Tokyo Criminal: Inspector Glory

When writing about Japan, your language habits should be as Japanese and colloquial as possible. If you just give me a sentence, you are like a bastard. I thought the Beijing film police had a part-time job in tourism.

I feel like I can't stand it anymore when I see the negotiation. God made you a negotiator on the first day you join the company. Don't write a book if you don't have the brain.

I have a question, do two people dare to chase down the gunman who killed the police? Let alone separate the operation, let the gangster be singled out, and finally kill the gangster with the halo of the protagonist. Is this the feedback the protagonist received from 60 years + 30 years of police experience? And forget it because the protagonist is too reckless, the key is that the book does not think this behavior is wrong 😓.

Author, you can write this kind of professional article if the writing is not good, the plot is not good, the characters are not good, but the logical background cannot be flawed. If the logical background of the professional article cannot be self-consistent, it will be very dramatic.

Personal hopes: 1. I hope not to create any superpowers 2. I hope not to describe too many love scenes, mainly don't use these casual words 3. Don't always use acquaintances around the protagonist to lead out cases or cause accidents And personal suggestions (just a few suggestions): 1. It is best not to continuously appear controversial cases, such as this statute of limitations case, and the internal police cases that will be released later, you can insert one or two general cases in between. , Classic case 2. The rewards given by the system are too targeted, and it seems that the system leads the protagonist to go, which is too deliberate. It is better to insert a few common cases in the middle to accumulate the ability to use 3. Daily life can also be described, such as a person's dinner, moving, going home to meet parents, etc. In short, it is recommended to have some daily routines to shape the protagonist, rather than a single image of jealousy and hatred in the case That's it for the time being, I still hope to finish it well.

I don't know why this book looked a bit strange to me, it felt like it was fragmented. One moment I felt that the main character was very powerful and awesome, and the other moment he seemed like useless trash. It just felt weird. I don't know if it was the author's writing style or something else. I didn't feel this way when watching Los Angeles Detective with similar themes.

It is said that the protagonist is invincible in the police academy and has experience in his previous life, but he cannot defeat a 1.6-Meter dwarf...

Writing about being a police officer in Japan is unacceptable. It is greedy, possessive and shady. Bring good news to the Japanese people. Are you right? Author

The main character is a bit poorly written and has a system, making it uncomfortable to watch.

It's okay, I can watch it. I generally don't read system articles, but it's very difficult to find one of the same type. At present, the system's existence is not high and it's acceptable. What I'm most worried about right now is that I'll cut it off, or maybe I'll suddenly start writing romantic drama instead of pushing the plot.

The most important thing in criminal investigation novels is logic. The beginning of your sentence was outrageous, and the whole police department was blinded. Oh, you had to go up for a debate, and you were bullied even if you didn't go up? It's outrageous. We really can't bring Hino together. This is the weakest and most miserable way to break the game. It's so funny, if he dares to cheat you, then you should cheat him instead. Why, you're trying to trick him. Passively suffering injuries like a fool? That's outrageous. Who doesn't know how to trick people, especially when they know who is harming you through cheating, and they are as stupid as a pig?

Are there plots in Japanese dramas such as Fukada Kyoko's "The Rich Man" and Ishihara Satomi's "Unnatural Death"? If not, I hope you can consider adding it.

There is a problem, the context and the title are not like Japan at all.

The plot is still good, come on, please update more.

Are you a eunuch? If the update is interrupted for more than 7 days, please give me a kick and delete this book from the bookshelf.

There is a golden finger, and the treatment is very frustrating. It is better to write without it, forget it, and slip away.

It looks uncomfortable, the writing is not pleasing, so I ran away

Everything is superficial and cannot be thought of! ! !

The logic cannot be consistent with itself, so please retreat. Inexplicably, even when my husband went to a convenience store to make emergency calls, he was ignored by the investigating police.

I watched half of the second case and there were too many flaws. Case 1: After smashing your knee, are you still afraid that he can run away? Still want to fight to the death? In the second case, the bones were scratched. Did you chop the pig bones? You may not be able to break a bone with a knife. When planting a green belt, you need to dig a pit of at least half a meter. Should you bury the body first or plant the green belt first? Bury the body first. How deep should you dig so that it won't be discovered and can be washed out by rain? Will the green belt that was planted first be replanted in two hours? In addition, it has been rainy for 15 years, and the bones will probably be reduced to slag. How about DNA?

The monthly vote has been cast, please update more😏

The author has seen that there are trees in the south

I actually think it's okay, but this update is too outrageous to be updated every 4 days. I endured it for half a month before updating 4 times.

Although I haven't read it, it should be written very well. I feel that if I join the Conan world, it would be better to write this kind of original plot (✪▽✪)

I feel really sick looking at the chapter names in the table of contents!

Guys, does Qidian have a function to block authors?

I haven't read it yet, but I was attracted by the introduction. I just want to ask if the Japanese police still care about animal killings 🤔 Dog killings in foggy days