The Ordinary Road, 2010

How to put it this way, I felt a little uncomfortable reading this book. It is a good book, but it is not suitable for me to read. It feels like watching a current campus love drama, but there is no sense of immersion, because my high school has no student union, no school belles, and no clubs. There are very few activities. At most, there is a Spring and Autumn Sports Festival and a New Year's Day party, so there are many things in the book. I couldn't feel anything about it, including the supporting characters in it, who were in love, because they never appeared in my high school career. To put it simply, this book didn't look like a rebirth story in the early stage, but more like a campus love story with a relatively mature and smart male protagonist. I subscribed to it after a few chapters and stopped reading it. The author's writing is very good. I hope the author can have a daily novel that is suitable for me to read in the future. Thank you to the author.

I think I found the biggest bug When Peng Yuchen first appeared, there was no need for Lin Yi to keep pulling the heroine to force her way into the entertainment industry. With Lin Yi's future development, it would not be a matter of minutes for him to debut as a female star. In addition, Gu Caiwei is good-looking and should definitely be admitted to a good art school in Beijing. If Lin Yi is on the rise in two years, he will be able to have a steady academic qualification and become famous. The heroine has never considered debuting early, so why are you in such a hurry? For Boss Peng, her first few appearances were too utilitarian and too aggressive. It is indeed important to show one's strength, but I really think Mama Gu is right. You are too anxious to set out the conditions for your debut and college admission. Isn't this just a grassroots team eager to grab people to turn over? I feel that the biggest problem in this section is Lin Yi's image creation. You already know that you are a reborn person, so why bother to recruit the heroine into the agency again. To put it bluntly, my account is full of Bitcoins, and my personal assets may be more than your company's assets in the future. Why do you teach me how to do things? Why should I rely on you to make my girlfriend famous. So I feel that there is something completely wrong with Lin Yi's portrayal. You keep saying that girls should make their own decisions, but in the end, you lie to relatives, show photos to relatives, ask for a chance encounter, and fight with Gu's mother. This is not the rebirth of an adult at all. Besides, in your previous life, you were a key high school student in 1985, sleeping with two competition bosses. Do you really not know how important academic qualifications are? If I were the parent of a girl, everything would be easy after the college entrance examination. There is still one year left before the college entrance examination. If you interrupt my girl's study, you will not be able to do anything even if you are worth tens of billions. I have been divorced and have suffered setbacks in the opera industry. How can I still not know that what is in the handshake is the most stable? Furthermore, what is yours will always be yours. If my girl is as good as you say, then you have to wait for me. After the college entrance examination is over in a year, you can talk about her debut. Anyway, my girl is excellent. At least now you are just a pioneer instead of a winner. What if your company is gone in a year and you change from a pioneer to a pioneer? Will you not delay my daughter's life?

I recognize that the author's writing style is good, but the frequent "touching of noses" and "wry smiles" really come off! Also, I support Gu Changge who does not recognize the male protagonist emotionally. After all, it is not appropriate for high school students to fall in love, but!! I believe many people have watched Nirvana and Rekindling, right? The heroine's family background is better than that of the male protagonist; an elegant mother figure; blah, blah, blah... Really, after seeing this way of shaping too many times, I feel it's... How should I put it? It feels very awkward. It looked fine before, but now it's 2022! Why are there still characters with this template? The template of a poor boy falling in love with a rich princess is really starting from not only 1,000 but also 800. I am really tired of aesthetics. Also, the protagonist returns to his student days. Since his primary identity is a student, why can't he study hard? Why do you want to give me a feeling of being idle? To be honest, you can take your time with your career. I feel better if you arrange your career while you are in college? Personally, I feel that it is enough to have a small amount of wealth and be content with it. Before rebirth: loser; after rebirth: business giant. Hmm... I don't want to comment. The above are some of my personal complaints. After all, I am just a reader. I cannot look at the problem from the author's perspective, nor can I really teach the author to write a book. I am not that capable yet.

I really don't understand the author's 2 points: 1. Why do you insist on pushing your girlfriend to go to a small economic company and sign a contract that only earns 5% or even lower? 2. Why don't you introduce your girlfriend to your friends, at least to people at the company's vice president level, so that everyone around you will mistakenly think you are single, so that the women around you will misunderstand you.

Very well written, it would be better if it only has a single female protagonist

It's been six years and I haven't had sex yet. Do you think you are a monk? I want to ask. Her mother is like a lamp😅😅😅

The author's writing style is good, but the title of the book is wrong and the format is low. We are already in a big factory, so how can we be ordinary? What big impact will you have on this world after you are reborn? What promotion will you have? Let your girlfriend join the girl group with restrictions? Wouldn't it be better to invest in your own company and be the boss behind the scenes to support your girlfriend? In terms of career, I also went to the track where I wasted money and made connections twice in a row. I was also drunk. Where is the pattern? Contempt it.

How to put it, I feel that the word "self-promotion" is suitable for summarizing it. The male protagonist has returned to high school, and I can't see where he is more mature. It seems that a person who had no regrets in the first place traveled through time. The only regret? School beauty? Maybe, when I returned to high school, I took advantage of my own advantages and did two things. I gambled on football and bought coins. I didn't work hard at studying, and I didn't show much interest in the school belle. The entire high school period was boring and unexciting because of the lack of conflict. I don't know why I feel so self-confident after time travel. The capriciousness of fate and life. Logically speaking, the protagonist should know that as a time traveler, self-requirements and pursuits are too low. Forget it, it's pretty boring overall.

Is the author using rebirth as an irony? People's rebirth is to realize their dreams and create brilliance. Lin Yi's rebirth is to participate in witnessing Caiwei's entry into the entertainment industry. Caiwei was a relatively successful artist before her rebirth. What did Lin Yi's rebirth bring to Caiwei? It's the same old path, without any solid backing, just adding Lin Yi's feelings, so the author probably has some ideas in reality...

The campus is okay, but the business war is too bland, which may be related to the author's lack of workplace experience. The business war is well written about the rebirth at the turn of the century, and the memory war is thrillingly written.