
There's Something Wrong with This Villain's Script
这个反派的剧本有问题
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 864k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Otherworld Continent
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I have read several books on this subject, and it seemed fresh at first, but then it all fell apart.
Hi hi! Author, here I come! I advise you: A wise man will never fall in love, and an unjust person will repeat the same mistakes. A widowed king will gain a lot of knowledge and build a beautiful motherland.
Can I ask a question, how did Pigfoot become a villain in the life before he traveled through time? He was a useless person with no spiritual roots. He would have died for no reason. He actually needed the male and female protagonist from the previous life to work together to defeat him. This is illogical. Aren't villains always geniuses? Why did he become a cripple with no spiritual roots in your novel?
Let's talk about whether there are real villains and villains during the plot, who are free from the plot and let the birds fly. This kind of people who only follow the trend have no meaning at all.
This is not a villain, just a puppet
It's really unreasonable. What the hell did you write to make Luo Qiange seem invincible?
I just read the introduction and saw two sick sentences in the middle part I feel pain for the third senior sister. This was written by a machine, right?
How should I put it? It feels like the future protagonist will give his past self some benefits after transcending.
A book that treats people as fools, and the main character is a eunuch
I have just read Chapter 74, and my combat power has collapsed. In the early stage of foundation building, I have unleashed the golden elixir's combat power. Even if it only has the power of one blow, the magic spirit root can absorb the spiritual energy of heaven and earth without limit and restore it. It can also fight against the weakest Nascent Soul in a short time. In the later stage of foundation building, it is different from the golden elixir in the early stage. There is at least a difference of more than 10 times between the early stage of the Golden Elixir and the early stage of the Nascent Soul. The difference between the early stage of the Foundation Establishment and the early stage of the Nascent Soul is at least a hundred times different. If there are treasures, it is still possible. How can I defeat them on my own? If my physique (essence) is not good, my spiritual power (Qi) The quality is not good, even if the spiritual power is infinite, the output is comparable, and the spiritual power (god) is even more incomparable. The protagonist has only practiced magical power for more than a month, just like three senior sisters who were casually broken by Nascent Soul. No matter how powerful Luo Qiange is, There is no need to be afraid, the master is so doting that his strength is close to the top. He just flipped the table and ruined her reputation. He knew clearly that someone was planning to do it, but he had to wait until his relatives were harmed or caused himself many uncomfortable and various troubles before taking action, which directly messed up the plan.
Can you come up with something new? It's all the same routine.
In fact, just think of the protagonist as someone hired by Tiandao to serve as the cornerstone of the protagonist's growth.
Uncle Emperor
The subject matter is quite fresh, but the degree of control is not good, the logic is too strange, the characters are thin, and it is embarrassing to watch. Didn't you set it up in advance?
I can't say it's not good to watch, I can only say that the whole novel is rubbish, and the writing was very messy from the beginning.
What is the person who writes this book? The data seems a bit bad, and I'm a little afraid to look at it. After all, the results are so bad, and I'm afraid that the author will suddenly become a eunuch. But the writing is still quite interesting. The only thing I'm afraid of now is the sudden eunuch.
Why are there more than 100 monthly tickets?
Six people. How to get recommended
Seeing the pity and accepting it as a personal biography? ? ? ? ? ? ?
You don't have any parents, you like to use aliases to attract traffic?
The writing is not good and the plot is not good. The male protagonist is also not likable. The guy with a sharp tongue and a bitchy mouth is mainly likable.
In the second chapter, it was discovered that there was something wrong with the male protagonist's character. His master and senior sister gave him power, status and material things. As a result, the protagonist thought that it was his master and senior sister's fault that he was ridiculed by his classmates, and what he had given him was pain. Mr. Dongguo and Wolf, you feel pain and go down the mountain, and no one will kill you. You are enjoying the rights they give you while cursing them for all the pain they give you. What's the difference between you and the green tea and white lotus women in those female pornographic novels?