I Changed My Qi Number in the Red Mansion

The plot is generally good, but can you please stop trying to save a beautiful woman when you see her? Lin Daiyu stopped talking. It would be okay to get closer. Qin Keqing was very friendly with Qin Keqing from the very beginning, not to mention that she had many secrets about her life experience. She secretly rescued people and made them her underground lover? Moreover, the friendship has not reached this level. The first thing to say is, "This life is yours." If it's up to you, would you commit yourself to him so quickly? Isn't it okay to treat Wang Xifeng from the beginning to the end?

Romantic affair tsk tsk tsk

I can't bear it😃

The basic context and logic of the author's writing are there, and the level is still above average. The problem is that in the early stage, becoming a third-grade official is too jumpy. Later, a person with such a high official position has to take care of small things, which makes people feel disconnected. In fact, it is better to talk about switching to a fifth-grade real job at the beginning, so that the things he does later can be explained. The fifth-grade real job is not low, and it is a bit respectable outside, but in the Jia family, it is not enough to be a housekeeper.

I worked all the way to Chapter 213, and overall it was pretty good. The plot of the Jianghu part is quite well written, but I suggest you not write it later... I feel like the author got too excited about the part about the Salt Gang. The style of painting is distorted into martial arts... He is a member of the Salt Gang. First, he looks down on the powerful third-level officials (what level are you). Later, when he meets with the protagonist, he uses swords and guns, and humiliates him to test the protagonist. It's okay that the protagonist is a white body. The protagonist is a twenty-year-old third-grade manfutai, the legitimate son of the Duke of the country, and the emperor's confidant. He has just secured the Zhen family and eight major salt merchants in the south of the Yangtze River, and it is suspected that he has the full support of the Cao Gang. How dare you, a gang selling smuggled salt (even the largest one), dare to threaten the protagonist? I was puzzled... Which of the above-mentioned forces can your Salt Gang afford to offend? The most outrageous thing is that there is no information gap, the Salt Gang knows everything about the protagonist. Even if the leader of the Salt Gang doesn't want his daughter to marry the protagonist as his concubine, he won't commit suicide like this... On the one hand, he doesn't want his daughter to marry the protagonist as his concubine, but at the same time, he's sure that the protagonist cares that his daughter won't be serious with the Salt Gang?

The protagonist has a very strong hero complex. It's not just about getting rich. It can also open up official circles. There are also distinguished friends. I also want to learn martial arts and fight. It seems that he is going to be the emperor. If you become emperor. There are three palaces and six courtyards. Looking forward to seeing the golden hairpin sealing the Sixth Palace.

The writing is okay, but can there be less modern things? Sometimes I sing songs by the Huaer Band, and sometimes I sing Canghai Yixiao. It embarrasses me to death.

Every time I see the protagonist traveling through ancient times, drinking is like drinking water. I feel speechless even if I don't get drunk after a thousand cups! Not to mention that even if the alcohol content in ancient times was really low, the protagonist's clothes wouldn't matter. But it would be too much for the soul to travel through a thousand cups without getting drunk, right? The liver also travels through time together? You still dislike ancient drinks. Have you never tried farm-brewed rice wine? Even a good drinker can make you drunk without realizing it, and the stamina is huge

If you want to read pornographic articles, don't come here, they definitely won't be available. If you want to see something mindless and fun, don't come and don't waste your time. What do you want to see? I have accepted Jia Mu, Mrs. Wang, Aunt Xue, etc. No need to come, I can't write. This is a novel about Red Mansions that I bring to my life. There are not many slaps in the face, and I don't like to kill people. The protagonist, who comes from a noble family, enjoys and plans at the same time, step by step to reach the peak of life, that's all.

Introduction: Persuading people to quit, what is the connection between having a harem in feudal society and brainless cool writing? The article about an impotent eunuch is still so high-sounding. How can a feudal cannibalistic society not kill anyone and decisively play house with you?

My writing is a world created with my hard work. Here, there is everything we want but don't have in reality. In addition to the so-called "coolness", there must be pure love, a kind heart, and a beautiful girl that you can't even dream of. When you and I are tired in reality, come to this world and take a rest. We are just tired souls that need to be nourished by pure love and hate, not just various desires and greed. When one is rich in soul, one will not belittle oneself, treat oneself as a loser, or kneel down to the so-called superiors. We are all independent, upright people who rely on our own ability to make a living and live a strong life is a kind of pride. There is no need to look for the "diaosi protagonist" even when reading online articles, otherwise you will feel that you can't find a sense of involvement. As long as you stand straight and have a kind heart, you definitely deserve better. You know.

If you can survive the first chapter, you won't be poisoned later on, because I think the first chapter is very poisonous. Jia Lian just vented his anger on the boy (just like you think of, fencing). If you are not a person with high poison resistance or a special group, you will probably be poisoned to death. You have to write this kind of plot to purify readers. The author's words of warning to readers at the beginning of the first chapter are not deceptive. They are indeed true and are not a cool article. Anyway, I slipped away.

The plot of rescuing Qin Keqing is really poisonous. Even if he died according to the original work, he would still be better than you. I have never seen Qin Keqing want to save others out of the blue. The pretentious foreshadowing is plain to say that he peeps every day. In the end, he saves people with just a few words. Good guy, he came and left in a hurry. This plot can be said to be completely poisonous.

Writing an article for the first time also opened up another kind of life. I used to think that it would be a happy thing to be able to devote myself to writing articles, but when things came to a close, I realized that I still loved to dream too much. Which thing in reality is not embarrassing? It's just that all others see is the bright side. I feel anxious because I don't know if the story I wrote will be recognized by others, and I don't know if the world I built and the characters in it will be liked. But no matter what, write with all your heart, work hard to be yourself, and you will meet people who are on the same journey.

After reading it, it is indeed not a cool novel, but with such a big plug-in, even Fengyue Baojing, a smart assistant, has been taken as a servant by the protagonist, just like driving Wushuang to mow the grass. There is no reason why it is not a cool novel, unless the protagonist is given intelligence to offset the effect of the plug-in. After reading a few more chapters, I really gained some wisdom. Daiyu fell ill due to evil spells, so she directly told Lin Ruhai that she had traveled all over the country to learn secret techniques from strangers, and it would be enough to help him find out if Feng Shui could cure Lin Daiyu. As long as you have real skills, who will know how you got your skills? This will not only increase your own qualifications, but also gain favors. It's a very simple thing, but the protagonist just has to hide her head and tail. She even digs through the garden in the middle of the night. After digging through the yard, she doesn't tell Lin Ruhai that she can find the root cause of Daiyu's disease. She is so worried about this and that.

I finished reading it in one go, and I feel that overall it is a very good Red Mansions novel. The one minor point that makes me uncomfortable is that the protagonist treats Wang Xifeng too much, like letting the donkey go and making loan sharks. How can he get over it with just a few words and then use his reputation to harm others for profit? Wang Xifeng has not turned around at all, and is colluding with Mrs. Wang. This is really a bit cowardly.

Personality guarantee, there is absolutely no "bad description", but it was suddenly blocked. Some people said it was reported. I feel bad. I revise each chapter several times, and finally check carefully that there are no typos, because I am afraid that readers will feel "bitter" after reading my book. The words I wrote with my hard work are used by you as a needle to stab me in the back. I feel really bad, so I just said a few words.

Change all the dissatisfied people in Ning Rong's second house to bad luck and then die in various accidents, and then the protagonist can put all those beauties into the room 😃

Do me a favor and order Wang Xifeng. I want Wang Xifeng to be the first heroine. I order it every day, but I can't compare to Qin Keqing and Sister Lin.

I read it every fifty chapters, but it was too watery to read. The author is forever dragging his feet to make up the word count. The same plot is written chapter after chapter, forever in the water. Lots of copy-pasting of the same description. Wang Xifeng couldn't clean up more than three hundred chapters, it was extremely hypocritical.

Is there a secret rift between Jia She and Mrs. Wang? ? ? Is Baoyu actually the product of the affair between Jia She and Mrs. Wang? ? ? Is that why Mrs. Wang wanted Jia Baoyu to seize the title of Rong Guofu? ? Perhaps Mrs. Wang originally wanted to marry Jia She, but Jia Lian's mother took the lead, so she had no choice but to marry Jia Zheng. Later, she killed Lian's mother and hooked up with Jia She and gave birth to Jia Baoyu. It seems that this is the right answer.

Some friends reported that the protagonist felt aggrieved at the beginning, so I would like to explain it specifically. The protagonist's identity in this book is that of a junior, and the original owner is someone who can be stepped on by everyone. Let me introduce it to you. If it were you, would you start fighting on all sides like two idiots fighting a chicken? If you know that your future will definitely be good and you have the ability to make progress step by step, do you care about others' temporary suppression of you? In your eyes, aren't those who dominate you just clowns? You are watching their last performance, and you are so frustrated. I think that to live in this world, one must have a kind of self-confidence. As a time traveler, dimensionality reduction strikes are indeed fun, but is it only about force? Do you have the ability to psychologically reduce dimensionality? Also, don't tell me that the protagonist is a coward if he doesn't hit or kill people. The protagonist's viciousness is much higher than your rank. A smart ruthless person never gets blood on his hands (readers who have spent real money have seen this). This is the protagonist's confidence. Don't tell me anymore about why the protagonist doesn't go to war. A certain novel is about fighting. I will give a formal and unified answer: Do you really think that all Red Mansions novels should be the same routine? Then just go back and read that article. You don't need to compare fish and birds to see why one can't fly and the other can't dive. This is unfair to both birds and fish.

A friend said, "I don't want eunuchs." I understand. I'm not a eunuch. To thank my friends who support me, I will continue to write for you. Each chapter is a sincere blessing from me to the friends who support me. Those who haven't seen it are their losers. I won't stop writing just because they don't come.

I said firmly that I would rather write slowly than fill my head with water. The consequences of floods are serious!

The protagonist is really a smiling King of Hell. I have seen him beat Lai Da to death a lot, but I have never seen him so vicious.

The author's writing is sophisticated and the characters are well created. The title, the cover, and the introduction made me think it was a mindless piece of writing. I came across it four times before I clicked on it. The author is extremely talented, I almost missed it because of the appearance of the book😘

It's getting better and better. It's better to go slower. The level of writing is much higher than that of some other novices in Red Mansions. I didn't realize it before. I support the author to write the plot slowly, but occasionally the number of chapters breaks out and it's not enough.

Don't be a eunuch. I think this book still has good potential. It just doesn't have many chapters. The author should go get more recommendations from other authors.

Xue Baochai, the God of Face, why did the author think that you have taken all the bamboo shoots?

It's so well written that I stayed up all night reading it.