I Have a Wealth Gathering Array

Book Review So far, the writing is quite good, but the protagonist relies too much on gold fingers and does not pay attention to cultivating talents who are loyal to him. Now his people are retained by high salaries, so others can poach them with higher salaries. Now they have been poached by competitors several times. Haven't found the problem yet? Sales are also supported by the attributes of Gold Finger. The biggest hidden danger of Tianyun now is that there are not many talents who are loyal to themselves. Talent is the most important foundation. Where are the most talented people - schools? The university that the protagonist attends now is Tianyun's greatest heritage. There are not many universities but there are many talents. The protagonist should increase cooperation with the school, such as providing financial aid to poor students, providing internships and jobs, etc. But the protagonist did choose to keep a low profile and hide himself, and I was speechless.

The idea is really good, but it's a pity that it's ruined by three points: 1. The pretense and slap in the face are too blunt, and the whole process is about trying to advance before suppressing, which is boring; 2. There are too many supporting roles, and they crazily stuff relatives, friends and classmates into their own companies. , And everyone will have a slap in the face plot; 3. The subsequent career line is distorted. The early career line was really good and had a sense of reality. Later, after the battle between Jinling and Hanlu, it began to collapse a bit, and the American line was completely distorted. Not to mention that American brands are all OEMs in China, it is completely unreasonable for the protagonist to go to the United States to acquire clothing factories; also, employees in American clothing factories are not easy to resign. Fuyao Glass and Foxconn have suffered losses from labor unions. In fact, the American line can definitely go the fast fashion route. Shein is also a domestic brand. It has made its way in North America by relying on the low cost of domestic factories and fast fashion. It perfectly fits the protagonist.

①First of all Although I personally have not read many urban novels about business, I have read a lot of urban novels and read a lot of books. The common feature of all popular books is that their beginnings are very exciting and can catch the readers' attention at once. But with all due respect, the beginning of your book is a bit bland and even cliché, and it cannot arouse the readers' interest at all. Especially the choice of system flow, the system has been written badly, especially the previous urban literature, which was basically system literature. It can be said that many people are tired of it. It doesn't mean that you can't write a system, it just means that the author does not write it very well. This system gives me the feeling that the protagonist will rely more on it. But the current environment of urban literature is that more emphasis is placed on the characters themselves. Therefore, the existence of this beginning and system is a big poison to some picky readers, and it is easy to dissuade them. (There is also an introduction. To put it nicely, it is a retro style. To put it poorly, you, the author, have not kept up with the times. It is too straightforward, so straightforward that people can tell what the whole book is about at a glance. I really have no desire to read it...) ②Secondly As for the emotional line, to be honest, the emotional line in the first half is actually pretty good. Although it is a bit cliche for me, it is still quite satisfactory. But the subsequent breakup left me feeling a bit hard to explain. Admittedly, this is a very real problem. However, you have obviously developed to the point of becoming lovers. As a result, there was a sudden breakup plot, which was very sudden and abrupt... With no foreshadowing at all. This is pretty good. For most readers, they read urban literature largely because they want to make up for the shortcomings of life through novels. After all, urban literature is closest to our lives, and many people have high requirements for emotional lines. This breakup plot is a very poisonous point for many readers, because you have obviously developed very well before, but suddenly break up. No one can bear it (I can't stand it anyway), and it is really difficult to persuade you to quit. ③Furthermore As for the plot problem, the business plot of this book is still very good, but the problems with other plots are not small. The whole book, all the plots seem to be about how to make money, make money, make money. Even the love line serves the theme of making money. There is nothing wrong with it. After all, a book must have a theme and all the plots should be written around it. But if it is just about making money, it would be a bit cliché and would not meet the needs of many readers. After all, the needs of readers are becoming more and more diversified now. It is not just about having fun, but also preferably having a certain depth. More importantly, for urban literature. The emotional line must be written well, unless you are writing without a heroine. After all, the emotional line in most urban novels can promote the development of the plot, but as I said above, there are certain problems with the emotional line. The author should not only write about the plot of business, but should develop more things around this theme. Otherwise, the content will be too single and not many people will read it. ④Finally My personal attitude is relatively neutral regarding the golden finger of Jucai Zhen. But I still prefer the author, who should downplay the existence of the Wealth Gathering Formation, because many business articles now emphasize that the protagonist has to work hard on his own, but some authors write protagonists who rely too much on the Wealth Gathering Formation, which I feel is not good. Because there are fewer and fewer golden fingers in urban literature nowadays, and they pay more attention to the shaping of the characters themselves, and they are more relevant to real life, so I hope that the author can use less pen and ink to write about the wealth gathering formation, and can use more pen and ink to describe the protagonist's ability. Finally, to summarize, this book is actually good as a management and business article, but it is not an excellent urban article. Maybe what I said is a bit exaggerated, but I am always straightforward and not good at using tactful words. Please be more considerate of me. I hope the author can consider my suggestions. After all, if a book is to be written well, it requires the joint efforts of the author and the readers. I wish the work will get better and better!

[Book Review] Keynote: The book is a good book and worth reading. But there are several points in my feeling: 1. Emotional line. The relationship with Xiao Lan was too frustrating. In addition, if there are not many female protagonists, don't describe too much about other women's feelings for the male protagonist. If you don't accept it after describing so much, the protagonist's mentality will probably take a long time to develop. Let's see what the author writes later. 2. Plot rhythm and golden fingers. Based on the fact that there are only a few wealth-gathering formations per month now, it will probably take a long time to spread throughout the province, the country, and the world and become a globally renowned brand. And according to the effect of the existing wealth gathering array, waiting for the level 3 wealth gathering array to come out will only expand the store area and increase turnover. Numbers games are of little significance. It seems that we can consider that the three-level wealth gathering array has multiple engraving functions (it can only be limited to one production line or one form). It is arranged in the factory and each piece of clothing is engraved with a (logo). When consumers see it, it will have an effect, thus developing rapidly through the Internet. If you feel that the Internet is too fast, you can also restrict level 3 to be effective offline, and level 4 to be effective online.

After reading dozens of chapters, let me briefly comment. The male protagonist is not like the male protagonists in other novels who hide and tuck in, and do not give any benefits to relatives, or relatives beat him up, which is a plus point. The male protagonist's relatives can directly lend him 100,000 yuan. Even if he later learns that the male protagonist has made money and wants it back, it is still a show of kindness. After all, in reality, many people borrow money without repaying it. Next is what I think is bad 1. High school life is so stressful, and with the teacher watching, how could it be possible for small actions to be so obvious? And it is obvious that this part is foreshadowing the subsequent face-slapping session. You can guess the subsequent routine at a glance, and the male protagonist's situation at the time can even guess where he will start. It is suggested that it is better to change it to university, as the logic is smoother. 2. The primary and secondary relationship between the system and the male protagonist. Is it people-centered or system-centered? The system only provides help, but the essence lies in the people. The system is very powerful, but it also causes the male protagonist to not grow. The system can come and go naturally. Why don't we really improve our own capabilities to prevent this situation? Even if you mention it once, that's fine. Moreover, the system is so overwhelming that it gives the impression that a different person would be fine as long as there is a system, and he might even be able to do a better job than the male protagonist. I hope to write about the growth of the male protagonist and make people feel that even if the system is lost, the male protagonist can't live a better life, but at least he can keep the family fortune. 3. Try to reduce the number of people present. Just write one or two relatives or something. There is no need to cover everything. Describing one or two in depth will make the image more three-dimensional. 4 The author should try his best to check some information when writing something. Some bugs can be avoided. Okay, that's all for now, I hope the author's works will get better and better

Come on, it's well written and interesting to read. Goldfinger now controls the rhythm very well. The protagonist begins to exert his own strength and realizes that Goldfinger is not omnipotent. This change has improved the overall level. It is no longer just a cool article, but has become a trend of inspirational articles. But the protagonist lacks some capable partners. It is appropriate to add some new subordinates or entrepreneurial partners to the protagonist. One person is poor. Multiple characters that can complement the protagonist will also help the plot unfold. Just be careful not to get the new characters involved in the protagonist's emotional line, as this can easily lead to poisonous points.

The title of the book is very good. I guess this is the dream of many people. I just have a small question. It feels weird to use a wealth-gathering array to describe it. Of course, I didn't think of a better one. I suffered the loss of being uneducated! 😭I can't make any suggestions even if I want to. The content of the article is quite good. It gives a sense of the historical background and is a good source of information. I personally find the emotional line a bit confusing. Of course, the protagonist is too young and cannot handle emotional issues as well as Aquaman. I suggest that the emotional line be appropriately diluted to increase the reader's sense of satisfaction. Wait until the protagonist matures before starting a serious relationship, which will feel smoother. My personal favorite plot is probably like this. A pure love in high school, without the impulse of adolescence, without the practical problems of marriage. If a breakup scene is arranged, it is also because of real conditions such as graduation and moving. The memories are sour and sweet, and I feel more comfortable.

The author's conscience is very bad. Later, when he purchased the system fragments, the highest one was only one million, and the two in the early stage were only tens of thousands. Let me go, he is really a profiteer. Is this really a good conscience? Aren't you afraid of retribution?

This book makes me itchy to death

Book card: Book title: "I Have a Wealth Gathering Array" Author: Polar Wind Blade Category: Urban Number of words: ten chapters One sentence summary: A novel that is refreshing and refreshing Story review: I will test the novel, where can I find good books. Hello everyone, I am Jiang Liuer, an ordinary salted fish book friend. Closer to home, what I bring to you today is a new book with a few hundred thousand words that has been put into the library with selected pages. The author found this book in the new book library. I never had time to read it. Suddenly I saw an activity in the book club, so I clicked in and took a look. I haven't read much, but I still want to analyze it from the title introduction, plot characters, and story structure. First of all, the title of the book summarizes the story directly. The title of the book can help readers understand more directly and intuitively what story the author wants to tell. As for the introduction, at first I didn't understand what the author was saying. I just thought that the author was just echoing the title of the book and wrote such an introduction. When I finished reading the story, I realized that the author had written out the background of the story and the causes of the causal relationship in the story. The reason for this, I think, is that the author wanted to use the introduction to judge whether the book is worth reading, just like the title of the book, so as to attract readers. As for the plot, I haven't read much, only about ten chapters, but there are still a lot of things I want to say and see. First of all, this book is a pure urban novel, yes! You read it right, as the title of the book says, it is a refreshing book, and it is a refreshing book with a system. How cool is this article? The author is very responsible in telling you that it is a bad street. So why would the author want to try it now that it's already so bad? Because it's easy to get. So based on the above two points, let's look at the plot of this book. First of all, this book does not place the story in a parallel world or in the decades of the last century like other books. Instead, it places the story in the current year of 2022. Are you surprised? Is it surprising? This book has 40 words, almost half a million words, but the story is set in 2022. Of course, this is not the most surprising thing. The most surprising thing is that the author asked the protagonist to help the milk tea shop where he works to increase profits in order to test the effect of the system? Author, for this one act, please tell me where your home is. I really want to send you a banner. What a great benefactor of the 21st century! Excellent social and animal cultivation! This pattern is not comparable to ordinary people. Of course, this is not over yet. In order to promote the plot, the author asked the protagonist to spend more than 9,000 to buy lottery tickets, but the lottery boss was only slightly suspicious. In this plot, I will also give you the honorary title of the fattest leek. The author would like to ask if you have ever bought a lottery ticket? Do you know what's going on at the lottery station? Nearly 10,000 yuan for a minor? Brother, you could spend a day at a lottery station and write a plot like this. There is also the lottery thing, retest! Brother! Did you think it was a single choice? How many numbers did you win? Does the lottery center eat dry food? As for receiving the award, you actually went to receive it yourself? ! You are awesome! No matter how many times I read the awards report, I would never write it like this. As for the later part of opening a store, I can already sell my house. Do you know, author? I spent 10,000 yuan to buy a lottery ticket, and then I won a big prize, so I sold a shop without consulting my parents. 2022! This is not the late 1990s! Author, you figured it out! You don't really think these things are easy, do you? Even if you are doing it for the sake of the plot, you still have to talk about logic, right? How are you? The whole process was done by a mother-in-law, and the laws are so perfect now that you, a high school student, can easily open a store? The author gives you a suggestion, go to the judicial institution to understand how troublesome this process is. Open a store just open a store, this system is not perfect. Of course, if you throw away the logic, this book is indeed an enjoyable book, very enjoyable. But this is just a cool article, and it can only be a cool article. If you look at it from the perspective of refreshing writing, what the author said above in this book is indeed not a poisonous point, but this is the starting point. If this kind of writing wants to become popular, you might as well go back in time and start a business again. As for why the author did not continue reading, firstly, it is because it is unnecessary. After all, it is a refreshing novel structure. If you look at the beginning, you will understand how the subsequent plot will develop. If this kind of book does not follow logic, then it will be as interesting as it is imaginative, but its shortcomings are also obvious. The author's imaginative thinking determines the performance of the work. The second one is because I just took the time to read it. It's OK to have a rough look and understand what it is. I'll read it carefully when I have time. After talking about the plot, let's talk about the characters. As for the characters, the author's portrayal is still qualified. They are not flesh and blood, but the characteristics of the characters are very obvious. As the plot progresses later, don't forget the characterization, the basic characters can stand up. But this is only what the author expects. Whether the author can write it or not depends on how the author writes it. As for the story, this story is a good article, so there is no need to talk about logic and structure. Just follow the author's ideas. As for this story, I still like it very much. It only takes a few minutes for me to read from the first chapter to the tenth chapter, which shows that the effect of this book is achieved. If you are tired of reading rigorous texts, it is better to read this book to change your mind. However, in the end, I still want to say that with the current story on this platform, it is really difficult to get ahead. Of course, everyone has their own ambitions. Maybe the author overthought it and ended up not being enough. I wish the author can achieve the results he had in mind when he wrote the book. Finally, I wish the author that this book will be a big hit, so go for it. Okay, I am an amateur book reviewer and an ordinary salted fish user Jiang Liuer. Goodbye everyone.

Don't write about shares randomly, the author should check more information. As soon as there are some problems with the stock, most of the people will be forced to quit.

I have a question. Why is a clothing chain brand with over 10,000 employees and a monthly revenue of 100 million across three provinces only worth a few hundred million? And all the stores are purchased. The fixed assets are more than this price. The valuation is at least one billion, and the net worth has been over 100 million. It is so speechless.

After reading five chapters, I was a little confused. Before turning it on, it was 10430, but after turning it on, it changed to 430. When I bought a lottery ticket, I was told that the system deducted 10,000 from my pocket money, but it didn't deduct it. Where did you get your pocket money? Then why does the system not deduct your 10,000 yuan if you have to work part-time to save 10,000 yuan? If you have money and need to work to earn money to activate it, should you write it down? What is the logic of spending 10,000 yuan to buy lottery tickets when opening a store? If you want to try your luck but don't know how much you won, shouldn't you buy it for a few yuan or dozens of yuan? People who went to elementary school with RMB 10,000 wouldn't do this. If they bought RMB 10,000 lottery tickets, they would write the single retest. Then they would directly win the second prize of 150,000. The single bet of 5,000 cannot be the second prize for one bet. Five yuan must be a lot. If you retest, it will be more. Can't you check the information if you don't understand lottery? I saw a short video where I selected more than 10,000 and won about 5,000, which were all small prizes of 5-200. If you hit 10,000, you will win one and two prizes. You don't write anything and everything depends on the reader's imagination? Then just send the outline.

The first part is okay, but the second part is a lot watery. I've written hundreds of chapters, and I'm just selling clothes. The emotional scenes are a mess, and the main character is like a monk. He has an ascetic mind. After making so much money, he doesn't enjoy or consume. He's just a machine. People, some people are okay if they pretend to be once or twice, but they get disgusted if they keep pretending. There is no heroine now. You have to be sure when you write about innocence. There is also a reason for writing about harem. The subsequent writing is too pale, there is no explosive point, there is no freshness, it just keeps copying.

This wealth-gathering array is so good. If you don't have capital in the early stage, you can engage in clothing. If you have money, you can engage in medical care, engage in technology, fight against European and American capital, and impose sanctions on Europe and the United States. Many people will feel involved. However, the author repeatedly deviates from the theme, including the seven deadly sins of recognizing relatives and dispersing wealth, and also time travel. Brother, yours is a business article plus a cool article. You went to create a fantasy copy. Many people were attracted by reading the business article in the early stage!

Xiao Lan. One at the beginning. Facing more than one billion capital. In the eyes of everyone, you are bound to lose. If you are willing to spend your 300,000 yuan in savings, just let him go like this. If you don't write more female protagonists. Don't write so affectionately. When the male protagonist is attracted to the female protagonist. Who are you disgusting with? If you can't write, don't write.

I don't quite understand why you think this way in your article. My roommates only make their own money and often don't live in the dormitory. They are considered classmates at best. I don't have any feelings at the beginning of school. I don't know why I want to hide it from them in the name of something. I don't want my feelings to deteriorate... I just want to ask, what feelings do you have? How would you feel about a classmate you just met a few days ago? Are your brain circuits different from ours, or are my brain circuits different from yours?

I didn't read it, but I read the introduction. In one sentence, it is impossible to win big prizes in China Lottery, they are all won by insiders.

Sweat, it's so annoying. The plot is getting weaker and weaker, and the marriage recognition has come out. Why do we need to do something? Why do we need supporting characters to promote the plot? If the pig's feet are inserted into that line, we can be the leader of that line. It is a normal business competition. If you really don't know how to write, then do something. Create all kinds of luxury goods yourself. You can write if you want to compete with big brands.

What I hate the most is dog-licking, and being so humble for women.

I retreated. To be honest, the more I watched, the more annoying I became, especially since the protagonist was still in college and had a lot of classmates, and the protagonist had broken up with that Xiao Lan. Why was he having an affair with her? Will he marry her in the future? Why didn't the protagonist see Xiao Lan liking the protagonist when he didn't have a golden finger? Moreover, if the protagonist wants to really become bigger and stronger, the Xiao Lan family really cannot help the protagonist if he marries a wife, especially in various government departments, the Xiao Lan family is really useless. Goodbye author

It feels like it's not interesting anymore. Why do you think so much about the wealth gathering array? It is better to worry about when you will die every day than to worry about it in the future.

It's a bit confusing to go to the American version of a clothing factory. Aren't most of the light industrial factories in the United States built in Southeast Asia? It would be more expensive to set up a clothing factory in the United States than in China plus shipping costs.

The front is fine, but it's very poisonous here. Can't we just keep it closed for a few days and renovate a new store while it's open? Do you have to close the door and then pretend to be slapped in the face? What do you gain by closing the door? You got nothing? It also makes existing customers lose confidence and loses customers for a few days. What can you prove even if you reopen the door?

The running account is too routine. Selling clothes in the United States is also a routine. Oh my god, Americans have come to China to do OEM work.

If you can't write about women, don't write about it! So disgusting! 😃 Wherever the protagonist goes, women like him? That one is blue! If I become a heroine, I will be with the protagonist from now on! It's the most poisonous and disgusting thing! It's better to let the squad leader be with the protagonist! I have the ability and my family background is clean! How much better than that disgusting blue family 🤝

Md How many relatives have you packed into your company? It would be amazing if this company B didn't go bankrupt.

The author probably doesn't have much social experience, so there's no point in giving you a system.

It has been five years since I read genuine novels on the Qidian Chinese website. So far, I have subscribed to all the novels of "Polar Wind Blade". The fan value of the completed novel has not been less than 50,000 fans. I was the first to get the fan title of "Endless Wind Blade". . . To say too much is nonsense, let's talk about your expectations for Wind Blade. No matter what others think, I still like Feng Ren's writing style, but why is the author still not famous or the novels he wrote are not famous? My opinion is (it only represents my personal opinion, don't blame me if I am wrong): There is too little communication with fans. I have read a lot of novels, and some authors will even patiently reply to this chapter or all positive suggestions and posts. Communication with the fan group is also very important. If nothing else, and if you are a die-hard fan, giving away a physical book signed by the author is not too much, right? The most important thing is that there are too few activities? The previous few books had no moderators, let alone activities, and their popularity was too low. Nowadays, there are many popular activities such as voting for monthly votes to reward starting points, and voting for monthly votes to give fans titles. . . Since the beautiful moderator Tongyun now manages the book review area and holds various activities, the book review area is obviously much more active than before. I have to say that all your novels, Feng Ren, have a common problem. One chapter is only about 2,000 words. If there are too few chapters, it will be gone before you can get enough of it. I hope that the number of words in each chapter can be a little more in the future. Okay, whether it's a suggestion or a complaint, I will still subscribe to all Feng Ren's novels in full as always. I hope that one day Feng Ren's novels will be published in physical books. Remember to mail a set of signed physical books to your old fans. Finally, I wish Ji Fengren to become a great writer soon, write better and better novels, and have more and more fans.

Really, pretending to slap someone in the face is too blunt and persistent! Basically, the whole article is just pretending to be a slap in the face.