Simulate the Heavens Starting from Faerûn

The plot and setting are interesting, but I still can't read it. I like to play random jokes too much. It's awkward and stiff. I'm really tired of reading the bad jokes. The dialogues are also clichés without any waves. I can only say that as a first book, the writing style is very suitable for a novice.

Very well written! Magic and technology conquer the earth, and faith becomes a god and goes into space! Even if the protagonist returns to Faerûn, he can still leave a clone to act as insurance in the Harry Potter world, and even if he dies, he can start over again! Moreover, the universe is vast and the starry sky is much larger than Faerun. As long as you conquer the earth and develop magic and technology, you will have no enemies for hundreds of thousands of years. You can farm and develop well, and you can also make waves in other universes!

I'm just curious, how many people can watch it? I read more than 20 chapters for the sake of the Warcraft fandom that will follow, but I still couldn't hold it back, and I felt extremely irritated after reading it. Complicated settings, a skill proficiency divided into nine levels, a combination of Chinese and Western, and then there are panels with word counts that are different from each other, proficiency numbers that are not used but are described in detail by the author, and boring bad jokes. I want to read on, but I really can't help but want to curse.

The creativity is okay, but the writing is not, and then there is a lot of nonsense, which is very dramatic. I repeated the data with the data. I skipped through the twenty chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. There is no sense of substitution at all. I suggest the author stick to it and just finish it. I look forward to the author's next book.

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Real water. Not only the water data, but the water setting is actually tolerable. The key is that there is really too much nonsense. A bunch of bad jokes and useless nonsense are mixed in the writing. There are only a few useful sentences... The psychology of the characters and the dialogue are all clichés and mainly nonsense. There is no serious plot... This writing is really impossible to read...

How can I put it, I ordered so many chapters, but the result was so disappointing. I came here for the dnd novel. You jumped around the world, kept a running account, and made fun of yourself. I forgot about it. In the end, this world is like this? I'm rambling here and there. I don't know what I want to write. I just added some drama if I have nothing to do. I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye.

A boring novel. Is the author writing a novel or an outline? I don't push the plot, but write about the settings and data in large sections. 70% Of a chapter is various settings, 20% is messy data, and 10% is various imagination. The real plot advancement is only done after several chapters, and the rest is all simulation.

In general, the protagonist gives people a sense of stupidity, and also has the feeling of being a licking dog. He needs to carefully describe and describe everything, and it will be done after a long period of time.

The great arcanists drove the floating city, and they all boasted very well. They captured the saints of God everywhere, the incarnation of the gods in the lower world. As a result, Wu came and the entire great arcanist system was destroyed overnight. Hundreds of great arcanists, hundreds of floating cities, all the arcanists were wiped out. In the end, the gods had to come out to clean up the mess!

The author is treating the readers as mentally retarded. Is it possible that you don't need to explain so much? We can understand it ourselves. You write a plot and it takes two or three plots to explain it. I'm convinced. The actual content of the 2000 words is only 2-300 words, and everything else is explanation.

6. What did you read as a 12-year-old bookworm? I have never eaten pork, but I have seen pigs running away. Why do you still make the same mistakes that others have made? I really don't understand. What did you watch in 12 years?

I can't understand what's written, and the plot is very challenging. Why don't you use the knowledge you've gained from experiencing several worlds? , I have never seen the protagonist study and experiment steadily in the main world. He is always doing this and that. I am really speechless😓There are almost no fighting scenes. You think you are very stable, but in fact you are very wild. Being stable means not to do too much, and integrating the acquired knowledge is the main thing. Moreover, the characters in the plot are forced to reduce their intelligence. As the saying goes, there are many mistakes in what is said. Not to mention that you are an apprentice with such low strength now. Don't you doubt that the tower master is an idiot? Even if they are blood relatives, there are many people who think that becoming a god is more powerful than you. It is too poisonous. It is much worse than the one next door (Wizard Fireball Technique, Big Fireball Technique, Nuclear Bomb). Although it is a chip type, abandon it and say goodbye.

It's really trying to buy dog ​​meat. The first volume of Harry Potter really has a reputation for magic, and nothing else at all. And that magic is just the magic of Faerun, which has nothing to do with the magic of the Harry Potter world. It can't stretch and change without trace at all, and it still fossilizes into mud? What about Transfiguration?

The front is too boring. I just briefly mentioned the Magic Academy. There is basically nothing written about magic, alchemy, potions, magic creatures, and the messy things are very detailed. There are only three chapters about magic in the pre-release content. The rest except the panel is about developing families. You have to know that everyone is attracted here to see magic and DND, not to make money from colonization. Even if you make money with potions and alchemy, it is better than this.

Half of it is nonsense about the protagonist having sex and showing off. I don't know if the author's writing is too poor or if the word count is deliberately limited.

What you are writing is just a running account. It is all about setting and repeating large-scale data. You can directly skip the places that can branch out the plot. It is simply off the mark. You are attracted by the "magic" and poisoned by the "running account" of the "simulator".

Author, I just read Chapter 36, and I want to ask, what is it about? As a simulator, I played it through it once. When I started as a wizard, I skipped the discovery of the first pot of gold. When I became a Hogwarts academy, I quickly passed through a few chapters. That means none of this is important. Since it's not important, why did you put it down? Among them, the protagonist has no character at all, only a character panel. You have the panel directly. The image depends on the plot, but you don't have any!

Well, let me remind you that the arcanists of Faerûn still need the magic network, otherwise there would not have been so many floating cities that fell after the goddess of magic cut off the network.

The writing of World of Warcraft is so disappointing, especially after the protagonist recently became the Lord of the Void, it has become even more extreme. The original plot is copied throughout. Author, you have such a poor imagination, I advise you to go to the factory to make screws, which will be more useful to the country.

The power system of this novel alone makes this novel completely collapse. The combination of east and west is a poisonous point. Even great authors dare not write like this. Whoever writes this thing will die. Look at your power system. There are three power systems and not even a main system. Writing like this is just biting off more than one can chew, and to put it bluntly, he has no understanding of his own writing style.

The power system is a joke, the article is full of nonsense, and the plot cannot advance at all.

The concept is very good, but the hand is still too raw. Write less nonsense and more development and climax.

The writing is really bad. Are you really a bookworm while sitting here? Just write down all kinds of poisonous points

It's a lot of nonsense and full of all kinds of boring jokes.

When will the complaint about bad memes be 4? It even introduces the messy world view of other works, the main power system is not clear, and there is really a lot of nonsense.

Very average, the setting and ideas are good, but the writing is rubbish. 1: A large number of authors' () annotations greatly affect the reading experience. 2: The time jumps are too frequent, and the node selection is also rubbish. Just after understanding the plot a little bit, the time jump overthrows all the accumulated emotions. It is really not good. 3: The panel information is too redundant, and it is pulled out from time to time, even though it is a free novel, it doesn't matter what it is. But the biggest problem with this panel is not that it appears frequently, but that there are too many and complicated settings. Every time the panel is updated, six dimensions, titles, experience, professions, specialties, expertise, talents, skills, a lot of information must be updated. 4: There are often some descriptions of appearance, plus some descriptions of money, economy, etc., Which is too redundant. In general, the plot content is too thin and jumpy, and it cannot stand up. However, in terms of setting information, it is too redundant and confusing, giving people a headache.

Read Chapter 18. . . . Each chapter has a large section of setting data. . I came here to read the novel, not the data and settings. There is too much nonsense. . Unknown priority

I jumped to Chapter 194. The setting is good, but the writing is lame. There are a lot of sentences describing appearance and money economy in the book, and there are a lot of repeated descriptions. And the interactions with other people are also very awkward. Then I understood that pure self-pleasure writing is not a book for others to read. Goodbye, oh no, no see you 🙏

I can only say that it is best not to read the opinions of the General Assembly.