Douluo Dalu: My Dad Is a Titled Douluo

I've read 20 chapters. The topic is good, the ideas are good, and the stance isn't biased, but it's full of flaws. First of all, the protagonist transmigrated, and according to the setting, you're already a Super Douluo, yet you can't change anything? You think you're just an ordinary person? No, you're a Super Douluo, are you that useless? You're not ordinary, so why are you just giving up?

I remember there was a wildly popular multiverse novel before, but the author made a fatal mistake by having the protagonist's daughter get involved with Iron Man while he was in seclusion. The entire book was so badly criticized that it was abandoned. That's the feeling I get from your book: a spineless, good-for-nothing protagonist.

Let me tell you, first, This novel was indeed written on a whim. Yuan Xunlu is weak and useless. He is just an ordinary titled Douluo, and no god takes him seriously. This is a critical point. This book simply tells a story about Yuan Ling'er, how she gradually wins over Tang San. (I don't know if the main character is Yuan Xunlu or Yuan Ling'er...) If you like it, you can continue watching.

After reading the author's self-indulgent chapter, all I can say is that the protagonist's starting point is already better than most protagonists, so there's no way he can afford to be in this predicament. In real life, everyone talks about giving up, but everyone is doing their best as the protagonist on the stage of life, striving to make their lives better.

We have no choice; our family background and talents are both average, and we lack the ability to predict the future. We're unwilling to accept it, but there's nothing we can do. However, the protagonist has a first-rate family background and talents, knows the future, yet still manages to be so lazy. This kind of person is even more detestable than a rich second-generation who deliberately flaunts their family background.

All I can say is that if you can accept the protagonist being cuckolded, you can continue reading.

The fact that Bibi Dong was forced into a relationship decades before the beginning of the story is a major flaw. First of all, you met Bibi Dong while living in the same era as Yu Xiaogang, and you even managed to make her fall for this boastful master. How pathetic are you? It's not that Bibi Dong is so beautiful that you have to like her.

I subscribed to this chapter specifically to criticize the author, wondering if their lover was raped and that's why they wrote a cuckold story.

I can roughly guess the plot: It's designed to be about someone who's not very motivated to work, gives up when faced with difficulties, slacks off, thinks they don't care about anything, and then gets all killed at Jialing Pass. It's... Very similar to those self-righteous, cool tropes that Tang Jia San Shao likes to write.

When the newspaper vendor wrote about my sister picking up a corpse, I didn't even realize it was a problem. It was only about 500 words, and I was already getting criticized. You wrote something like this and people are praising it? That's unbelievable. I don't know if those praising me are just unhappy with their lives or if they've hired trolls, but I feel like I've been sabotaged.