I Master the Eight Secret Techniques, But I'm No Half-Breed

I've looked at the previous chapters and would like to offer the author a suggestion. From what I've seen so far, some parts are poorly written. For example, the protagonist already has a nascent idea in mind: [developing superhumans to counterbalance hybrids]. This isn't a small matter; in the author's vision, it should be a large part of the main plot.

By the way, killing the protagonist with an A-rank ranged incantation and a speed-boosting hybrid is like killing a dog; the Eight Extraordinary Techniques are too weak for hybrids, let alone dragons.

The eight cheat codes are too overpowered. Even if you master all eight extraordinary skills, you'll still get utterly crushed by the Dragon King!

If the Eight Extraordinary Techniques are used well, it will take five years to defeat the Dragon Clan. They secretly developed using the Great Luo Cave Observation and the Heavenly Record, without being discovered. Feng Hou Qi Men allows the user to establish a central palace beneath their feet and freely manipulate the four plates within the Qi Men chart.

I've only read up to chapter ten. I have a question: could the author develop a complete system for each character, instead of just focusing on a few unique skills? While nuclear weapons are undoubtedly the most powerful weapons humanity possesses, isn't the essence of human civilization found in its entire industrial system and intellectual culture? Having the right principles but lacking the skills can still be acquired; having skills but lacking the right principles limits one to mere skills.

The Tongtianlu is the ultimate talisman and has absolutely nothing to do with painting. While the Divine Machine Refinement is related to technology, its core is actually the Mo Family's puppet Lu Ban technique. Feng Hou Qi Men is the ultimate mystery of Qi Men Dun Jia. Fortune telling is only one aspect of it. Its main purpose is the "mountain" in "mountain destiny, medicine, physiognomy, and divination," which is the art.

Of course, it's about connecting with military organizations; the government is the biggest power. The protagonist can provide a simplified version of the Dual-Hand Technique (rapid healing + lie detection) and Qi Refining Method, which is very suitable for the military and police departments, and he can strive to become an instructor of the Imperial Guard. Isn't this much better than being a thug at a school in Kassel?

As the synopsis states, there are numerous original and secondary settings. In addition, the author likes to use overused tropes indiscriminately, and due to a lack of experience, the writing style is not detailed enough, resulting in numerous bugs. However, the logic is generally sound, so it's okay to pass the time. It can be considered as provisions

I suggest the author set these two "illusionary" scenes in *Under One Person* as "real-life scenes without suppression." Otherwise, the power gap is too large. 😂

I'm leaving. The character designs don't match the original work at all, and that group chat was just ridiculous. It had EVA characters like Old Tang, Lu Mingfei, Caesar, Chu Zihang, Shu De, and Mai all in it, without any explanation. I'm really speechless.