Da Yuan Zhen Demon

It's too poisonous. I don't object to you imitating other people's works. At least imitate some of their advantages and incorporate other realities into it. What about foreigners, longevity pills, firearms, and steam engines? It's too poisonous. I'll give up the book decisively.

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The protagonist is a virgin bitch. When someone tries to kill the protagonist, the protagonist won't fight back. If you want to see it, you can try it.

It's a garbage novel. In the beginning, the martial sage determines the fate of the country. In less than 200 chapters, the martial sage is inferior to a dog. There are as many immortals as dogs. There is no protagonist. Demons crush humans. 1 From the first chapter until the protagonist is promoted to human immortal, the sixth realm is the opening of heaven, that is, human immortal. When the protagonist is promoted to human immortal, the sixth realm is the beginning of opening of heaven, and the seventh realm is the completion of opening of heaven. The logic is inconsistent. 2 The foreshadowing of dozens of immortals sacrificing themselves to seal the Devil Sea is a complete joke. Even if dozens of immortals are in the seventh realm, how can they be qualified to seal the ability of an emperor above the eighth realm. 3 Demons casually dispatch hundreds of martial saints 4 In the early stage, because of the suppression of the protagonist who broke the rankings and died, there was no breakthrough in dozens of chapters. I kept telling you that I just suppressed the protagonist, and the subsequent breakthroughs of the protagonist were like riding on a rocket, and there was no need. Consolidate the realm Break through with 5 skills. Save enough skill points and keep them for use. Every time you can't beat, break through quickly After practicing martial arts for less than two years, you have become the pinnacle of the world. All kinds of extraterrestrial visitors and time-travelers are emerging one after another, and there are also all kinds of worlds.

I hate writing about guns and the like in fantasy martial arts novels

When I saw a chapter called "Please reincarnate in China in the next life", I knew this was not the book I was looking for 😓

The Holy Mother of Emotions, I went to a martial arts school and spent money to learn martial arts. After learning martial arts for a few days, I developed a very strong relationship with the martial arts school. Pig's Feet said that once a teacher is always a father! ? ? ? ? Did you learn it for free? Or did he teach you because he saw you as pitiful and pitiful? Or maybe he taught you about his deep feelings for you?

Choosing this Yuan Dynasty book is not flattering, and most people will run away after seeing the title of the book.

How can I put it this way? It's a stupid start and a bloody plot!

The ground is extremely poisonous, and there are peerless beauties everywhere. The protagonist gets into trouble for all kinds of beauties. He jumps up and down, slightly raises the corners of his mouth, and smiles disdainfully. Oh my God, please don't label yourself as Ji Do-ryu. You are disgusting... You are decisive in killing and never touch corpses...

Damn it, this book is well written, it's not an exaggeration to call it fairy grass, but it's a pity that it was buried like this... I estimate that 90% of the people retreated in the first ten chapters.

Let's not talk about writing skills. If the country's title is Yuan, we will persuade them to quit.

It's not necessary. You have only read a few chapters. In fact, if you insist on reading dozens of chapters, you will realize that you have read a lot of bullshit.

Why is it called Dayuan? Reminiscent of Yuan Meng, extremely uncomfortable.

Is there a female protagonist in Yakuza? Note that I asked about the female protagonist. It's not like having a harem stud or anything like that, the eunuch came in and sprayed it first to see clearly. And whether the body needs to get bigger or something. I see that many Yakuza are like this, and basically no one is normal. Really speechless

What do book friends who have read this book think? Is the writing good and logically rigorous? Are there any inconsistencies or settings? If so, I won't read it, for fear of being offended.

After reading it, I feel that the author is limiting the protagonist. How should I put it? As a time traveler, although he is a programmer, but even if he has read few books and has never read the stories of the imagination, he should have logical thinking, otherwise how to be a programmer. His plug-in has several points, one is improvement and the other is breakthrough. Also, he wrote about martial arts and martial arts, but in fact martial arts is the first section of the first level of martial arts, the blood training level. He also wrote that martial arts skills can be improved. Also, he also wrote that many exercises were created by people, such as Xiaoyaoyou. Therefore, he also knows where to place skill points. Therefore, as long as the skill points are enough, the Four Seas Boxing Technique can be improved to be more powerful than the Six Paths. Also, as long as I am fast enough and have a long range, I can kite others. As long as I have enough defense, I can be invulnerable even while standing. He wears an iron cloth shirt and a golden bell, and he has not practiced archery. In one sentence, the protagonist is forcibly reduced to intelligence.

It's mirroring reality again, can't the extraordinary world do it? There is no way to see whether the circle will come back or not. If guns and cannons are more powerful than extraordinary, then the world should be ruled by ordinary people. The population base of ordinary people is larger than that of extraordinary people. Guns and artillery cannot defeat extraordinary people, so how can foreign countries invade? Unless one party's top transcendent overpowers the other. I really dislike the cultivation articles that reflect the late Qing Dynasty. Many authors can't round up the logical loopholes and are too unreasonable.

The plot is pieced together from here and there, the author has gone too far, and the whole logic has collapsed. It even writes about a sand sculpture of a virgin protagonist who is born to be a slave. She can't stand up after kneeling for a long time in a world that is beyond the power of force. She also has to follow the emperor's court. The plug-in is so awesome, you can just kill them indiscriminately, kill them for two or three years, and you will be invincible in the world. And the most disgusting thing is that someone else came to kill him, but he let him go when he could have killed him. It was so speechless, even worse than Long Aotian and others.

I wasted my time reading so much. First of all, I just added some points to the system to improve my strength. I also kept adding some private stuff in the book. If I want to be scientific, I should just write a scientific article. Why should I write about fantasy and immortality? All kinds of disgusting settings are also a cancer. I suggest brothers who want to watch fantasy, supernatural or spiritual cultivation not to watch it, it will really poison you to death.

The title of the book is so awesome that it looks like a rotten watermelon.

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This is another eunuch book. Just like the last one, I can't finish writing. I'm going to start a new book. The author of eunuch

Coming, coming 😰

A poor man with a little knowledge of fists and feet plagiarized the Great Sage of Bones

One thing to say is that the author's writing skills are a bit poor, and even the simplest words and sentences are poorly written. I only read Chapter 60, and I found a lot of ambiguous sentences and typos, which the author did not correct at all. Moreover, the author's narrative logic is so inconsistent that it is completely blunt and explosive. In general, this book is not as good as that of middle school students in terms of typos in ambiguous sentences. At least junior high school students can understand how to make up subject, predicate, object and tense.

It's so different. I don't have any thoughts from a normal person. I couldn't stand it after two chapters.

Look no further. There are a lot of typos, I can't bear it in one chapter, it's too many

I don't want to read it when I see something about smoking. It's not about historical fiction or urban fantasy. Why are you writing this? You're writing a fantasy novel about killing monsters from the Yakuza style.

The front is fine, except for the main character Madonna Bitch, but the main character in the back is really a loser. He has skill points but doesn't use them. He's worried about conspiracy. He dawdles but doesn't upgrade. He just has to complete the bet to upgrade. Trillions of skill points are reluctant to use, and it's not fun at all.