I Upgrade My Martial Arts Skills in the World of Cultivating Immortals

Since killing people gives you skill points, the protagonist still doesn't have enough imagination. He has to ask others to help in gang fights every time to get skill points from killing people. Still not positive enough. The writing is still tender. . .

The writing is very good, but the plot progresses too slowly. There is a murderer in Qianfang City, an unknown woman who wants to poison him every day, and a tyrannical immortal. There is no sense of security in this environment. He must be trying to improve his strength. Moreover, the protagonist has a golden finger. He can only upgrade by killing people, and he has also obtained the identity of a killer. He still slowly increases his strength every day. It is a bit unreasonable no matter how you look at it. If you don't understand human nature, the revenge of killing your son is not something ordinary people can bear. Although the book explains that the child is an illegitimate child, it seems that there is no need for revenge, but the protagonist does not know that there is such an awesome enemy at this time, and he can't even sleep well. Think about it for yourself that your son was killed by someone, and the other person is just a little Luo Luo. Even if the other person has a background, you are also one of the big guys. Can't you just assassinate him directly? The writing is very good, but the understanding of human nature is a bit lacking. Otherwise, this book would definitely be in the fairy grass series.

As soon as the patient appeared, he knew what the author was going to fart. It was really cliche. Everyone knows how to sew up wounds, right? His intestines had come out, and the skin on his stomach was not just one layer, but several. It had to be sewed layer by layer. You can survive with just a few stitches.

Laughing to death, those who kill are not good people, and those who don't kill are good people?

The author is very good. The success of the three golden chapters turned from golden to rubbish in the third chapter!

The protagonist wants to become stronger, but only by killing people can he become stronger. The most taboo thing about this is that it involves too many emotions, and he takes in a woman who is not a good person without knowing the details. I am really not afraid of death, and I am speechless.

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 46. Has the author completely let himself go? A beautiful woman next door poisons the protagonist. The protagonist only thinks about his lower body. What does he want to do? (눈_눈) If you mention that you have murderous intentions towards this woman, I will watch it

Accepting younger sister and Ma Gan is a bad point. There are too many dialogues, which lowers the quality of the book. The first chapter clearly introduces the general background of the book, the world of martial arts, killing people without giving reasons, and weakness is the original sin. I also accepted a younger sister, Ma Gan, and deliberately leaked money on the street. I was deliberately indecisive, inconsistent with the beginning, and illogical. I decisively abandoned the book and left.

This is the slowest development I've ever seen in a JiaDianliu novel. This JiaDian flow novel is of no use!

The logic is not smooth, and the protagonist is deliberately made stupid in order to suppress the protagonist, which is not a good article. The subject matter and writing style are both very good.

It's normal that this book is not popular. The first few dozen chapters have the flavor of Yu Changsheng, but there is a reason why people have six to seven thousand people. You suddenly introduced immortals, but the protagonist's strength at this time is a guy who is not even a third-rate warrior. Full, in the end, the female neighbor killed her directly, poisoned her repeatedly, and used her good words as a licker And the matter was not explained clearly. A triumphant master of immortal martial arts was also a supreme cultivator, but she was afraid of a martial arts master.

After reading Chapter 47, I finally understood why not many people watched. The strength can be improved but not improved. Waiting until someone hurts to add points. From the second molt to the third molt, why not be killed directly (too late to click on the extra point). Knowing that the food sent by others is poisonous, if he is afraid that he will not be able to beat the woman named Pan, the protagonist has a reason to refuse: I have just met and send you good wine and food every day, no reward and no reward. All in all, IQ is in arrears.

The protagonist himself can hardly survive, and he also brings a little girl with him. There is something wrong with him.

Hey, I'm just a prodigal. I just want to level up slowly. I also want to be a nanny. I just want to play. Anyway, I'm the protagonist 🙂

Nowadays, novels are prepared with tens of millions of words, but after a long time, no one reads them.

This way of writing... Oops, it's just a joke🙄

The writing is pretty good, but the plot is too slow. To be honest, this is just a map of a novice village, which is long enough, and the enemy is really weird. I wrote so much about it. No matter how the protagonist hides it, no matter how ordinary the killing method is, he can be found. Moreover, the enemy is linked to the immortal sect. Can't it be pulled from other lines? Just a little illegitimate child is involved in cultivating immortals. Accepted

A cultivator can fly in the sky, a warrior can run on the ground, or fly a kite without being injured.

I would like to ask which groups the author has submitted to, and which editor, can you tell me?

Yes, come on, come on, come on!

The Yakuza protagonist's route will inevitably be more related to strength and fierceness. After all, it is horizontal training. In terms of weapons, it is either heavy weapons such as axes or directly specializes in boxing and uses thicker and harder gloves.

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Character Building, Everyone is welcome to come up with ideas for characters, names, kung fu, magic, etc., Which can be adopted if necessary.