
Spiritual Qi Revival in the Martial Arts World
武侠世界内的灵气复苏
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- Completed
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- 1.9M Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Otherworld Continent
- Updated
- 2y ago
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- Qidian
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As long as the clan members replace Wan Guanjia with pig's feet, there will be no problem. If there are many people in a big clan, there will always be someone who is afraid of death and will be obedient and act as an agent. This can be interpreted as an internal fight for family property. If Wan Guanjia, a servant with a foreign surname, seeks to seize the master's property, the nature is different. At a small scale, it is murdering the master's family, and at a big scale, it is treason. Regardless of whether there is a backstage, it is obviously untenable. If the backstage power is too strong, wouldn't it be unnecessary?
The protagonist obviously has the strength to kill the housekeeper, but he is afraid of the person behind it. Why does the person behind it want to keep the protagonist?
Is there anyone like me who couldn't stand Chapter 5?
It's extremely toxic. He got married to a trash woman for no reason. It's not worth watching.
I was persuaded to quit in the fifth chapter. What about the theory of victim guilt? Author, don't tell me that Ning Hongye is the heroine!
He is inexplicably good to the Ning family. I was so poisoned at the beginning that I didn't want to watch it.
I just read four or five of them, and it seems a little unreasonable. My father-in-law is a first-class expert, but he actually makes a deal with an ordinary person, the housekeeper. Even if you write that the cultivation level is low or the housekeeper has a little cultivation level, when a first-class expert faces ordinary people, he makes a chicken-feather transaction, but isn't the housekeeper just like fish on the chopping board?
Ah... This is chapter 238, and the plot can't be advanced at all. Author, please look at this data and see if anyone is reading it. It is updated very diligently, but after reading it every day, I am confused. What did I read today? The current plot is just boiled water. It is large in quantity but tasteless at all. There is no climax at all. I grinned in embarrassment because it was completely written by two people like the beginning. There is no main plot in chapter 238 that is still in this small place. I feel that you are better than those famous gods.
After reading Chapter 4, I couldn't help but go to the paid chapter and buy a chapter to comment on. To summarize, the first four chapters first point out the current situation and reasons why the protagonist is suppressed, and then the plot launches a counterattack to kill the butler, while showing the power he secretly developed, and then got married by the way (maybe?). After reading it, I felt it was a bit cliche. If it were me, I might design the plot like this: 1. The reason for being suppressed cannot be placed on the housekeeper, but on the mastermind behind the scenes - after all, what kind of oppression can a dog driven by others have? Without a sense of oppression, how can there be a sense of relief after turning over? Then there can be a wedding banquet, and it doesn't matter if the butler's behavior is brainless and unreasonable, but it must be pointed out: all this is arranged by the mastermind behind the scenes, and everyone knows this, so although everyone looks down on the butler, no one dares to say anything, and no one thinks that the protagonist can stand up - this can further strengthen the sense of oppression of the mastermind behind the scenes and create pressure on the protagonist to suppress first and then increase. 2. When the protagonist appears, it feels like he appears first, coughing and angrily scolding the housekeeper (pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger), and then the housekeeper wants to take action. The protagonist does not take action and lets Xiaoqing send away all the enemies (you see, my maids are so fierce). Then the housekeeper became anxious and summoned those who supported him or wanted to curry favor with those behind the scenes to kill Xiao Qing. Unexpectedly, the forces secretly cultivated by the protagonist stepped forward. For example, the people who were originally affiliated with the housekeeper directly rebelled and blocked a new round of offensive (are you stupid? In fact, everyone in this yard is my people. If you don't believe me, I will call a few more to show you). At this time, the housekeeper has no choice. The protagonist is about to regain everything he has lost, but the next person to appear should be the mastermind behind the scene (otherwise, the mastermind seems to have no control, and his reaction is very slow. His own arrangements have been messed up and there is no action, which makes the opponent very stupid). Then this time, the protagonist's guards could not stop him (at the same time, the surrounding guests shouted that they were irresistible, and they tried their best to build momentum and create a sense of oppression for the mastermind behind the scenes). In the end, the protagonist personally took action to show the strength of a first-class master, overwhelm everyone, complete the final act of pretending to be a pig and eat the tiger, and declared war on the mastermind behind the scenes, and the opponent put down harsh words and walked away, giving up the butler as a chess piece - and then the subsequent confrontation plot can be led to the next confrontation. ——Although the above is full of routines, it is still very useful to design. 3. This is about Ning Hongye. To be honest, the person who harmed this woman was clearly not the protagonist, and the person who arranged her blind date was not the protagonist. On the contrary, the protagonist helped her and she yelled at the protagonist. She looked like she didn't know the bad guys and had no self-awareness. I didn't like it. If it were me and my subordinates designed such a character, I would give her an ending like this: The protagonist asked her to leave on her own and promised to help her family leave and go abroad. However, the woman still refused to let go. Then I would arrange for the protagonist to kill the woman with a sword when the other party pounced on her to entangle her. Then I said to the corpse: "It doesn't matter if you don't accept my proposal, but the things I decided will not change." Then I asked my servants to collect the body, and then arranged for Ning Hongye's family to leave. ——Of course, this is definitely contrary to the author's original intention, and even directly changed the author's protagonist's character, which is just for fun.
The writing technique is too childish and lacks thought.