Tomb Robbers: the Storyteller Cat, the Partridge Whistle Meets

I can't stand it lately. I don't know why. The character set up by the author feels so contradictory. In front of outsiders, he controls everything, but when he ends up, he is speechless. I don't know if it's just me.

Okay, now I have the desire to continue reading😀

Storytelling like this, which directly identifies the blessings and misfortunes of the world, is still interesting. Once you go to rob a tomb yourself, your level suddenly drops down. From a worldly master, you become a tomb robber. No matter how nice it sounds, tomb robbers are just a group of thieves.

Did the author take notes? They actually said that the four groups of tomb robbers separated from each other in search of Muchen Bead.

The writing is a bit messy, it feels like there is no main line, just a hammer in one place and a stick in the other.

There are many problems, but I can barely read it. The main problem is that the writing style is a bit awkward. It is recommended not to write in a literate manner. It is really not suitable for you to write like this. It is so awkward. Just write in vernacular. There are also plot characters that set off the protagonist. The writing makes people feel that the protagonist has brought a group of tool people who only call 666. The characters are too facial and have no characteristics at all.

Yao Zhi: How can a rescued person who is a maid's assistant talk so much, and he is no different from his master? Even if the male protagonist is kind and doesn't treat her as an outsider, he should have some sense of control. It was the same before. Yin Xinyue is the eldest lady and the boss. Why is she being so weird and irritating to others? After all, it was Yin Xinyue who gave the male protagonist a place to eat and read stories before, which is equivalent to giving it to her, right? She still relies on the male lead for support! He also said that in order not to be held back, he had to be self-taught. In those days, how could he become a talented person without a master to teach him? How could he go out to buy books? Who sells it? This is the rice bowl for people to eat, something passed down to their descendants, right?

Selling dog meat for sale! It's just a story in the first few chapters, but I don't know where the bullshit went in the back.

[One ghost, two heroes and three scouts for stars, four gods and three demons cannot be understood, the southern Buddha and the northern dumb seal the jade gate, seven unique and eight monsters defeat the leading star, nine tigers and ten dragons, only one unique celestial silkworm can know the prosperity of the world! One ghost: Su Fan Two ghosts: Chen Yulou, Partridge Whistle Three scouts: Bai Zhanyi, Feitian Suanni, Jin Abacus Four gods: Cui Laodao, Guo Deyou, Liu Hengshun, Kou Zhanlong Three Demons: Lian Huaqing, Li Zilong, Fei Tong Southern Buddha: Zhang Qishan Northern Dumb: Zhang Qiling Qijue: Sun Xiaoshier, Silly Young Master, Jin Mazi, Du Dabiao, Silly Ye, Chen Scar, Blind Eye, Zhang Xiazi Eight Monsters: Bai Sihu, Li Dazui, Yang Zhetian, Thirteen Swordsmen, Huang Zhian, Mao Yanyu, Hua Gouxiong, Stone Widow Nine Tigers and Ten Dragons: Qin Hu, Qin Long The extended ranking list starting from the fourth volume, the settings will be added one after another in the future, guests who find it interesting can take a look, don't comment if you don't like it~

When I saw the golden fortune teller being captured, my face hurt when I smiled. How about I just turn into a fairy? If you have the ability to teleport the Corpse King directly out of the tomb, hahahahaha, many people say withdraw, but I think it's quite interesting. It's still a joke if you pretend to be exaggerated.

If the gods don't cultivate themselves, they come here to rob tombs. It's really yours.

So cool! The four tomb robbers are part of the Banshan sect who came out to look for Muchen Bead. This setting was created by the author himself. It seems that the author has not read the original work.

Why do you have to tell a book? What the hell is a thief cat... I'm going to see what the author is writing about... I'll come back later

There are so many scenes involving a rescued homeless girl, she must be too scheming. . . The author really treats the rescued homeless girl as a "girl". .

Every time I see the protagonist doing whatever he is doing in person, and he is so annoyed, I always get angry 😥

It's so disgusting. The storyteller went to rob tombs and couldn't figure out his main business.

The story you wrote may have had high-speed rail during the Republic of China🚄 Otherwise, Marshal Luo's soldiers would have gone back and forth to Peiping in one day. There are a lot of pitfalls in the details. The pitfalls started when they saw the Divine Calculation Hall.

If you want to write about cultivating immortals, why don't you just change the topic? A good job of tomb robbing will increase your combat power to such an extent. The protagonist is really the savior, and everything else is just soy sauce.

People here can teleport. During the Republic of China, they traveled from Western Hunan to Beijing in one day, then returned to Western Hunan immediately, and then came to Beijing from Western Hunan the next day. There is no logic at all, and it is impossible to be immersed in it. It was too embarrassing to pretend to be 13. Guns were being fired outside, but I didn't even wake up. I even hit someone with an apple and it shattered all over the floor. Apples were so rare at that time. Also, the shape of the medicine finger is very annoying.

The first few pictures were quite amazing, but when I started to talk about the magic operator and laid it out according to the system requirements, the character suddenly dropped very low. Then I looked at the catalog and went to rob the tomb, and it was still the kind of personal end. The character and character created at the beginning completely fell to the ground.

Tomb robbing novels belong to the suspense and adventure genre, and the highlight is the weird human nature and strange events during the tomb robbing process. Therefore, the author always draws blood or magic, and it's okay to show off, but all the way through, the "suspiciousness" is gone, the "danger" is gone, and there is only one protagonist left who is showing off, which is not interesting at all.

There is a reason why this book is not popular. In the beginning, it was a storyteller, but by the 20th or 30th chapter, it turned into cultivating immortals. You show yourself to various people and show off your magic. You are really not afraid of the officials arresting you, right? Don't like it very much

Good to watch, preferably with a single female protagonist and less emotional drama

It starts with a vase, a lot of emotional drama, and then goes to the grave. The vase cannot be taken away, and if it is left at home and people are watching it, it will be a lot of trouble.

After reading more than twenty chapters, I didn't want to read anymore. I might as well stop being a storyteller and perform acrobatics instead. Directly advise him to quit. He has already tested the poison, so there is no need to look at it.

I've been able to fight against the law when it comes to writing fantasy, it's really possible. It was even published in the newspaper. I don't know what the author thought. Comparatively, it was Japanese territory at that time.

The writing is too dramatic and embarrassing.

Good book, very interesting, support the author, cheers for the author

More diligent, who doesn't like a well-written book 😏 But sometimes the transitions are a bit messy (just saying, the author does not need to affect his own rhythm) Then, can the 6 votes be changed to a more refined one 😏

I cast two votes, don't be a eunuch