Eerie Revival: I Can See the Script of People’s Lives

Author, take a look

It's relatively good-looking, but it's too long-winded and deliberately cluttered with numbers. I often have to jump to read it, which is unbearable.

Author: I saw that part of the live broadcast, and I have to say that the number of words is too short, and I actually wrote several pages about the memories of a ghost. I hope the author can close the memories part. Of course, the plot and writing are still good.

The plot is good, but it's too slow. It took 100 chapters to complete a script. It's conservatively estimated that this script will take at least 30 chapters to complete. It's so awesome.

The scene where a windfall is inserted into the widow is simply incomprehensible. I had a premonition of danger. On one side is the widow of a two-star script who has already appeared a wandering soul, and on the other is a windfall who still doesn't know the situation. The protagonist actually chooses to go to the widow's side. I can't understand at all why he doesn't let his teammates go and then stays by himself.

Look at you Xia Li quietly!

When the author can condense the story behind each supporting character from several chapters and tens of thousands of words to two or three hundred words, the author will be a platinum star just around the corner.

Alas, there are 65 chapters without reaching the climax of the plot. It is too slow to drag on like this. Every one or two chapters are just memories and introductions. It feels like you have not watched it before, and the interest is slowly worn away. I'd better keep it first. If you raise it more, you can always watch the climax of the plot.

The horror part is good, but I really don't want to watch the recent youthful campus love memories... Can you explain it in a few words, and there are too many live broadcasts and it's a bit watery...

I'm halfway through reading it, and I'd like to mention my feelings. First, it's best to write less moral plots. There can be some, but not too many. This can easily make the book hijacked by morality. Let's talk about why the protagonist doesn't hand over his skills to the country. The country can create a group of super masters and save more people. But if this is the case, the book will not be able to be written, and the protagonist will have no advantage. The second is to control the protagonist's ability. If this book is going to take the horror route, if the protagonist is too strong, the horror elements will be diluted. Refer to Hong Kong horror movies. If you want to take the invincible route, make the protagonist stronger, have more supporting characters around you, and start the Mowing Warriors mode. Everyone can enjoy watching it without having to worry about it. In addition, can you add some tricks to this life script cheat? For example, you can open a copy of historical events through super 5-star items, retrieve the truth of the past step by step, and obtain the skills of immortals and Buddhas to pass on to the world.