I Have a Monster Ranch

It's a good subject matter, but it's a pity that it wasn't written well.

If you agree that The Great Wall is a bad movie among bad movies, please raise your hands. Even among today's film and television works, they are all bad movies.

The author has strayed off topic. The theme of this book is monsters. Naturally, one should keep engaging in these things, and then turn their output into training resources to quickly become stronger. However, the author puts too much emphasis on showing off his power in front of others and controlling the plot. In a world like Zhu Xian, the protagonist comes directly to ask for a deal, and if he doesn't give it, he just starts it. If you don't have the time to write such a long story, you might as well write a few more other worlds. For example: Original Godzilla, Original King Kong, King Kong, Donkey Kong, Pacific Rim (Kaijumon, etc.), Ultraman Time and Space, Mask and Armor Warriors and So-and-So Team, etc. The Hulk (Abomination), Spider-Man 3 (Venom), Avengers (Titan Thanos), Guardians of the Galaxy (Groot)... And so on. There are also: Sadako, Grudge, Kayako, A Nightmare on Elm Street, Dead Date, Exorcist Police, Zombie Family, Ghost Night, Ghost in the Office, Ghost Tour Group, Ghost Summer, Ghost Mission, Ghost School... And so on, these worlds can even be combined into a comprehensive world. . After all, the protagonist has set the framework of Uncle Jiu at the beginning, that is, taking a supernatural path, so there is no need to build a large-scale plot world like Zhu Xian. If the protagonist sets the framework of the real world at the beginning, that is, the framework of a plane merchant, he can have a more casual style and occasionally go to other worlds to play. The theme is monsters, so we must stick to the theme. The monsters in the novel are not distinctive. Because the novel is too long, everyone does not have much impression of the monsters in it or they are not so fresh in their memory. In Zhu Xian, if the author didn't tell me, I would probably only remember the black water black snake and the yellow bird, and I have no feeling about the others.

Looking at the trading room, abstract things like soul life can be traded. The second trader has cancer, so just trade the cancer! Open your mind

Talk about "The Grandmaster", this movie! Haha, the most ironic thing about this movie is that a group of gangsters are discussing how to serve the country in a luxurious brothel! As a result, the people elected didn't do anything. They didn't kill little Japanese, nor did they kill traitors and Ergouzi! It's all about love and love! How dare you call him a great master! It's so shameless! 🙂🙂🙂

I came to see monsters, not martial arts! Become friends with Godzilla, dive into the deep sea to catch the Megalodon, ride a dinosaur in Jurassic World, recruit the dragon Eri Uesugi as an employee, and go to Game of Thrones to collect a giant dragon! The theme of your book is monsters, not martial arts cultivators!

The backend is seriously off track, and the back of the main world frame is no longer written? The exchange is not very useful. The soul of a book is not to write plots that everyone else knows, but to have its own plot. Just like the main world has been written by you, and there is also a Chinese ghost story, and it has directly transitioned to Centipede in one month? Mummy, don't you even arrange a timeline? Even the Dragon Emperor did it once! I can't even read the rest of it. Although it's a novel, there are more and more illogical places. There are so many pitfalls that you don't even bother to fill them in. I feel like I could just crash in the end.

Why do you keep writing such outdated copy? I really can't stand it anymore. Don't you even read the comments yourself? So many people don't like it and you still keep writing. I'm really speechless😓

Author, I advise you to kill Shen Qinglian quickly and start a new plot, otherwise everyone will run away, it's too poisonous.

Harry Potter, hurry up and wrap it up! I was going to jump directly there.

Everyone talks about interesting worlds that can be written about, well, maybe they can be written about, maybe not╮(￣▽￣)╭

Damn it, I don't know why, everyone who entered Uncle Jiu's world became a disciple, and basically it was these two, or Shi Jian

Don't you think about monsters in two dimensions/games? For example, Monster Hunter's Dragon, Reborn Cell's King Zan, Sekiro's Sakurayu, Pascal's Contract's Titan, Flame Fire Brigade's Enito, Considante's Demon, Naruto's Tailed Beast, God Eater's Aragami, and One Piece's Neptune.

Jin Douluo should capture Tang San and his teacher and sell them! ! 😁

I can only say that the world of Condor Shooting has become bloody and boring.

I couldn't stand it anymore and I gave up after 10 chapters.

Harry Potter is finally over, spells and magic. So embarrassing

Looking at the protagonist's first transaction in Chapter 6, I feel very speechless, although I can't say it's poisonous.

Don't write about a deadlock. I haven't read it and I don't like it. The history and mythology of those writers and directors in Hong Kong are really different.

It feels like the cart has been put before the horse. What was originally a good ranch has turned into robbing things elsewhere 😐. Also, the author didn't pay attention to other character settings when writing Zhu Tianliu. Let's not talk about soul ferrying. Is Marvel trying to catch the Hulk? I'm really not afraid that all things will give you a big mouth.

Is there a Hedao realm in Uncle Jiu's world? ? What's going on?

It is impossible for a cultivator to have a female protagonist. The protagonist is probably the kind of inner eunuch with a high-minded personality like a saint who is indifferent to all living beings!

More than two hundred posts, everyone who understands understands.

All finished. Readers who abandoned Marvel passed by.

Ever since I entered the world of Harry Potter, I started to let go and enjoy myself. I was thinking about the method. I can't use my brain when I read later, otherwise it would be painful. For example, after changing the plot and changing the world, I found that my strength was not enough. I was thinking about the method😓

It's okay, just fine without the eunuch! Come on for the new book!

Some things I want to say to the author...

Too little! And why not continue collecting monsters?

I especially want to see overlord, a two-game battle 😆

It looks good, but it's too little!