Douluo Dalu: My Dad Is a Titled Douluo

After reading 20 chapters, I found the topic to be very good, the ideas to be good, and the stance not skewed, but it was full of poisonous points. First of all, the protagonist has traveled through time. According to the settings, you are already a super Douluo. You can't change anything? You think you are an ordinary person, don't you think you are a super Douluo, are you useless? This is not ordinary, why is it so messed up? If you can't handle it in the later stage, you can't handle it in the early stage? If Bibi Dong can't change, can Dugu Bo still be defeated? Will the World Line Convergence take care of this? Even if you force me to explain, you won't even explain it. Secondly, I don't care if Tang San is black, but don't be embarrassed. Brainless blackness is really more uncomfortable than brainless licking. In the end, Tang San's character is indeed poor, but he really worked hard and tried his best. It seems to me that the protagonist is completely in a state of being a mess. Even if he is a mess, he still says that he is forced to do this. There is no other way. Knowing that the plot does not change at all in the end, he ends up being killed? I'll continue to see if you can change it later, whether you can get the Ice and Fire Eyes, and how you can get them back after you get them. It's really a good idea for this subject, but the setting is full of loopholes.

I remember that there was a popular book called Myriad Worlds, but the author committed suicide and made the protagonist's daughter fall in love with Iron Man because of her seclusion. The whole book was scolded for being a eunuch. This is how your book feels to me, a useless and useless protagonist.

Let me talk about it, First of all, this novel was indeed written by my brain. Yuan Xunlu is weak and useless. He is just an ordinary titled Douluo. No god likes him. This is a poisonous point. This book simply tells a story about Yuan Ling'er, who slowly became Tang San. (I don't know whether the protagonist is Yuan Xunlu or Yuan Linger...) If you like it, you can continue watching, If you don't like it, you can move on. //////// Then about the Ice and Fire Eyes and Fairy Grass. There are two ways to get fairy grass, first: civilization. Detoxify Dugu Bo, play well and get the fairy grass. Others can do it, but it is difficult for Yuan Xunlu, who was born in Wuhun Palace, to do it. Dugu Bo has always been the enemy of Wuhun Palace, and Yuan Xunlu was born in Wuhun Palace. You said you would detoxify Dugu Bo, but Dugu Bo wouldn't believe it because he was afraid that you, Wuhun Palace, would murder me. Even if Dugu Bo believed you, just let it go. Dugu Bo has been around for so long, so he should be careful. He gives you the poison pill and asks you to take it as a guarantee that you can successfully detoxify. Do you take it or not? You eat, what if Dugu Bo goes back on his word? Don't say that Dugu Bo is trustworthy. That's a character in a novel. Do you use the character in a novel to infer a person's character in real life? People's hearts are still separated from each other by the belly, but you are separated by a dimension. If you don't eat, there's no need to talk about it, and I'm not a fool. Second: Savage. Fight Dugu Bo away directly and rob him! Dugu Bo is decades older than you and has a higher level of cultivation than you. You may not be able to defeat him. You asked Wuhun Palace to bring in reinforcements, and you got the fairy grass. Okay, who does it belong to? How to divide? How many more will Qian Xunji compassionately leave for you? (So what if you find it? I have a gun!) When others eat the fairy grass, Wuhun Palace has a large number of strong men. Are they grateful to Qian Xunji or you? All my love falls on Qian Xunji. Are you willing to make a wedding dress for a QJ prisoner? ///////// The Wuhun Palace is not a saint's house, it is one of the three major political forces on the Douluo Continent. Is there a plan? Is there any intrigue? Are you fighting for power? Do you think they are the great reds in human history, who came specifically to liberate the All-Soul Masters? A feudal religious force, also worthy!

I am happy after reading the author's chapter. I just want to say that the starting point of the protagonist is already higher than that of most protagonists. There is no way to mess up the situation. In life, everyone says that it is bad and bad, but everyone is playing their own protagonists on the stage of life and working hard to make their lives better, so don't say how ordinary people are. The protagonist of this book is not qualified to compete with everyone who works hard to live in reality. In Douluo's stage life, I did not feel that the protagonist tried his best to play his role. Your book feels like the protagonist in those TV series who earns 3,000 a month and lives in a luxurious villa. He has become out of touch with the public.

There is nothing we can do. The family background and talents are all mediocre, and there is no ability to predict the future. There is nothing we can do if we don't want to. But the protagonist's family background and talents are all top-notch, and he still knows the future, but he can act like this. This kind of thing is even more disgusting than the rich second generation who goes out of his way to show off his family background.

All I can say is that if you accept that the protagonist is a cuckold, you can continue watching.

Traveling back decades before the start, Bibi Dong was still raped. This is a super poisonous point. First of all, he met Bibi Dong at the same time as Yu Xiaogang, and it also made Bibi Dong fall in love with Yu Xiaogang, a bragging master. How much of a waste are you? It's not that Bibi Dong is so beautiful and you have to like her. It's that you and Yu Xiaogang are in a competitive position at the same time. You can still lose or be succeeded by Qian Xunji. If you don't criticize her, who will you criticize?

I subscribed to a chapter specifically to comment on whether the author wrote cuckold articles because his lover had been raped.

I can probably guess a little bit about the context. I want to design it to be the kind of person who doesn't have much energy to work. When encountering some difficulties, he stops doing it, starts messing around, thinks he doesn't care about anything, and gets killed as soon as he goes to Jialing Pass. At once. . . It's very similar to the kind of plot that San Shao likes to write where he thinks he's cool. This kind of character is good for supporting characters, but not likable for the protagonist (although I personally like it). If you want to establish the protagonist's image, you still need to portray more early characters and arrange some stories, such as the conflict between the early efforts and the strong plot inertia. For Bibi Dong's love plot, the master must be promoted. He must be a truly talented, capable and ambitious person to attract Bibi Dong (the master was set up from the beginning as another protagonist template, with good theory, strong girlfriend, high birth, and martial arts that can counterattack with practice. This guy has solved the problem of cultivation and looks more like the protagonist than Tang San)

When the newspaper seller wrote about the plot of my sister's body collection, I didn't even notice it. It was about 500 words long, and I was scolded. You write like this and some people praise you, it's really outrageous. I don't know if those people I praised were unhappy with their lives or if they were hired by trolls. Anyway, I was plotted against me. If you really don't want to eat this bowl of rice, don't eat it. If you want to eat it, don't make those stupid mistakes. If you want to write Liu Bei's article, don't write it again. Isn't it nice to go to the moderator?