The Unrivaled Tang Sect: I Revived Qian Renxue from the Start

In the original work, the people who maliciously smeared and deceived Wuhun Palace were not only Hu Liena, Qian Renxue, Bibi Dong, but also Qian Daoliu. Tang Hao even came to show off and pretended to be cool, but he still didn't take action? It's so outrageous! So it can't be said that Hu Liena and the others deserved it. It can only be the original author's malicious smear campaign. He wanted to make Wuhundian the villain, but what should I do if the villain is not dark enough? Just highlight Tang San's wisdom through the act of lowering his intelligence! Hehe!!!

To be honest, what the protagonist lacks the most is a protector. Qian Renxue still needs the protagonist's care. Qian Daoliu is too strong to show up. Outside, it depends on Gu Yuena and Di Tian. They have sold you several times. Gu Yuena and the others don't even care about their own soul beasts. Di Tian only cares about the core ones, especially the hundred thousand dragon species. They have been scared by the gods from the beginning.

Am I the only one who thinks the protagonist has been frustrated in recent chapters? I feel uncomfortable watching it myself. Rui Shou's character is a bit too arrogant and rude. Maybe it's because she has never been out of the Star Dou and has not had much contact with the outside world. In the first few chapters, the red bean bracelet is not hers. She can take it as her own without the owner's consent. This is very speechless. The same goes for the storage soul guide. I hope you can see it in the future. The change in Rui Shou's character. (I'm just pointing out what I think is bad. I don't mean to spite the author. Please don't scold me. Thank you. It doesn't matter if the author doesn't adopt this suggestion after reading it. After all, it is the author's article. I will support it. The most important thing is to ask all netizens to be merciful and don't scold me. I'm afraid)

The author's emotional drama is quite original.

After reading more than 70 chapters, I don't know how to evaluate it. Speaking of well-written, the author's writing is indeed quite good. The original plot lines and stories alone are relatively rich and can arouse empathy. Let's talk about poor writing. The author wrote the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists, which is really hard to describe in one sentence. You wrote Gu Yuena better than Qian Renxue. I could still understand after almost killing the protagonist after rebirth, and I could still watch it before going to Shrek, but after that, I was completely speechless with Qian Renxue's performance in Shrek. When a misunderstanding occurs, if I don't take the initiative to ask for the reason, I can still think that it is due to Qian Renxue's own personality. But getting angry from time to time is really hard to watch. The reasons for getting angry at the protagonist several times are inexplicable. In addition, Qian Renxue's inner drama is not written. When I watched it, I felt that the protagonist was really frustrated. It's okay not to be grateful for resurrecting her. After all, she herself wanted to die. But at least the protagonist has given hope, and it has been strengthening, the angel family. But when she got to the academy, she got angry just because other girls invited the protagonist, and then she followed them. He even wanted to go over and beat the protagonist. He even glares at the protagonist without knowing what is going on. Is this definitely your character after your rebirth? At least become calm. As a result, whenever something happens, it is the protagonist who makes the plans. If the idea is not good, he will not think about it together and just stare at the protagonist angrily. What, did the protagonist have sex with you or something? The heroine's character is really... It's hard to describe in one word. It feels like this heroine appears purely to make people feel uncomfortable. Gu Yuena on the other side is much stronger than her.

The picture I just found

In fact, the protagonist could have exposed his true identity. Under the threat of Sun Moon, Holy Spirit and Di Tian, ​​Shrek has no time to care, let alone Qian Daoliu.

I just want to ask, is there any peerless Tang sect fan fiction about Huo Gua killing Ya San?

The original Qian Renxue didn't practice well, what happened to you after you went to Shrek? Use development strength to fish in an open and honest manner. Just as you started writing, strength determines status. The Angel Clan relied on the Golden Hand to send out 100 titled Douluo to directly sweep the continent. Squatting at home to God. He rushed closer to the protagonist group and was discovered by Tang San in the sky? Putting the cart before the horse.

Forget Hu Liena, take a closer look at the original work. When Tang San and Bibi Dong died, Hu Liena's expression was like a white-eyed wolf. When Tang San died, she shed tears, and when Bibi Dong died, she was just sad.