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This introduction is too awkward, please change it! Modern parallel space, hey! He looks like a native from another world who has never seen the world😓

Such a good Qingmei will not despise you even when you are at your lowest. If you abandon me, will you still be a human 😁😁😁

The plot about Wen Chao Gong was really exciting, but the emotional plot was really boring. I kept skipping to watch it. Even if there was no plot about Wen Chao Gong in the catalogue, I didn't want to watch it.

Many of the protagonists who write online articles are orphans. It's not that they don't want to write, but they simply can't grasp the emotional scenes. They have no sense of empathy and it's quite embarrassing to watch. Many of them are written in one stroke or are orphans. These authors are very self-aware and I admire them very much.

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I came here for an online novel, but after dozens of chapters it was all about music. There were too many entertainment articles and I was tired of reading them. The emotional lines were a mess and slipped away.

This book was ruined by the author. It started very well. After finishing the first one, I continued with Dafeng. I continued with Zhe Tian and continued with Perfect. I continued with Lord of Mysteries. Just because of this, the results won't be too bad. I just want to write casually. I have to do music and love. Nowadays, it's a batch of rubbish.

The pace can be slower. Your last film, Fortune Gathering Formation, was quite enjoyable in the early stage, and it was okay in the mid-term, but it was a big hang-up in the later stage. Pulled

Withdrew, withdrew, I didn't want to look at Zhou Xiaxia from the time I confessed to her, then I looked a little more and walked away.

There are only two poisonous points that I personally think: ① The intelligence of the system that can talk, it is inevitable to use the system as a golden finger, but being able to talk is actually very redundant, and the protagonist's system does not have many functions, just let him explore it by himself, and he only spoke for one chapter, and did not talk about it again, which is completely redundant; ② Ten million reputations restore the body, the role of reputation It's better to be more pure, just to open new icons, and the body recovery can be set to slowly recover after the system is turned on. Anyway, 10 million reputations are enough to copy two or three novels, and 10 million recovery is too much. It feels like the system is controlling the protagonist. Given the author's family background at the time, he would actively use the system to copy novels without this setting to push him.

To be honest, if there weren't these women, the main character would have started a business or written a novel. It would have been a good read. Unfortunately, this book was ruined by a few women. I wanted to vomit after reading these women.

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, just start dating and then write! No way? No way? Are there still single people writing novels and romantic dramas now?

I don't care if there is only one female protagonist. Rich people only have one female protagonist. It's gross.

Brother, please stop writing about your girlfriend, it's really poisonous. If you have a single heroine, it will be more vicious. What if you have multiple heroines? I feel like you can't write it. Other than this, everything else is pretty good.

This book is a failure in its emotional scenes

It's a street-level work, with all kinds of women licking men, a disgusting bunch. A lot of money was obtained by following the trick of the Crooked Dragon King

You are stupid. You are asking for boredom if you still write about working as a host. It is not good to just recover and skyrocket. It costs 10 million per year. Don't you feel uncomfortable reading it yourself?

After reading Chapter 50, I felt weird. It was outrageous that there were so many women. Zhou Xiaxia became his girlfriend for no reason.

I didn't say that I won't let the protagonist write songs. One or two songs are enough. Now we have a third song. Is it interesting for the protagonist to be a tool man?

I follow it every day, but now I feel a little bored after watching it. There is no clear line in the career, and the emotional scenes are awkward to watch. In fact, you might as well let Cinnabar Moles be the heroine from the beginning. The harem story is about taking care of the kidneys and not the heart. A harem is not like a harem. Why. It feels so uncomfortable😣

Just write as much as you can and a bunch of women show up.

I haven't read it yet, but I read in the comments section that it's said to be a scumbag, and I'd like to know what kind of person it is? One is to hang them, and the other is to rotate at the speed of light, that is, after playing with one, change to another. What kind of scumbag is this? Of course there is another way: I eat the rice in the bowl, look at the dishes on the table, think about the soup in the pot, and then make a reservation for tomorrow's Manchu-Han Banquet

Garbage system. In the first place, pig feet do not need a system. Because of the system, the body is in a wheelchair. Even if no compensation is given, it still needs 10 million to recover? Isn't it a complete recovery? Need 10 million reputation every year? I'm convinced. This is a setting written by a retarded author. No salary is given. Instead, the wage earner needs to pay the boss every year. The author advises you to quickly go into the factory to make screws.

If you write too much mindless nonsense, you won't be able to turn back into a normal person all of a sudden, right? After all, he is a level 5 author. The first three chapters persuade him to quit.

In which chapter are there no women? The boss marked it so I can read it again. After reading more than fifty chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. I had a lot of green tea, but I was still writing vigorously.

The author himself doesn't understand this line of work. It's very difficult.

You don't want to cool it down, why don't you have any recommendations?

I suggest the author write the next book faster. It is indeed difficult to have multiple female protagonists.

Why can't we just be single-minded? Without a woman, it would be quicker to draw the sword.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~