eighth chapter, the protagonist takes off, and his desires are suppressed first. The author has ideas and the ability to control it, which is above average. This book really makes me feel like I have returned to the past few years. Everyone has a position and their own interests, rather than sitting there waiting for a stepping stone to become the protagonist.

Don't overpower the protagonist, use the golden finger to the extreme. It's the first time I read such an enjoyable online article.

On the morning of July 20, the editor sent an urgent message, which educated me to the depths of my soul. After listening to it, I was sweating, my laziness recovered, and I felt ashamed inside, so I wrote a post to remember it, so that I can reflect on myself. The editor said: I always remind you to update at least twice a day. You sometimes update once and sometimes twice. What position do you put the readers? If you don't write diligently, how can you dream about achieving results? Isn't this just a dream? Me: trembling, terrified, not daring to say a word. The editor said again: At least two updates are the key to my day and night advice. If you are suffering from laziness, it is better not to write. Don't learn the nonsense of idiots. Does a one-time beast deserve to have achievements? Me: Sweating profusely, terrified, I hurriedly said yes. The editor then said: And your article must be written carefully to make it comfortable for readers. Now you have written 50,000 words, but tens of thousands of words cannot serve readers well. It will definitely be doomed in the future. You must sort it out yourself first, and take a look at it after writing. Don't throw all garbage in front of readers. Me: May I ask what went wrong with the editor and made it uncomfortable for readers? The editor said: The reading figures are getting worse and worse, plummeting, and it looks like it is going to be finished. If there is something that is not working, it is not working here, and it is not working that way. I suggest you change the name of the protagonist to the four characters "Master Reader", and taste it carefully to see what the difference is. Me: The editor really had a clever idea. I replaced the protagonist's name with Mr. Reader. After careful review, I found many problems. The editor said again: I just realized it now, it's too late, now it's a life and death situation, I must cheer up, work hard to update, improve the quality, and then apologize to the readers. The above content has been adapted by me and has become fictitious. If there is any coincidence, it is purely the same. But what the editor said today really shocked me. The first is lack of professionalism and not taking the career of online writing seriously enough. I always feel that one update or two updates are just updates, but I do not take into account the readers' experience of following updates. We need to reflect on this carefully. The second is that the content is not well controlled and the writing is not enjoyable. Although this is an enjoyable article, some parts of the content are obviously problematic. After listening to the editor's words, I am still ready to cheer up and hope to write better. One final word The current reading data is indeed very poor. I am not good enough in writing, and I am not qualified to ask readers to follow it. However, if readers feel uncomfortable in any way, they can point it out and I will try to correct it. Thank you again for taking the time to read, and I hope this is a novel that doesn't feel like a waste of time.

Network pictures, invasion and deletion

This book was really put off by the title. When I first read it, I thought it was another assembly-line novel. But now that I read it, the plot is well-arranged and has historical evidence. The enemies have high IQs. The protagonist uses his powerful golden finger to kill these powerful enemies. It is really fun to watch. The author has a really good grasp of the fun. The beginning part was so jarring

It's the first time I've ever seen this. You need to have a fan score of 500 or more before you can speak. How miserable have you been criticized before?

Author, please. The protagonist went out for sex several times before the 24 hours were up. He also accused himself of being suspected many times without checking the situation. You also repeatedly emphasized that the protagonist is cautious. Where is the caution? I am speechless.

Do you feel comfortable with this author's book? You've already said something cool, so why don't you tell me what's cool about it? Do you plan to write this hurdle directly to the finale? It's almost chapter 40. The plot at the beginning has to be so complicated, the plot is too drawn out. It could be a little simpler, just dig some holes and bury them later, that would be fine. I feel that the author wanted to write this book very well, perfectly and carefully. It's a pity that you can't control it. , I have read a book of this type. Very cool, although the plot is not as complicated as you wrote. But everyone can see it clearly and refreshingly. This one of yours looks completely different now. . I tried to control everything, but failed to do anything well.

Relying on the existing environment, a unique martial arts system was developed. This system is very good, and the author can rely on it for a lifetime.

Girls, young women, and married women are all included. If you really don't want to read this book, you should think carefully.

There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people. It is a very good novel. I like Qianqiu very much, because I think Qianqiu should be like us ordinary people who have superhuman strength. While satisfying their own desires, the master can help the world, while the poor can live alone. I like the way Qianqiu makes decisions for those people. I didn't come to bully them, but I came and you still bullied them. So wasn't my visit in vain? It's really good, at least in my eyes, I like it. We are destined to meet again in the world, see you there!

The system architecture has the feeling of swordsmanship in the snow, but it is much more exciting than watching it in the snow. The author's writing style is also very good, the ideas are clear, the characters are outstanding, and there is no messy nonsense. Overall, it is a rare masterpiece. The only novels that have been completed in the past year or so are "Nightmare Attack" and this one gave me an addictive feeling that I couldn't stop reading! I hope the author will continue to work hard and achieve greater success! Writing a book really depends on talent. Whether the writing is good or not can be seen after reading three or five chapters.

There is no chance to become the helmsman again😭😭😭

A very good Harem Immortal, fully subscribed and supported, but it is indeed much more youthful than the Human Emperor, and the pace is not as good as the Human Emperor. I hope the author will continue to improve and quickly write a new book to be delivered 😁

The author also wants to argue that it was Liu Beiwen who started the business in the past.

When will you write a new book? The current Qidian books are too repetitive, and there are really few books with their own characteristics.

Well written, looking forward to your next book