Harvesting Leeks Starts from Yangshen

It's so well written, it feels like a vest

When I first read the introduction, I thought it was another ordinary Zhutenliu fan novel, but I didn't expect it to be very interesting. The author's perspective reflected in the protagonist's thoughts and behaviors is very different from common fantasy novels and even fan fiction. The approach of "throwing out the title of the protagonist in the previous world directly" at the beginning is a bit poisonous. In the absence of any foreshadowing, it is easy to give people the instant feeling that "this is the protagonist of Long Aotian's template in ancient times". If this is an impulsive reader, he may say goodbye immediately... In contrast, "The God III" is much better handled. It first allows readers to feel the protagonist's "supernormal abilities and thoughts" as the plot progresses, and actively raise the question "Can a person become so intelligent through just one time travel?", And then the author slowly reveals "the identity of the protagonist before the time travel", and only after the gray line is drawn, will it give people a feeling of "that's what it is". In fact, the book's approach of "revealing the protagonist's background in advance and raising it to the top at the beginning" can easily cause readers to have a rebellious mentality: "I've been boasting so much before, I want to see if the protagonist's ability is strong enough." In this way, as long as the protagonist has loopholes in the subsequent plot, it will immediately "break the rules", the character will be OOC, the setting will explode, and it will never come back. As we all know, the author cannot create a character who surpasses his own intelligence. Therefore, the IQ status of the previous protagonist is set so high that "breaking the rules" is almost inevitable. But what exceeded my expectations and impressed me is that until now, the protagonist still shows no signs of "breaking the rules" - because we don't know what the real top characters think like, so the characters created by the author only need to be smarter than or reach the "top characters imagined by readers". But it's still not easy. The protagonist of this book is a "Hua Wuque" type character (except for LSP), who is gentle, gentle, has long-term plans, is thoughtful, wise but not hurtful, has accumulated a lot of experience, and even acts openly and openly. Under "Everything must be said to others", it is to promote the trend of history and use the vast power of history. The general trend of Tangtang is overwhelming, and those who go against the trend will eventually be like a mantis trying to beat the cart... It is very difficult to portray such a character vividly and not be "perfect to the point of falsehood", so the author actually deliberately avoided this and left an "LSP" characteristic for the protagonist. The characteristics of the plot design of this book are "vivid" and "real": "vivid" lies in the fact that the protagonist's desire to promote the direction of history is not superficial slogans and "ambitions" ("Yi Zi": Are you polite? 🐶), But through events and struggles involving different characters, it vividly shows the protagonist's "civilians" and "generals" in the process of achieving his goals. , "Civil servants", "harem", "rebels", and "emperors", the interests of the characters in different classes and different positions, and the sophistication of the world; the "real" lies in the author's in-depth analysis of the logical chain behind the problems and games in the plot, which makes the protagonist's wisdom very "real", rather than using "intelligence" or "cheating" to fool the past (named a "unicorn genius"). I am looking forward to the subsequent development of the plot, and I am optimistic about the author! But looking at the current speed of the plot, each world is a long story with deep exploration and rich description. First, can the author persist? Second, what if the readers in this world are not interested (plot direction, advancement speed, pure maintenance)? These two issues involving "eating" may be something the author needs to consider in advance.

This book is quite interesting. After scrolling through the comment area, I saw that many people are struggling with the issue of the harem. Everyone has their own preferences and cannot be forced to do so. The biggest problem with the harem is the portrayal of the women and the distribution ratio of the story content in the text. In my eyes, as long as the portrayal is good, there is no problem. The biggest difference between this book and other fantasy novels is the protagonist's style and method of doing things. The pattern is still relatively large. As far as personal reading experience is concerned, the first three chapters are a bit difficult to attract people, but the subsequent chapters are much more comfortable to read, and the protagonist behaves very methodically. Another point is that the logic of the overall situation needs to be correct. This book does a good job in this regard. I have not read the original work of this fan. As far as this book is concerned, the setting of the characters is generally consistent with the content of the article. To put it bluntly, this novel is a novel that can be read with your brain. There is no big problem with the logic of the writing. I haven't seen many poisonous points so far. Except that the first few chapters are not attractive enough, there is no problem.

Finished The writing is good But it feels a bit awkward, and the protagonist is a bit indifferent to rewards and punishments! No matter what other people do to the protagonist, the protagonist will reward him with a lot of benefits and make the other person feel grateful to him. Perhaps as the author said, when people grow old and have experienced too many things, they will choose to be tolerant of most things. But throughout the entire article, until the end, I didn't see the protagonist taking the initiative to take action against someone with some description In the fantasy world, force is respected, and most people are afraid of power but not moral. I didn't see the protagonist's methods being very clever at all. Which big boss doesn't have the domineering power to sweep across the heavens and suppress the world? (Maybe it's because I'm too young.) You must know that most of the people who read novels are young people Reading novels is just for fun. Happy grudge! Or you can be invincible and then be happy with your grudges [The above is just my humble opinion] I hope the author can get rid of the dross (I hope there is essence)🙂 Continue to write good articles

A child of a few years old teases his subordinates all day long, regardless of whether he can be fucked or not, but as a normal person, would you blush at the teasing of a child? I'm afraid not everyone thinks this little kid is cute. If you look at what the author wrote, I don't understand how you can fuck a brat?

Poison Point 1: This book is a harem novel. The protagonist's harem exceeds one yuan, which means it exceeds 129,600. If you don't like watching harems, please leave immediately to avoid being poisoned. Poison point 2: The protagonist of this book is the reincarnation of an old monster. He is actually over 200 years old. He was just young when he appeared. This is unacceptable. Please leave immediately to avoid being poisoned. Poison point 3: The protagonist of this book is omnipotent, a super genius, and has all skills at full value. He is a super Long Aotian, not a weakling. If this is unacceptable, please leave immediately to avoid being poisoned. Poisonous point 4: There are a lot of private articles in this book, which the author likes, so I will definitely add them to it. If you don't like to see various ideological struggles and various rationales, please leave immediately to avoid being poisoned. Poison Point 5: The characters in this book will not be simplified, so the characters are all complex to a certain extent. Readers who do not like the two sides of the characters, please leave immediately to avoid being poisoned. Poison Point 6: Of course, the harem in this book has the legacy of Wei Wu, and the protagonist is often a bitter mistress. You can tell by looking at the cover. Readers who don't like the legacy of Wei Wu, please leave immediately to avoid being poisoned. This list of poisonous points will be continuously added. Readers who do not like it, please leave immediately. Because the author does not intend to change any of the above poisonous points, thank you for your cooperation.

The entry point is a big problem. How old is the kid, and he is still full of sex bugs? Even if he knows that he is thinking like an adult, he is still watching the show. I am not watching the emperor's uncle. Besides, I want to watch the emperor's uncle, who is like a young man, a top-notch maintenance worker, and a newlywed is not as good as you.

Fortunately for Yang Shen, eternal life has been certified for a long time, and as for the dragon symbol, hehe 😏

Judging from the unreliable way of speaking, the protagonist has never been a leader, and his management ability is quite low! At the same time, many of the dialogues in the article are very weird when put into real life scenes!

Maybe seven years ago this book would have made my blood boil with excitement and I couldn't help myself.

There is too little written about the protagonist's training. He is obsessed with women and schemes all day long. It is not as exciting as the step-by-step breakthrough of Hong Yi in the original work of Yangshen. Many places are inconsistent with the original work. I hope the author can read the original work carefully and the second set cannot overturn the original work, otherwise it will not be a fan. Also, since the protagonist has traveled through time and become a champion, I hope he can still write the domineering power of the champion. This is the couplet he wrote in the original work: The first couplet is: If you say you can do it, you can do it! It doesn't matter if it doesn't work! The second line is: If you say you can't do it, you can't do it! It doesn't work either! The horizontal comment is: I can't accept it! A simple couplet vividly expresses the spirit of mastering the creation of heaven and earth! Each word flows around like the God of Creation. What is the protagonist's current fist intention? It's not clear at all.

I didn't expect that it's already the year 2202, and there are still plots where people just fall in love with her words and domineering attitude 😰

In which chapter does the protagonist reach adulthood? I don't want to see a 7-year-old kid acting cool

The author actually feels that these scenes involving Meng Bingyun are very exciting. If Hong Xuanji still has a bit of Meng Bingyun's status in his heart, might Hong Yi be bullied? In short, Yang Pan and Hong Xuanji are not good people, damn it.

Is the title of the book written incorrectly? It should be changed to: Recruiting the harem begins with Yang Shen

The only drawback is that the protagonist is an eight-year-old kid, and every time he pretends to be cool, the thought of it makes him uncomfortable.

Chapter 52, a bunch of female protagonists, don't even look at them, 🐴

I feel like the protagonist can only practice martial arts! Find an opportunity to practice Taoism. As well as this queen, Concubine Yan, and Concubine Yuan, I suggest you not let them go.

With your book title, I really can't see where the protagonist's leek is? ? ? ?

In fact, it should be written about the characters of Xue Zhong and Yang Shen. In fact, it feels relatively brainless. Yang Shen is not suitable to really write about the politics of those ancient courts. The motivations of many characters need to be edited by the author.

The writing is quite good, but it's a bit strange for a child of several years old to tease a woman. Also, the protagonist seems to have not started practicing martial arts yet. I hope he can start practicing soon and crush Hong Xuanji's wheel of life and death.

Pig's trotter label, intelligence max? Hehe

It's well written, better than that Da Gan champion. Are there any similar ones?

Author, you should know🙂

Poison Point 1: This book is a harem novel. The protagonist's harem exceeds one yuan, which means it exceeds 129,600. If you don't like watching harems, please leave immediately to avoid being poisoned. Poison point 2: The protagonist of this book is the reincarnation of an old monster. He is actually over 200 years old. He was just young when he appeared. This is unacceptable. Please leave immediately to avoid being poisoned. Poison point 3: The protagonist of this book is omnipotent, a super genius, and has all skills at full value. He is a super Long Aotian, not a weakling. If this is unacceptable, please leave immediately to avoid being poisoned. Poisonous point 4: There are a lot of private articles in this book, which the author likes, so I will definitely add them to it. If you don't like to see various ideological struggles and various rationales, please leave immediately to avoid being poisoned. Poison Point 5: The characters in this book will not be simplified, so the characters are all complex to a certain extent. Readers who do not like the two sides of the characters, please leave immediately to avoid being poisoned. This list of poisonous points will be continuously added. Readers who do not like it, please leave immediately. Because the author does not intend to change any of the above poisonous points, thank you for your cooperation.

It's very well written. It feels like reading a classic novel from ten years ago.

Is this a harem story? It's so scary, 420,000 words, 17 characters, 16 women aside from the protagonists, if you write a few million words, can you remember the author with many women? ?

I'm so afraid of the author's eunuch. I subscribe to every chapter, but the fan value is ranked very high. Are there very few readers who are very high? There are very few people nailing people, so it seems difficult to make a living.

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I see the shadow of Gilgamesh in the protagonist (very stinky). So much so that the sense of immersion is not high